Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (PraShiv SS)

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Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (My Heart is with You)Part 1

I dedicate this SS to AAA_mania who asked me to write a SS on the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.This story is inspired from the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.

The credit for the edits goes to the real editor.



Shivansh gave one chocolate each to a little boy and a little girl.

The kids were Pratham and Harini.

Pratham:Dad,you are so stingy when it comes to giving chocolates.

Shivansh:Because if you eat too many chocolates your teeth will get spoiled.

Pratham:Dad...

Shivansh:I will cook healthy food for you at home.

Pratham:Please don't cook food for us.

Harini:That's the worst punishment for us.

Shivansh smiled out of embarrassment.




A goon killed a man brutally by stabbing him on the street.Many people were watching it with fear.Among them there was a girl.She was Prarthana. After murdering the man,the goon left from there.Shivansh who passed by was shocked to see the dead man bleeding on the road.

Shivansh:Somebody has murdered him brutally.Terrible!

Immediately Shivansh called the police there.

The police officer Shivanya reached there.

Shivanya:Who killed this man?

Everybody was silent.

Shivansh:You all watched a murder shamelessly and not saying who killed him.Pathetic!

Suddenly Prarthana said bravely:I saw who killed him.

Shivanya and Shivansh were glad that finally someone spoke up without any fear.

Shivanya:What's your good name?

Prarthana:I am Prarthana.

Shivanya:You may have to come to the police station with us and identify the culprit from the photographs of the goons we have.You should give the statement and come to the court as a witness.

Prarthana:Sure Ma'am.

Shivanya:Good.Our country needs strong and courageous people like you.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh was impressed by Prarthana's attitude.



Prarthana's stepmother Seema was against her decision to go to the court as a witness.

Seema:They are very dangerous. Don't go there.

Prarthana:Maa,I can't sit quietly because of fear after witnessing injustice.If we keep quiet such criminals will flourish.

Seema was irritated.



Prarthana gave statement against the goon Naresh in the court and the judge decided to give him capital punishment.

Prarthana was happy.

Shivanya:Well done Prarthana. Bold girls like you should be in the police department.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh also smiled.

Shivansh:You have to be appreciated Prarthana.

Prarthana smiled at him.

Prarthana:Even you may have to be appreciated as you were the one who informed the police about the crime.

Shivansh smiled.

Prarthana:And your name?

Shivansh:Shivansh!

She smiled.



Unexpectedly Prarthana got kidnapped.Her family looked for her.But they didn't complain to the police fearing of the shame it will bring to the family.



After 3 days also Prarthana didn't return home.People started gossiping about her disappearance.They started saying that Prarthana eloped with someone.

Seema was very angry.

Seema:Finally Prarthana showed her true colour.She eloped with someone.

Seema's daughter Gayatri said:No Maa.Di will never do that.Something else has happened.

Seema and Gayatri were tensed.



The kidnapper told Prarthana:You maybe wondering who I am.I am Naresh's brother Bhavesh.

Prarthana was shocked.

Bhavesh:Because of you,my brother got jailed.He is going to lose his life because of you.I kidnapped you to kill you as a punishment.

Prarthana was shocked and scared.

Prarthana:Please don't kill me.He was a criminal.He deserves punishment.

Bhavesh:OK.I will not kill you.But I will give you another punishment.

He started looking at her in a dirty manner.

Prarthana got scared.

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Part 1

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (My Heart is with You)Part 1

I dedicate this SS to AAA_mania who asked me to write a SS on the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.This story is inspired from the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.

The credit for the edits goes to the real editor.



Shivansh gave one chocolate each to a little boy and a little girl.

The kids were Pratham and Harini.

Pratham:Dad,you are so stingy when it comes to giving chocolates.

Shivansh:Because if you eat too many chocolates your teeth will get spoiled.

Pratham:Dad...

Shivansh:I will cook healthy food for you at home.

Pratham:Please don't cook food for us.

Harini:That's the worst punishment for us.

Shivansh smiled out of embarrassment.




A goon killed a man brutally by stabbing him on the street.Many people were watching it with fear.Among them there was a girl.She was Prarthana. After murdering the man,the goon left from there.Shivansh who passed by was shocked to see the dead man bleeding on the road.

Shivansh:Somebody has murdered him brutally.Terrible!

Immediately Shivansh called the police there.

The police officer Shivanya reached there.

Shivanya:Who killed this man?

Everybody was silent.

Shivansh:You all watched a murder shamelessly and not saying who killed him.Pathetic!

Suddenly Prarthana said bravely:I saw who killed him.

Shivanya and Shivansh were glad that finally someone spoke up without any fear.

Shivanya:What's your good name?

Prarthana:I am Prarthana.

Shivanya:You may have to come to the police station with us and identify the culprit from the photographs of the goons we have.You should give the statement and come to the court as a witness.

Prarthana:Sure Ma'am.

Shivanya:Good.Our country needs strong and courageous people like you.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh was impressed by Prarthana's attitude.



Prarthana's stepmother Seema was against her decision to go to the court as a witness.

Seema:They are very dangerous. Don't go there.

Prarthana:Maa,I can't sit quietly because of fear after witnessing injustice.If we keep quiet such criminals will flourish.

Seema was irritated.



Prarthana gave statement against the goon Naresh in the court and the judge decided to give him capital punishment.

Prarthana was happy.

Shivanya:Well done Prarthana. Bold girls like you should be in the police department.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh also smiled.

Shivansh:You have to be appreciated Prarthana.

Prarthana smiled at him.

Prarthana:Even you may have to be appreciated as you were the one who informed the police about the crime.

Shivansh smiled.

Prarthana:And your name?

Shivansh:Shivansh!

She smiled.



Unexpectedly Prarthana got kidnapped.Her family looked for her.But they didn't complain to the police fearing of the shame it will bring to the family.



After 3 days also Prarthana didn't return home.People started gossiping about her disappearance.They started saying that Prarthana eloped with someone.

Seema was very angry.

Seema:Finally Prarthana showed her true colour.She eloped with someone.

Seema's daughter Gayatri said:No Maa.Di will never do that.Something else has happened.

Seema and Gayatri were tensed.



The kidnapper told Prarthana:You maybe wondering who I am.I am Naresh's brother Bhavesh.

Prarthana was shocked.

Bhavesh:Because of you,my brother got jailed.He is going to lose his life because of you.I kidnapped you to kill you as a punishment.

Prarthana was shocked and scared.

Prarthana:Please don't kill me.He was a criminal.He deserves punishment.

Bhavesh:OK.I will not kill you.But I will give you another punishment.

He started looking at her in a dirty manner.

Prarthana got scared.

Shivansh must be a really bad cook 😂😂😂😂
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