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ritwika

@tia_5

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Posted: 19 years ago

#51

thank u every body i will write it jet ssomnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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tia
bye 😃

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megha

@teddylovessme

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Posted: 19 years ago

#52

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont luved it can't wait

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ritwika

@tia_5

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Posted: 19 years ago

#53

guys writing the next part of the story
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as the shout came in from ranveer's house,yuvi and ashi were very curious to no what was happening inside.they wnt to the nearest window and saw...............

tia: mujhe bohot dar lagraha hain plzzz mujhe chordke mat jao abhi

ranveer: ek minute tia main andar see ek ke liye aa raha hoon.

tia: kahan ja rahe hoo??????

ranveer: ek candle lanneeeeee

tia: jaldi ana mujhe bohot daar lagra ha hain

ranveer: only 2 mins

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yuvi: ashi iske bad kya hoga???????

ashi: jo hoga manzure khuda hogaaaaaaaa

yuvi: hahahahahaah nahin but seriously bataooo na

ashi: are ruko pehle ranveer ko toh andar see ane doo

yuvi: phir??????

ashi: phir dekhna mera kamal
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tia:kya hua ranveer candke nahin mili agar mil gayi hoo toh plzzzzzz bahar ayoo tia ko bohot dar lag raha hain

ranver: nahin mil gayi hain coming

then ranveer came out with a sweet little pink candle in his hand
he placed ir on the table

ranveer: main ek bar dekhke ata hoon ke bar bar yeh bijli kyun jarahhi hhain

tia caught ranvveer's hand and said: puhleez kahin mat jaaayoooooo

ranveer: ok fine thick hain
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ashi: yuvi ab ek kaam karo woh joo maine waha cd player aur cd rakhha hain plzzzz use leke aaayoooooo

yuvi: ok

yuvi: eh loo lekin ise karogi kyaaaaaa?????????????

ashi: dekhte jayo

ashi puts on the track of ranveer and tia najane kyase
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both tia and ranveer gets shocked . then after two mins rqanveeeer looked into tia's eyes and vice versa .
as they looked tia and ranveer ranveer then confessed his live for tia

ranveer: tia mujhe tumse ek bat keh na tha

tia: kyaaaa

ranveer:(v. nervously) I LOVE U

tia: what(sweetly)

ranveer: haan i always wanted to tell u tjis but could never

tia: aj main bhi ghar se than ke ayi thi ke tumhe keh dungi keee

ranvveer: keeee

tia: kee main tumse pyaar karti hoon .I LOVE U TOOOOOOO

ranvveer and tia then hugged toghether.ranvver said

ranveer: 1 min

tia: kya hua

ranveer: wait and watch

ranveer returned with a ring in his hand.
ranveer: (offering the ring ti tia) tia will u marry me

tia: with a littlle tear in her eyes said: yes very softly
ranvveer gave the ring to her and they both hugged
as they hugged the lights turned on and yuvi and ashi came in.

yuvi: congratulations both of u

ranvver: thankxxxx but how did u know?????? mujhe guess karne doo, yani kiiiiiiiiiiii

ashi: haa hum dono hi the woh jo yeh sab kar raha tha.hum dono ne light fuse ki aur gana bajaya

ranveer: thank u both very much tum hare waj he see hum do mil gaye

tia: yah same here

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guys this was the end of this part but not off the fic. in the next part it will be said what happend the next day and also abt. ia and ranveer's marriage.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hoke in for that .