relationships - a fan fic,part 46,pg82 - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
Thanks for GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT fan fic
Please continue soon I am eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
it is really good if u hv time then plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
hey! its really nice. u have brilliantly shown the relations be it aashi&neal, aashi&khushi, aashi & yuvi(he is too sweet) and even tia&aashi.the way u have brought out the emotions b/w frnds is really gud.
waiting 4 more & more & moreeeeeeeeeee


happy remixing!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
Just then Neal enters the scene
Neal: hi!!! ………..tum log abhi …………..Annie!!!!!! kyaa hua?? tum ro kyun rahi ho !!!!!!!!
Ashi : duh uh !!!!! main kahaa ro rahi hoo ?? woh zara sa kachda chala gaya tha , khushi ne nikaal diya !!!!
Neal : oh !!!! ………(feeling not very sure ) …….tum theek ho ??
Ashi :offcourse !!!!! dodo !
Khushi :Neal ab bas bhi karo aur class jaao ……varna woh mit…….
Neal :fine colonel !!! (all of them laugh and leave for their classes )

As soon as ashi and khushi enter the class uv looks at them and gives a smile to ashi and signs that she come and sit beside a seat next to him.ashi notices it , but prefers to go and sit next to tia !!!! the whole class is in a shock . khushi goes and sits in that seat as there was no seat left ,next to khushi is naina .
Naina : woh wahaa kyun gayi ?
Khushi : kaun ?? (trying to concentrate )
Naina :Annie !!!
Khushi : isliye kyunki ……….(sees uv listening to them ) ………mujhe kyaa pata ?? usise pooch lo !! ab disturb mat karo ! ek to pehle se hi mujhe yeh civics samajh main nahi aati !!!!!
Naina : khush !!!!
Khushi : naina !! one more question ………just one more question and u will be dead !!!!!!!! just shut up and listen , chaahe to poori raat hum baat karenge alrite !!!!!
Naina : uffff !!!!!! ek yeh ,ek woh and phir woh !!!! sab milke meri jaan le lenge !!!!!
Khushi : toh phir apni jaan bachhaao and chup raho (naina had no other go but to shut up )

Tia : ashi !!!........ashi !!!!
Ashi : kyaa hain timbo ?? (actually she was sleeping in the class with her eyes open )
Tia : tum sach main theek ho ??
Ashi : haaaaan !!(and yawns )
Teacher :anvesha aur tia !! aap donon ko agar kuch kehna hain to yahaa aake kahiye !!aapas main baat mat kijiye !! (ashi and tia look at the teacher asthough they will kill him )
(Later after the class )
ashi : timbo !!!!!!
tia : kyaa hain ??
ashi : meri ek baat kaan khol ke sun lo ! jab main so rahi hoon to mujhe mat uthao !!
tia : kyaaaaaaaa ……….tum so rahi thi ??
ashi : haan !! yeh civics ka lecture mujhe ek lullaby lagta hain and main soo jaati hoo !!!
tia : par …..
ashi : no par vars !! just don't wake me up !!! (and leaves , sid and uv enter )
sid : yeh kyaa bol rahi thi ??
tia : yeh ashi bhi naa …….keh rahi thi ki woh civics class main so jaati hain !! tia wonders kaise !!
uv : woh !!!! ……….tia ………
tia : uv !! tia tumse aaj baat karne ke bikul mood main nahi hain !! alrite !! job hi baat karni hain postpone to tomorrow !! tab tak tia kuch sochti hai (and leaves with her angels )
sid : woh !!!!!!! tia sochti bhi hain !!!!
uv : shut up sid !!!!! (irritated by him )

in the room of khushi and naina
khushi : toh Annie !!! how was last year here ??
ashi : hmmmmmmmmmm …………pata nahi kaise kahoo ……funny , comic , lovely ,tragic ……….
Naina : …….romantic ……….
Ashi : kyaaaa ?? stop talking bull shit now !!! (blushing remembering the times when she was dating uv )
Naina : sach …..sach bolo . maurya main itne cool guys hain , aur tumne kise ko bhi date nahi kiya !!! I don't believe it !!
Ashi : listen !!!! I am not playing ripley's believe it or not !! alrite !! aur tum ?? tumne kisko date kiya tha ??
Khushi : aur kise !!!! ek hi toh aisa ladka hain , jo isko pasand karta hain !!!!
Naina :kyun ?? kyaa kharaabhi hain mujhmain ??
Ashi :kharaab tum nahi ………..uski naina hain !!!!
Naina :kyaaaaaa??
Khushi :matlab kharaab uski annkhen hain !!
Ashi :sirf aankhen ki nahi ……….uska dimaag bhi !!!!!
(naina is getting very angry and takes the pillows and starts hitting them and even they too start hitting her ,someone opens the door and at the same time a pillow goes and hits that persons face )



ashi : uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv!!!!!!! (getting down from the bed and setting her top ) tum yahaa ………….kahi lagi toh nahi (holds his head in her palms and starts seeing it , uv is almost lost in that moment . he didn't want her to take of her hands from his curls )
uv : (trying to hold her hands ) woh ………. Yahaaa………..
khushi : uv ! rite ?? tum yahaa kyaa kar rahe ho ?? (winks at ashi ,ashi notices it and suddenly retrieves her hands )
uv : woh mujhe ashi ko ek important baat kehni thi !!
ashi : kyaa ??
uv : (whispering to her ) inko band ke baare main pata hain ??
ashi : nahi !! ………..(to khushi and naina ) ok guys !! byee !! and naina main ab bhi sahi kehti hoo ………….zaroor uska dimaag ……….(just then a rocket …..ooops .. pillow comes and hits ashi , uv is stunned as to whats going on ) ………..kharaab nahi ……….instead hain hi nahi !!
naina : aaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeee…………………!!!!!!
Ashi : (pushes uv out and closing the door ) I am right !! (shouts loudly , meanwhile khushi takes hold of naina ) ………dekh kyaa rahe ho ??jaldi yahaa se khisko varna woh naina humara omlette banaa degi !!
Uv : (after the reach certain distance ) ashi !!
Ashi : haan !!!!!! ab bolo …….band ke baare main kya ??
Uv : actually woh band ka meeting aaj raat 7 baje shed main hain !!
Ashi : ok !! timbo ko ………
Uv : ranveer bata dega ! and u both come together sharp at 7
Ashi : alrite then I will say her to be ready by 5 !!
Uv :5 ?
Ashi : haan make up …………….manicure ……..pedicure …..dimaag ka cure in sab ke liye time toh lagega naa …….kyaa uv ?? U are such a dodo (and hits uv, uv just stares at her and she at him and both are lost …………….)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
ooooooooooooohhhh!!! 😳 😳 😳 well going nishi.
it's sufffiii 👏 👏 👏 .
CONGRATES for being member of the week 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
its gr888888888888888 nishi👏 👏 👏 👏.......I am loving it.......I really liked the way u showed the ashi tia bonding......and I am really enjoying the romantic track building up betwn ashi and yuvi😳😳........plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
wow.its superb.sorry i've not re[plied 4 many days.I just loooooooooovvvvvvvvveeeee ur fic
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
this is soo gud plzz no more uv jealous :(
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
hey! really it nishi it was very sweet. every scene b/w aashi & yuvi is so cute. infact i enjoy these scenes b/w aashi & yuvi than the one in remix.


happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
thank u soooooooooooooo much !!!!!!!!

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