relationships - a fan fic,part 46,pg82 - Page 9

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Uv is still staring at her , just imagining how she would look without those red streaks ......... ashi just can't take it anymore , she couldn't bear anyone staring at her like this , and this made her conscious .
Ashi : (in her mind ) yeh uv ko kyaa ho gaya ? why is he staring at me like this ?? kyaa mere chehree peh kuch ...arggggggggh..main timbo jaise kyun behave kar rahi hoo !!
Uv : (in his mind ) actually itni bhi buri nahi dikti hain !! thank god that she doesn't seem beautiful to others varna .....they would have taken her away from me .... but she looked sooooo beautiful in the pic !! iske saamne toh ........
Ashi : kyaa hain !!!
Uv : kyaa ??
Ashi : tum mujhe aise kyun stare kar rahe ho ?? (irritated )
Uv : woh toh bus .......
Ashi : listen !!!! i dont like that !!!! i feel really uncomfortable !!
Uv : accha !!!!! (raising an eyebrow )
Ashi : now stop staring like that !
Uv : oh !!!! btw tum yahaa itni jaldi kyun aayi ?? (seeing his watch while it was almost 6 )
Ashi : woh main tumhe inform karne aayi thi ki aaj band ki meeting nahi hogi
Uv : kya ?? but why ??
Ashi : kyuni daddy coolest ne timbo aur thakur ko kidnap kar liya hain !!
Uv : kyaa ?? kisne ??
Ashi : matlab tia ke papa tia aur thakur ko kahi le gaye hain !!
Uv : but no one informed me ??
Ashi : maine abhi kiya naa ??
Uv : shaayad ranveer isiliye aaya tha .... but even he was in a shock to see u !!
Ashi : me ?? where ?? ab kyaa tum log ko mera ghost dikne laga hain ?? (really confused)
Uv : nahi !! woh neal ne tumhari ek pic dikhaayi thi .........
Ashi : kyaaaaaa !!!!!! kaunsi ?? yeh neal aisa kaise kar sakta hain !!!!
Uv : kyun ?? kyaa tumhara picture dekhna mana hain !!
Ashi : uv !! tell me , which pic (now going really close to uv and holding his shirt )
Uv : main kyun bataao ?? (grinning ) waise tum us pic main .........
Ashi : uv bataao !!!! which pic !! varna ........
Uv : (now holding her hand ) varna kyaa psycho ?? tum kyaa karogi !!
Ashi : this is not fair !! neal !! i will kill him ! (rushes out , trying to free herself from uv )
Uv : (pulling her back to him ) waise tum us pic main .......bahut beautiful thi !! (bangs her towards the wall ) and u know what ?? i never ever dreamt that u ......u ashi will be actually so beautiful !!
Ashi : (she is almost blushing ) matlab ??
Uv : (now goes really close to her ) matlab kuch nahi ! ashi .......i know that tumhe yeh make up vake up karna accha nahi lagta but iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum apni yeh fact ko bhool jaao that even u are beautiful !! u need not hide it !!
Ashi : accha !! but uv ! listen to one thing ........mujhe nahi lagta ki main kuch bhi hide kar rahi ho ! aur mujhe tumse yeh sab jaane ki zaroorat nahi !
Uv : what do mean by that ??
Ashi : matlab yeh hai ki , i need not look "beautiful " !! main jaanti hoo ki main ...........
Uv : (puts his finger on her lips ) tum bahut acchi ho ashi !! u are very beautiful ,not only from outside , but from inside too !! kaash ki main tumhaari tarah hota , toh shaayad aaj main tumhe hurt nahi karta ( takes her hand in his ) i am sorry ashi ! i really am !! pata nahi mujhe kyaa ho gaya tha ........i still donno why is behaved like that .
Ashi : its ok psycho !! waise itna bhi hurt nahi hua tha ...... and even i shouldn't have behaved like that , isme galti kisiki bhi nahi ! i just didn't want u to be soo close to me in front of them ! thats it ! and moreover i was angry with u because of the way u spoke to me in the class !! its ok !!
Uv : even then ashi !! i am sorry !! i know tum jhoot bol rahi thi ! it did hurt naa ??
Ashi : hmmmm...........thoda sa !!
Uv : (just kisses her hand ) ab ??
Ashi : (blushing ) ab toh bilkul hurt nahi kar raha !! (both hug each other for a long time . lost in their world playing the guitar . uv's playing the guitar while ashi is holding it (guys i donno how to write this scene but just imagine a filmi sequence), ashi's head rested on uv's chest ! but ....after some time ashi's cell rings )

Ashi : huh !! (coming back to senses ) .......hello !!
Khushi : kahaa ho tum !! itni der laga di ! pata hain its almost 9 !! jaldi aao !!
Ashi : (just looks at her watch and is surprised) oh !!!!!! pata hi nahi chala !! abhi aa rahi ho !! (turns towards uv ) accha ab rakho ! ok baba !!......................... uv ! i think we must leave !!
Uv : ashi .....
Ashi : (lifting his hand and showing him the time ) its almost 9 !!
(both leave )


in ashi's room :
khushi : vrinda !! yeh kyaa humesha aisa karti hain !! i bet isko time sense kab aaayega !! ....pata nahi ........is ladki ka main kyaa karun !! upar se neal ka hazaar baar phone aa chuka hain !! sab ko sambhalte sambhalte main to paagal ho jaaongi ( sits on the bed with her hands on the head )
just then sonia ray enters
sonia : mumum !!!!...........arre khushi !! kaisi ho beta ??
khushi : kaise lagti hoo masi ..........paagal ho gayi hoo ......annie ki wajah se !!
sonia :kyun kyaa kiya usne ??
khushi : uska ata pata hi nahi !! pata nahi shyaam ke 6 se gaaayab hain !!
sonia : zaroor band ki meeting ke liye gayi hogi !!
khushi : band ! ( sonia tells her everything abt the band and also convinces her not be angry with ashi b'coz it was a secret band )
vrinda : but !! tia and ranveer toh nahi hain .......phir meeting kaisi ??
sonia : toh phir uv ke saath hogi !! good for them !! thoda time ek saath spend karenge toh saare misunderstandings door ho jaayegi !!
khushi : maasi !!!!!! what are u saying ? annie aur yuvi ??
sonia : haa khushi !! woh dono ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain .......the !! phir ek misunderstanding ki wajah se ...(tells her everything ) but maine dekha hain !! yuvi mumum se bahut pyaar karta hain !!
vrinda : haa !! par kuch bolta hi nahi !! specially jab se aditya ka truth saamne aaya tab se toh .......
sonia : haa !! even i have noticed that , he never tells anything to her !! mere toh samajh main yeh nahi aata ki yeh dono aakhir kyaa chahate hain !! ek taraf woh tia aur ranveer and ab yeh dono !!
(just then ashi enters )
ashi : mama !!!!!!! aap !!
sonia : mumum !! (goes and hugs her ) kaisi ho ??
ashi : aue kaise ho sakti hoo !! aapne aisa kyun kiya mama !! ......aapne us timbo ke papa ko mera guardian bana diya !! this is not fair !! aapko koi aur nahi mila tha kyaa ??
sonia : mumum !! makheeja itna bhi bad nahi hain !! i just hope ki usne tumhe zyada pareshaan toh nahi kiya ..........
ashi : waise woh toh cool hain !! and thats his problem !! ab main timbo se lad nahi paa rahi !! infact mujhe uske saare problems ko solve karne a zimma diya gaya hain !!
sonia : hey bhaggu !!!!!! iska matlab...........tum dono ne ladayi nahi ki !!!! wow !!!
ashi : no mama !! ............but u know what !! maine aapko bahut miss kiya !!
sonia : even me too sweetheart !! waise tum ab kahaa se aa rahi ho ??
ashi : kahi se bhi nahi (feeling nervous) .........kahi se bhi nahi !! waise mama mujhe bhook lagi hain !!
khushi : accha ! (with an angry look )
ashi : listen !! tum ab yeh "badi behen" ki act karna band karo !! mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain !!
sonia : ok chalo !! vrinda , khushi tum log bhi aao !!


after dinner sonia goes to meet neal .
sonia : neal !!
neal : sonia masi !! (both hug each other ) what a pleasant surprise !!
sonia : kaise ho beta !
neal : i am fine masi !! and even this place is also too good !!
sonia : hmmm........(watches uv keeping his guitar on place ) hello !! uv !! kyaa main tumhe dikhaayi nahi deti !!
uv : sonia aunty !! hi !! aap kaisi hain !!
sonia : yeh sawaal toh mujhe tumse karni chaahiye !! u seem to be lost !!
uv : woh kuch nahi aunty !!
sonia : accha !! waise neal , ab tum log yaha ho toh mujhe mumum ki phikar nahi hogi !!
neal : masi ,hum sab hain naa and dont worry ..........hum sab annie ka khayaal rakhenge !! because woh toh hum sabki laadli hain na .......being the smallest of us all !!
sonia : neal !! this is serious because last year , it was fine coz i didn't have much work lekin this year saans lene ki bhi phursat nahi hogi , toh main mumum ......
neal : maasi aap tension kyun le rahi ho ! main hoo naa .......i will make sure that she doesnt have any problem !aap bina koi tension ke apna kaam pe dyaan dijiye !!coz annie ke liye we all are there , aapki beti ko koi problem nahi hogi !! I promise that !!
Sonia : thanks beta !and take care of khush too !! bye ! and byee uv !!

(now uv is even more confused as to what is that , that makes neal so special to sonia and ashi !! what is their relationship !! kyaa ashi neal se ........ no ..no .. this is not possible . woh toh mujhse pyaar karti hain ,I felt it today ........... but .......)

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........just then Neal comes and pats uv !!
Neal : did u have your dinner ??
uv : huh !! .......no !! i am not hungry !!
Neal : uv !! dont do such a thing ! at least have something !! chalo .....maine bhi kuch nahi khaya ........
uv : no Neal !! mujhe sach main bhook nahi lag rahi !!
Neal : par mujhe lag rahi hain !! and at least mujhe accompany to kar hi sakte ho !! come on dude !! (pulls uv , uv had no choice but to go )

in the mess :
uv : Neal !! i really dont need it !! ........
Neal : uv !! u know what have something light ! varna acidity ho sakti hain !! aur tum ladkiyon ki tarah kyun behave kar rahe ho ........yeh nahi khana ........woh nahi khana ......ok at least have this salad !! (uv had to eat )
uv : ok dude !! now happy ??
Neal : good ! btw mujhe tumse ek baat poochni thi
uv : what ??
Neal : but dont say this to annie !!
uv : kyun ??
Neal : use bura lagega ! isiliye !!
uv : ok dude ....shoot !!
Neal : tell me uv .......annie ko kyaa hua hain ?? she is not like the old person we knew ! she has changed a lot !! i am asking u because u are the only person in maurya jisse main yeh baat kar sakta hoo
uv : no Neal !! nothing has happened to her !! why are u asking such a question ??
Neal : u dont know uv ! how important she is to me ... ......i just cant stand her being unhappy !! main use hamesha khush dekna chahata hoo !! and for her happiness i can do anything ,........
uv : oh !!
Neal : (not noticing uv's reaction ) pata hain uv , woh bachpan se mere liye ek priceless person hain !! even from when we were toddlers !! she always says that main use humesha ek choti bacchi ki tarah treat karta hoon , woh kyaa sabhi yeh kehte hain !!she always complains " Neal tu mujhse sirf 6 months bada hain !! but tum humesha isi baat ko lekar dadagiri nahi kar sakte " (and starts smiling )
uv : accha ??
Neal : haa uv !! maasi kehti hain ki maine use bigaad diya hain ! meri wajah se woh ziddi ban gayi hain !! can u believe that ?? ......but maybe they are true , uski har zidd ko poora jo karta hoo ! and even she , koi bhi baat ho pehle mujhe bataati thi !! chahe teachers se daant khaayi , kisike saath jhagdaa ......anything , but now .........
uv : now what ??
Neal : but now she has changed a lot !! badal gayi hain !! bahut se baatein chupaane lagi hain ! pehle bataaye bina kahi nahi jaati thi , but now ......aaj dekha na poori shyaam gayab thi , khush ko bhi nahi bataaya kaha gayi thi ... i am really worried !! (uv wanted to tell him that she was with him , but .........by then khushi calls up Neal and asks him to meet her )

Neal : ok uv !! abhi jaana padega .....khush se milna hain , tum room tak chale jaaoge naa ??
uv : offcourse dude !! main koi baccha nahi hoo !! bye (Neal leaves and uv starts thinking ) Neal ne mujhse aisi baat kyun ki ?? why does he want ashi to tell him everything ........what is their relation ?? (goes to their room and sleeps )

meanwhile on the other side khushi tells Neal everything what sonia had told her ,and makes him promise that he wont be angry on either uv or ashi . it was too much for him to digest .
Neal : u know what ?? i have been such an idiot !! maine usse jaake poocha ki annie ko kyaa hua hain !! usse ! (he was in a really bad mood )

khushi : Neal !! plzz , calm down , sonia maasi ne khud kahaa ki woh usse pyaar karta hain , he truely loves her !! but .........

Neal : but what ! how dare he hurt her !! humaari annie ko usne hurt kiya ! and even she never told anything about it ! ulta use bachati rehti hain !

khushi : Neal ..........(holds his hand ) sit down !! and now listen .......she loves him ! isiliye toh woh use bacha rahi hain !! lekin problem yeh hain ki woh khud yeh baat accept nahi kar rahi hain !! and waise bhi hume in sab ke beech main nahi aana chahiye !! woh un dono ki problem hain , unhe hi solve karna hoga !! .......aur kab tak .....kab tak tum annie ke problems ko solve karte jaaoge ?? even she told the same thing naa !! she told it that if she cant handle the problem toh woh khud humare paas aayegi !!

Neal : but ........
khushi : Neal ........even she needs her space ! dont u see that ?? she is in love !! in love Neal !! and i know ,maine dekha hain uv usse bahut pyaar karta hain .......else why would he hurt himself soo much by keeping quiet ?? usne uspar apne pyaar force karne be bajaay use time diya hain uske pyaar ko accept karne kaa !! and even u know that it hurts when the person whom u love doesn't reciprocate ....hain naa .......mujhe bhi toh time laga tha ?? yeh accept karne main !! right ??
Neal : (holds khushi's hand ) haa !! even i know it pains a lot ......aur iske liye main tumhe punish karta hoon ............
khushi : punish !!
Neal : haa .........ki tumhe poori life is paagal ke saath rehna padega ! (winks )
khushi : (acting as though its a very tough punishment ) oh no !!!!! aisa mat kijiye ! (both start laughing and hug each other , but are interrupted but some noise )

ashi : hm.......hm (asthough clearing her throat ) agar laila majnu ke meeting khatam ho gayi hoo toh .........
Neal : kyaa hain ?? tum hamesha galat time pe kyun aati ho ?? (khushi smiles )
ashi : kyunki ..........mujhe isme mazaa ata hain (pulls khushi towards her ) and milne ka time khatam ho gaya ! ab tum jaao !! ...........jaao (pushes Neal )
Neal : khushi ...........(coming towards them )
ashi : gooooo..............(.pushes him) !! bye !! tata !! good nite !! shabbha khair ...........goooooo............. (Neal leaves , and both the girls start laughing ) tum log kyaa baat kar rahe the ??
khushi : woh ...........annie .......
ashi : accha .......theek hain !! mat bataao aur mujhe tumhare lovey dovey talks main koi interest nahi ........(khushi still watching the way in which Neal left ,ashi notices it and patting her ) woh gaya !!!! .........ab hum bhi jaaye ?? yaa tum aaj watchman ka kaam karne waali ho ??
khushi : oh baba !! lets move !!


meanwhile in neal's room ,as soon as he enters the room he sees uv sleeping , he goes near the bed while something falls down , a letter or something , Neal picks it up and sees that it was a letter addressed to annie (i.e ashi ) from uv .........

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