story of remix after 15 years(updated 97) - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
it's very nice 👏 👏
continue fast 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
nice but can i request u for sumthing plzzzzzzzzzz not in remix but atleast in imaginary stories ranveer-tia as husband wife plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys this is ritwika. here i m continuing the story. this is the 2nd part of story that i m writing.
due to all ur requests i have changed the profession of yuvi and ashi. yuvi is now a journalist and ashi own a call center of her own (got hte idea from india calling)

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this was the life of all the rocking guys and gals. one morning as always all the people went out on their work. yuvi to his news station ashi to her call centre ranveer to his office and tia steching some dresses for her upcoming fashion house organised bye her fashion house. as yuvi was working he gets a call from ashi .

yuvi: kya hua phone kyun kia??

ashi: are wah ek toh phone karo aur upar se daat bhi khoa not fare.

yuvi: acha baba gussa kyun ho rahi ho, kya bat hain batao?

ashi:ek kam karo na

yuvi: kya?

ashi:humari toh shadi ho gayi hain. kyun na hum thakur aur timbit ko bhi milade?

yuvi:not a bad idea, lekin kaise??????

ashi:mere pas ek plan hain

yuvi: kya, kya jaldi batao

ashi:aiste aiste thora sabra karo sabra ka fall meetha hota hain.

yuvi: acha baba ab bol bhi do

ashi:suno tum ranveer aur tia ko phone karo

yuvi: kyun?????

ashi: jo main kehe rahi ho woh kara

yuvi: acha thick hain

ashi:phone karke un dono ko bolo ke aaj sham ko ranveer ke ghar main ek mill rahe hain. ek chato si get together party hain.

yuvi: phir??

ashi:uske bad tum sab mujh par chordo


yuvi: par batao to tum kya karne wali hoo???

ashi: badme bataungi. acha suno apna band ka jo pehlka C.D tha na woh bhhi saat lelena thick hain

yuvi: par kyun

ashi: zyada questions mat puccho jo kehe rahi hoon woh karo ok

yuvi: thick hain love u bye

ashi: love u 2 bye

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yuvi calls tia


yuvi:hi tia kyasi ho????

tia: hi yuvi bohat achhi hoon aur tum??

yuvi: yuvi dude ko kaise hona chaihe ekdam rocking.

tia:ashi aur twins kaise hain?

yuvi: absolutely fine.

tia: acha phone kyun kiya?????

yuvi: ohhhhh haaaan yeh batane ke liye ke aj ranveer ke ghar main ek choti si get together hain aur tum arahi hi hooo.

tia: dekhungi

yuvi: no dekhungi fekungi u have to come and thats final.

tia: oh puhleez thick hain tum itne bol rahe ho toh main a jaungi

yuvi: thats like our tia

tia: bye

yuvi : bye se u there


after the phone was kept down Tia's reaction

oh tia's god plz help me. main ky a karun waha jau ke na jau, agar nahin gayi toh sab ko bura lagega aur agar gayi toh main ranveer ke saamne kaise kaise jaungi.
itne saal lo main hum log sirrf performances aaur meetings ke liye mile aur toh hum mitke hi nahi. agar uske mere samne dekhungi to rooh parungi kyun ki in 10 salo main uske liye mere pyaar aur baar gaya hain oh tia's god koi to rasta dikhao.


now yuvi calls ranveer

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this was my 2nd part hope you like it in the next parts its realy good and fuuny so stay tuned for that and plz send me reply on how u liked this part

thankz 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
lol 😆 😆 😆 ...gud 1 👏 ...remix section has awesome fan fics n games n everything 👏 ...bacho ka dimag ..hey bhagoo...padaii chhod k sab jagah lagta hai 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
👏 ...if dats not enough..d rest will come 2 u in private msg!!!

cheers!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continuation of the story-- part 3

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yuvi calls ranveer

yuvi: hi dude kaise hoo??????

ranveer: ham to bohot ache hain, aur aap kaise hain?? sab thick thak

yuvi: sab fit

ranveer: ashi, niel aur nikki (couldnt think of any other name 😆 😆 )

yuvi: sab bahut ache hain

ranveer: yuvi, phone kisliye kiye??

yuvi: ohh hah jo bollna tha wahi nahi bola. kya tum aj sham ko free hoo??

ranveer: oooohhhhhh yeh bat ap logo ke liye hum hamesha free hain

yuvi: great toh aaj sham ko main ashi auur tia tumhare ghar a rahe hain ekk choti si get together ke liye. thick hain na

ranveer: aap ashi aur kaun??? (suprisingly)

yuvi: main ashi aur tia sunai nahin deeta hain kya????

ranveer: aap logo ko mere ghar ane ke liye mujse permission lene ki koi zarurat nahin parenga ap log mujhe bina batayein a sakte hain.

yuvi: rocking toh aj sham ko hum log sab pohoch jayenge.

ranveer: thick hain bye

yuvi: ok bye


as the phone was kept down ranveer's reactions:

tia aj a rahi hain ghar main . aj unko hum thick 2 sal 8 mahine 22 ghante aur 15 minute bad milenge. lekin agra unke samne maine kuch galat kar dia toh?? main roz soxchta hoon ke ia ko batadunga use hum kitna pyaar karte hain par himatt hi nahin hoti. kya pata tia bhi same feel karti hoongi ya nahin.

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yuvi then calls ashi:

yuvi: ashi maine phone kar dia hain un dono ko.

ashi: wow good very very good.

yuvi: lekin batao to kya karne wali hoo.

ashi: jab ghar aoge tohhhi batayungi

yuvi: tuum gghar kab jaogi??/

ashi: yehi bas adhe ghante baad

yuvi: main bhi ajaun??/

ashi: kyun????

yuvi: tum hame bohot yaad aa rahi hoo is liye

ashi: bhul gaye ho kya ke tum do baccho ke bap ho??

yuvi: are yaar tim kitni unromantic ho

ashi: acha acha thicke hain abhi masak charo aur kampe pe dhyan doo ok aur hann suno ghar jaldi ajana ranveer ke gahr bhi toh jana hain na

yuvi: thick hain baba byye 😳

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it's now 7 o clock in the evening. time to go
tia's room :

tia: kya pehnu main?? tia ko to kuch samajme nahin a raha hain. o god main kya karun kya pehnu?????
kyun na main aisi dress pehenke jau jo ranveer ko bohot hi pasand ho?

haan main ek sari pehenke jaungi.......lekin aur ek problem mujhe toh sari pehnne hi nahin aata..haan main soniya mom se help lelungi. ( sumeet ahuja got married to soniya ray 8 years ago)

tia: soniya mamma

soniya: kya hua tia kuch chahiye tha???

tia: soniya mom ap tia ko sari pehenne main help karengi??????

soniya:haah lekin tumhe sari kyun pehenni hain???

tia: wow kya hain na tia aj sham ko ranveer ke gahr jaa rahi hain toh tia soch rahi thi ke wow waha sari pehenke jaye

soniya: (knowing every thing) ohh toh yeh bat hain kyun nahin kyun nahin, sure darling jayo apna sari leke ayop

tia: thank u mamma tia abhi gayi aur abhi ai.

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this was abt tooooo longgggggg but was the end of my stories 3 rd part.

i will be writting the 4 th part very soon.

plz give ur comments on it ok 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
hi!

it was sooooooooooooo sweet!!!! luv u 4 this! plzzz cont soooooon n ya, dis time d luv birds shud talk it out ya!

hugs and kisses!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
neal n nikki 😆

nice part !!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
thank u every body for your replies i love them i will be writting some more so hook on 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
it was really very nice 👏 👏 👏
please continue asap

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