story of remix after 15 years(updated 97) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
hey guys i had written the next part but my comp got hung soo plz waity for some more time i will write the maxt part today only. bare wid me and forgive me 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
its ok tia....we are all waiting for the next part....

take ur time........but do post it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43



U ROCK
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
hey guys sorry u had to wait i m now continuing the story hope u like it
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as the light turned on ashi and yuvi saw tia and ranver hugging, they asked them wat was happening but both denied about any thing.

ashi to yuvi: mujhe apna plan chala na hi parega

yuvi: ok kya karana haoga bolo

ashi: tum ek kam karo bahar jao

yuvi: kyun?????

ashi: ja kehe rahi hoon wahi karo

yuvi: ok baba thick hain

ashi: tum bahar jake mera intezar karna main 2 minet main ajaungi

yuvi: thick (now turnning towards ranver ) ranveer main 2 minet main a raha hoon

ranveer: kaha ja rahe hain ap bana????

yuvi: ek kam hain 5 minete main ajaunga

ranveer: thick hain
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as yuvi stepped out
tia: ashi tum an niel aur niki ko bol dena ki mujhe masi na bulaye

ranveer: kyun tia?????ap kya abhi bhi papaki princess bani rehna chati hain

ashi: hey yaar good joke šŸ˜† 😃 😃

tia: oh puhleez tia ko mazak pasand nahin

ashi: oops!!!! tia ko mazak pasand nahin 😃 😃
😃

tia stood up: main chali jaungi

ranveer: tia hum to sirf mazak kar rahe the ap naraz mat hoiye

tia again sat down: thick hain par ayinda se eesa mat karna

after some times ashi realised that yuvi was waiting for her outside.she told ranveer

ashi: yeh yuvi kaha geya main dekhfe ati hoon

ranvver: main dekhke ata hoon

ashi: nahin tum bethoooo main ja rahi hoon
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as ashi went out yuvi's reactions

yuvi: (furiously) ashi tum ne kaha tha ke tum 2 minet main bahar a rahe hoo aur itni ddeer

ashi: soorry main bhul gayi thi maaf kar dooooo plzzzzz 😃

yuvi: acha thick hain batao kya karna hain

ashi: haan suno woh jo main tumhe jo cd lane kaha tha laye hoooooo

yuvi: kon saaaa

ashi: apne band ka pehla wala cd

yuvi: haan wohh main laya hoon lekinnnnnnnnn

ashi: lekin kya???????

yuvi: main woh ranveer ke ghar main chor aya

ashi: shit agar ek kam tumse hota too

yuvi: acha main lata hoon

ashi: kyase????

yuvi: main kitcen ke khirki se jaunga

ashi: ja paoge na

yuvi: haan baba

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yuvi entered the house and took the cd quitely.he saw ranveer and tia sitting together but no one talked

he came out.

ashi: lee ayeee??????????

yuvi: yeh looo ab bataooooo kya karna hain

ashi: acha tum wah afuse box ke waha jayo aur light ka plug nikal dooooooo

yuvi : kya, kyese ,kyun.

ashi: kyun fuse karna bhool gaye kya (wikedly)

yuvi: kya??????

ashi: yaad nahin college main tum jaab mere kamre main ate the to tum light fuse kar ke hi ate the

yuvi: yaad mat dilayo woh haseen pal ab kaha milte hain woh

ashi: kya?????

yuvi: kuch nahin

ashi: jayoooooooooooooo na uffffffffff

yuvi: ja raha hoon na dhakka kyun de rahi hoo??????

ashi: acha baba jaaoooooooooooo

yuvi went there nad fused the light of ranveer's house
and from inside ashot came out like RANVEERRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

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THIS WAS THE END HOPE TO WRITE THE NEXT PART SOON

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
pllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz give ur comments on it 😳 😳
tia 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
good but pleazzzzzzzzz continue sooon and add more of Tia-Ranveer's romantic part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
nice one tia.....can imagine the scene where v goes to ashi's hostel and fuses off the light šŸ˜†

plz continue soon

and thanx for keeping my request abt uv-ashi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
every one thankxxxxxxx for ur comments plzzzz wait for one more day and i will write the next part is it ok????????? hope fuly šŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
not hopefully.....say surely and odnt make me wait 4 longer.....ok
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
tia yaar u are amazing..2 gooooood šŸ‘ this is one fanfic im folwing kyunki i don usually read fanfic..urs it the bst!

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