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Posted: 19 years ago
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the 3rd part continuation

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tia gets the sari and hands it over to soniya. soniya helps tia wearing the sari. tia ia looking fantabulous. she is actualy looking like princess of indian tale 😆 😆

soniya: u r looking very pretty, lekin ek bat mujhe abhi bhi samaj main ahin aieee.

tia: kya

soniya: ke tumhe ranveer ke ghar jaane ke liye sari pehene ki kya zarurat thi??? use impress kareana hain kya????

tia: (a bit shyly) tia use kyun impress karne lagi????

soniya : itni bhi bholi mat bano mujhe sab pata hain.

tia: kya pata hain apko

soniya: yehi ke tum ranveer se bohot pyaar karte hoo ur mujhe pata hain yeh pyaar school days se chala a raha hain

tia:(looking at soniya with a look which showed the love for ranveer)

tia: ap ne thick kaha lekin tia jab bhi ushe samne jati hain tia kuch bhi bol nahin pati hain.

soniya: kyun kya woh ek monster hain jo tumhe kha jaye ga?????

tia:(with a smile on her face) lekin tia use kya kahegi. jab bhi kuch kehne jati hoon mere pas shabd hi nahin hote hain, main bas use dekhti rahti hoon. aur kya pata agra woh inkar kar de to??

soniya: tia mere pas ayo aur yaha baatho. suno, ranveer jaise ladko ki aj kal bahot demand hain. agar kooi tumhara samna ranveer ko lekke chala jaye to tum kya karogi? isileyi kehe rahi hoon ke jayo aj is mauke ka faida uthao. aur haan main yeh janti hoon ke agar tum ranveer se baat karoge to woh tumhe na nahin karega kyun ki mujhe pata hain ki ranveer bhi tumse pyaar karta hain.

tia: tia try karegi thick hain

soniya: main pray karungi ki tum baat kr pao usse aur apni dil ki bat bol payo usse.

tia: thank u mamma.

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aashi comes over to tia's house to pick her up. she also comes there to drop her children to soniya

soniya: are mammam tum???

ashi: woh kyahain an mamma hum log sab ranveer ke ghar ja rahe the aur ghar main koi nahin tha to mujhe laga ke main neil aur nikki ko yaha chor jau

soniya: yeh to tum ne bohot hi acha kam kiya jo in dono ko yaha leke a gayi .(to the children) ayo nani nke paas a jayo bachho.

ashi: han jayo apni burhi nani ke pass jao

soniya: mammam tum mar khaogi abhi

ashi: acha woh timbo kaha hain abhi tak tyaar ho rahi hain kya?

soniya: haan woh RANVEER ke liye tyaar ho rahi hain .

aashi: achaaaaaaaaa

soniya: tum log jayo woh bad main ajaegi

ashi: ok ajo baby mamma ko ek kissy de do
mmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

ashi: thich hain ja rahi hoon lekin use jaldi bhej dena

soniya: thick hain bye n joy

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tia atlast got ready. as she was coming out of her room a voice called out massssssiiiiiiiiiiiii ii

tia: yeuuuuu yeh tia mko massiiiii kaun bula raha hain how taccky is it.

soniya: tia yeh neil aur nikki tumhe bula rahe the

tia: mamma ap plz unhe kehe di ji ye mujhe massi na bulaye balki tia hi bulaye

soniya: acha baba thick hain.

as tia was leaving she stopped to give a hug to the babies. she gave a hug to the babies as wall a ssoniya and went

soniya: best of luck tia

tia: thankz mamma

as tia was travelling in her car the whole way she only thought of ranveer.

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at last she reached her destination ranveer's house.

she went up and knocked on the door of ranveer

from inside someone showted : comingggggg
it was probably of ranveer's

ranveer came up to open the door . he opened the door and..........................................

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guys this was the end of my 4th part hope u will like it.
the next part is realy rocking sooooootune in for that. plz send in ur replies and comments on it. tab tak saach te rahoo age kya hoga???????? 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
omg its AMAZING...cnt think of nething else 2 say..wow.. 👏 me desperately waiting 4 the nxt bit...hurry up..don make me wait!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
ya plzzzzzz continue...u r tooo gud 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
u know what i really liked the story plzzzzzzz continuue 😆
teddylovessme thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast tia i can't wait for it
Edited by teddylovessme - 19 years ago
torsa thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#26
hi,
luvd it..it was toooooo gud!

hugs n kisses, 😊
Parachute. thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
puh-lease continue..QUICK..my patience is runnin out! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
hey guys plzz wait for some more time cause i m writting the next part in my diary . and for u all it has to be the best sooo sabra karo sbra ka fall meetha hota hain 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
hey guys i m wriing my next part chope u all like it if not plz tell me and if yes plz give ur comments ok
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the bell rang and ranveer opened the door it was tia who was standind in a light yelow sari. she was looking amazing.

ranveer was totaly stunned and couldnot belive that it was tia who was in a sari and was standing in front of him.
then their conversations.
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ranveer : kya yeh aap hain tia?????

tia: koi shaque??????

ranveer: nahin actualy apko kabhi sari main nahin dekha na isiliye

tia: kya tia buri lag rahi hain oh no abhi tia kya karegi kyase apna dress change karegi??????

ranveer : maine yeh kab kaha ke ap achi anhin lag rahi hain ap bohot achi lag rahi hain ek dum ek DULHAAN jaisi

tia: (lost in ranveer's eyes asked) sach?????

ranveer : bilkul

ashi: kon hain ranveer 5 minto se yaha kya kar rahe hoo??????

ranveer: tia hain

ashi: toh timbit ko bahar rakhna hain kya andar layoooooooooo

ranveer: haan , yaieh tia andar aiye ey

as tia entered the room the reaction of yuvi and ashi

yuvi: yeh kaun hain????? tia to nahin lagti hain aur tia kabhi sari ahin pehne gi

ranveer: kyun anhin pehen saktiiiii

tia: acha thick hain abhi yeh sab choro

ashi: kyun timbit?????????

tia:ese hi

ashi: wickedly said oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

in the meantime time the lites turned off it was a loadsheeding

the reactions

ashi: yuvi tum kaha hoo

yuvi : tumahare paas bathi hoon

ashi: mujhe pakro stupid dar lag raha hain

yuvi: (wickedly) greatttttttt 😆 😆

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tia and ranveer

as the light went off tia's reaction as ranveer was sitting next to him

tia: (holding ranver shirt ) ranveer mujhe andhere se bohot dar lagta hain plzz mujhe chord ke kahin mat jao plzzzzzz

ranveer : main yahi hoon kahi nahi jarahi hoon apko chorke

tia then looked up and realised that she was actauly hugging ranveer 😃 😃

achanak the light turned on

yuvi still cathching ashi tightly

ashi: yuvi baby light agayi hain ab to choro!!!!!!!!

yuvi: yeh loo char diya par kisi ne abtak kisi ko nahin chora

ashi: kisne?????

yuvi: woh dekho waha

ashi:(mouth wide open) wow hamari plan shuru kar ne se pehle hi succesful ho gayi

tia suddenly realising that the light had come back
she sprung out of ranveer's hand. even ranveer gota bit shy.

ashi: yeh saab kya ho raha tha?????

tai: kuch nahin woh actualy mujhe andhere se bohot dar lagta hain isiliyeeeeee

ranveer: haan isiliye

yuvi: tumhare bich aisa kuch to nahin hain an

tia: oh puhleez have u lost it??????

ranveer: yeh kya bat kar rahe hain ap?????

yuvi: kuch anhin choro

ashi to yuvi very softly lagta hain apna plan chala na hi parega

yuvi: yes u r right

ashi: i m alway right

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hey guys this was the end of my 5th part hope to write the next part soon plzzzzzzzzzz give ur comments
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
can't wait more please right soon

it is very nice

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