fanfic.--scary!

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well guyz my first fanfic...am really nervous...pls. bear with me n b patient.i only wrote scary bcoz i am scared how its gonna turn out not bcoz its horror---its very lovey dovey😉(by the way,mine is a mix of wot happned on the show n my imag.)

"why did u call me?"she looked at him warily.the last time they were alone in the shed...that was the time she had seen him with that unbearable pain in his eyes,moist with tears which her rigid behaviour had wrung from him and yet...she had not been able 2 say yes.she just wanted 2 4get that day but it waz so difficult...did she regret saying no?did she regret being brainwashed by aditya?she turned away so she didn't hav 2 look into yuvi's eyes..2 many painful memories attached 2 them and 2 few happy ones.

"nothing,wacko.why shud i call u?i'm just practising my music,"said yuvi,putting down his guitar impatiently.

''but tia said...oh why did i believe timbo.she is sooo confused,"said ashi sitting down next 2 yuvi."neway,now that i had 2 cum here,let me listen 2 the new piece u composed." yuvi started playing.it was a slow,dreamy piece,n ashi waz soon lost in the world of music.they tried 2 avoid each other's eyes,but it waz difficult...he felt himself losing concentration.his fingers trembled.why did she hav 2 look so pretty n fragile,as if she was only made 4 his arms.his mind drifted back 2 another evening long ago,in this very shed,when they had danced slowly in each other's arms n finally her head had found his chest...that waz the first time she had surrendered herself 2him.they weren't even going arnd then...he didn't want 2 think of the days whenthey HAD been going arnd bcoz they were still 2 close 4 comfort,as if only yesterday they had walked hand in hand down a moonlit walk on a balmy summer evening...

he had pulled a wrong note.it waz of no use.he put down his guitar,n since she waz sitting so close 2 him,his hand accidently brushed hers.it waz as if they both felt an electric current running thru them. she shivered,and trie2 2 pull away her hand.but he waz quick 2 and grabbed it.gently he brought it 2 his lips n kissed it.all the whilehe waz afraid she wud pull away,or worse,slap him...but she made no movement.that was a positive sign.he got up now,and went closer.she closed her eyes,as if this waz the moment they had both been waiting for...there waz no need 4 words.

soon they were in each other's arms.the entire world melted away,n the only thing they cud feel n hear n think waz each other.time was constituted by each other's soft,even breathing.he gently removed the hair from her forehead n kissed it.ashi shivered.how cud she hav survived all these months without him,she wondered.how...when the only time she felt so complete,so fulfilled waz when she waz with him."yuvi,"she whispered."i love you.pls never leave me again..i.."

"ssshh,darling.don't say such things."his voice waz trembling."i love u 2.i never left u." "yuvi.."her throat waz ckocked with tears,the same tears that were filling his eyes.she cud not bear 2 c them,bcoz again they reminded her of their parting.he was now kissing her eyelids,then her nose and finally her lips.the kiss was like a final seal on their union,and the blessed happiness each felt in the other's arms.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh wow neelakshi i LUV it 😳
is this ur first? thts hard to bliv,thts how sweet ur fanfic is!!
i luv ur fanfic just adore it 😊
congrats yaar its very very nice 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow awesum!!!! 👏
has it already ended????? 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG......... this is so good!!!!!!!! are u sure this is ure 1st fic,anyways congo 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzz cont!!!
its totally awesum! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey! its really nice. please continue.


happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks 4 appreciating it.yes,it is my first--u can check. 😉 i will continue,but on tuesday.that's bcoz i hav a test on tues. and only after that i hav time. 😊
so c u then n till then ur comments r appreciated! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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o.k. i'll continue just a little n then again on tues. 😉 but its gonna b short ppl don't mindafter a while they just sat silently ashi with her head on his shoulder their hands linked 2gether."sweetheart,"said yuvi,finally breaking the pure silence."i really hurt u b4.i'm so sorry...""no yuvi,"she turned n kissed him on his cheeck."i hurt u 2.but i think when we hurt each other, we were suffering equally.at least,i waz.when i refused u,and went away,i waz numb.did sid tell u wot i told him?"when he told u abt the bet?"asked yuvi,wishing she wud kiss him again.her touch waz magic,and unlike other girls,ashi never pulled back or hesitated at expressing her feelings.she waz not aggressive either.she waz just perfect and what brought a lump into his throat waz her eyes filled with love 4 him."she loves me so much,"he thought."i hope i never hurt her again."
"yes,sweetheart,he told me that u said u loved me.n he is such an idiot....he said i didn't care 4 u.u know that's not true baby,don't u?"
ashi cudn't help smiling.his voice waz so sicere,so genuinely worried.How cud i hav doubted him,she thought.we belong 2 each other n i believed sid.oh,i waz such a fool."listen yuvi let's 4get abt it,"she said,caressing his cheeck."i love u very much n i know u luv me 2.by the way,u mean more 2 me than ne1 else in the world.u know why i fight with u?bcoz i care so much 4 u,sweetie,that i can't bear 2 c u doing nething wrong.i don't care so much abt ne1.u r the most imp. person ever."
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dat was really gud but y u mentioned its scary dat word pulled me more towards ur fic
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏
ur reely good a this!!!

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