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Niyathi

@coolniyu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: remixdbest
dat was really gud but y u mentioned its scary dat word pulled me more towards ur fic

yep me 2😆

but urs is still brilliant👏

change the topic name na puhlease!! rite ashi-uv fic or sumthincos ur fic is def not scary its soooooooo sweet😳

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funky n crazy

@funky n crazy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

OH i cant wait till tomorrow(tuesday)..... pls post fast 😆 😆 😆

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

neelakshi plzz continue b4 my heart could fail n i die

ur fanfic is suberb!

keep writing..

n gud luck for ur test!

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neelakshi1985

@neelakshi1985

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Thank u guyz...ur comments floored me 😳 😳 r u being kind 2 me,or do u really like it i hope the latter 😊 and pls. post ur criticisms--then it will balance the praise!by the way,i wrote scary bcoz it waz my first...but now i shall hav 2 add some thriller elements 😉
2 part from each other waz the hardest thing.it waz almost as if they were both scared that it wud all turn 2 b a dream and this beautiful moment would fade into darkness.
"don't go,"yuvi pleaded n he waz just echoing her feelings."i don't want 2,sweety,"she pressed his hand."we'll meet 2morow.its getting late."she luvd the way he expressed his feelings thru his eyes--the happiness,the sorrow and now the anxiety...as if she wud leave him n go like she did the last time."i'll call u as soon as i reach my room,"she promised."o.k."he finally relented."goodnite,sweetheart."he kissed her gently,then with more intensity.she hated 2 break away.
"darling,we'l meet again 2morow,just a few hrs. away,"she sighed,trying more 2 convince herself than him."now no-one can separte us."
"not even sid?"grinned yuvi and she had 2 laugh.that broke the emotional moment,n they fell apart."no-one will b more happy than sid,"smiled yuvi."o.k. i'l leave first,n then u follow.we shudn't b seen 2gether at this hr."he hated 2 leave her,hated 2 leave this shed which already had so many precious memories,n now one more had been added.as he left,he cudn't help feeling that he waz being watched.but as he turned,he saw no-one...ashi wiated for 3 min. then sllipped out herself only 2 bump into latty."anvesha!!what r u doing here?''latty raised her eyebrow."i cud ask the same 2 u,"retorted ashi angrily.the last person she wanted 2 c at this time waz latty,her entire mind just wanted 2 focus on yuvi...
"well,u'l not know the ans,"said latty under her breath as ashi disappeared round the corner...

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

ugghh h8 two ppl n d worlkd witch n snith latiie n miss bow ow
btw a gr8 latter part toooo who knew u cud wirte soo well

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sharanya

@sharu16

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

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plz dont let latty spoil everything this time 😭 😭

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malvika16

@malvika16

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

CONGRATS NEELU!!!!!U WRITE 2 WELL!!!!!oh god,u shud hav been scriptwriter of remix 😳 😳 then there wud hav been only romantic scenes such as these n ppl like me who r die-hard fans of the couple wud watch every episode 4 times a day!!!!
by the way,some more lovey-dovey scenes PLEASE.bring in latty later.but u write abt the romantic parts 2 well----guyz,u must read the first one--exceellent! 😃 😃

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funky n crazy

@funky n crazy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

hurry up..... or else 😡 ...😆 😆 😆 continue fast yaar

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neelakshi1985

@neelakshi1985

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Posted: 19 years ago

#19

o.k. o.k. here goes..i am writing again n this time it will b a LONG ONE(I can only log online alternate days so don't mind the slow pace)that night,ashi cud hardly sleep.she was counting the hours until day wud break n she cud see him again...feel his touch..hear his loving words...at times she felt frightened at the intensity of her emotions."i love him more than i've ever luvd ne1,"she thought."he is everything...everything..2 me."
vrinda heard her pacing up n down and asked her,"what's wrong,ashi?"but she didn't want 2 share it with ne1 at the moment.she wanted 2 clutch it like a precious secret that wud be tainted if she had 2 spell it out in words."i don't want ne1 2 know,"she thought."i know vrinda wud b happy 4 me but it's all the more beautiful if its just b/w me n him".yuvi in his own room was thinking the same thing."finally,finally the day i had been waiting 4 so long...i can't believe she's actually mine.yet i feel humbled...i hav 2 b more desrving of her this time."his heart waz full but he didn't want sid 2 know.not bcoz he didn't trust him but bcoz...well simply bcoz she belonged 2 him n him alone.he knew it waz illogical,but somehow discussing her with sid wud reduce the charm of it all."i'm growing up,"he thought surprised.''i never thought i cud luv some1 so much."
Finally the next day waz there...ashi took more time than usual getting ready.there waz a glow on her face,a blush on her cheecks..."i actually look pretty,"she thought n then rebuked herself."hey bhaggu!this is timbo's domain."yuvi had sent her a msg--"meet me in the lawns at 9 sharp."she waz there by 8.40 n he just 5 min. later!!!
at first they stood staring at each other,almost shy,hesitant 2 move close.it waz as if the night with its lingering fragrance had slipped beyond their grasp n they were still wondering whether it waz all true.yuvi took the first step."u look beautiful,sweetheart,"he went forward,cupped her face in his hands n kissed her.she melted intsantly.
"yuvi.."she nestled against him.if only this moment wud last forever....the same thought waz in both their minds.what a powerful feeling which swept away all doubts n misgivings,as if god had always meant them 2 b like this and this waz the only reality.she kept her head on his broad chest n heard his heart beating.tears filled her eyes,but they were happy tears...how often she had dreamt of this..he lifted her face n wiped off the tears with his fingers."iluv u yuvi,"she whispered."me 2 darling,"he held her closer as if she waz 2 dear 2 let go.with a contented sigh,they gave in 2 the magic of the moment.

latty waz busy typing on her personal comp."the latest gossip..yuvraj dev n anesha banerjee having a scene?but of course,who is fooling whom this time?after all,we all know wot happened last tiume they were dating...anvesha is taking her revenge..."latty signed off with a grin.it waz not a pleasant smile."now i hav 2 circulate these,"she smirked.