my first fanficplz completed - Page 2

Originally posted by: lamina

what does "bachendri pal " mean???

who are the two sisters???

as far as my gk goes bachandri pal was the first woman to climb mount everest......first indian woman

ya like aparna said try making it more descriptive.

nice one! but can u pls make the chapters longer1

Originally posted by: rikzik

as far as my gk goes bachandri pal was the first woman to climb mount everest......first indian woman

ya like aparna said try making it more descriptive.

kkkk.. thnx for telling priyanka😊

i was confused as to wats bachendri pal!!1😃

hey remix fan gud fanfics!!!!😊👏👏

grt work remix fan...plz comtinue

actually the two sisters are tia and ashi who else.i thought someone would guess it.its ok

then suddely yuvi will feel that they shd move on.but ranveer will be in his deep thoughts abt tia.but yuvi will force him
y:cmon dude lets move on.wehave to reach their as early as possible.
R:ha banaa aap thik hi keherahe.hume chalna chahiye.
then move on .they will be nearly halfway.when they hear some people tellin them to go back.but they both neglect the people and move ahead.
suddenly from no where there will be a gr8 avalanch😲 .then suddenly the gr8 amt of snow carry away ranveer and yuvi.
after a long time people come searching for their bodies,but they wont find the bodies and declare them dead. 😭 😭 😭 .
then suddenly the news reaches the hostess.she immediately checks yuvi and ranveer's bag and calls sumeet ahuja.
H:hello me sumeet ahuja ke saat baat karsakthi hoon
ashi:ha kahiyein.mein unki beti baat karrahihu.aap kaun hai.{tia will be listening in the other phone}
H:baat ye hai ki yuvaraj dev aur ranveer sisodia dono margaye.
suddenly ashi drops the reciever and collapses.
tia onthe other hand faints.

Yes yes....plz do! its intriguing!
So Soniya & Sumeet have tied the knot eh???

Nice story.....do continue!

sumeet and sonia run towards ashi and tia and wake them up.after they wake up they start crying in their parents arms.
t,a:papa yuvi aur ranveer margaye.
and they continue to sob.
sumeet and sonia are shocked 😲
they are going on comforting their children but tia and ashi are in complete shock and walk away to their respective rooms.tia and ashi are shocked and r not ready to believe that ranveer and yuvi r dead.soniya and summet plan to go the gust house where yuvi and ranveer were staying.but tia and ashi refuse to go.
that night when tia is sitting in her still crying and sitting in her room when ashi knocks in and sits next to tia and says
a:tia hum sab abhi ek dusre ko jaane lage magar abhi ye sab hona nahi chahiata.
t:anvesha tia ranveer se itna pyar karthihe aur ye sab abhi horahahe.
A:me bhi yuvi se buhat pyaar karthi hun.
suddenly theyboth go into the thoughts of the times when they were yuvi and ashi suddenly both hug each othere and cry and cry and cry 😭 😭 😭
the next day early morning they were all packed and they left to the hill station.
on the journey both tia nd ashi are very depressed and soniya forces tia and ashi to have somthin but they both refuse
soniya:mmm,tia sweatheart kuch khalo.jab thak tum khabar suni ho tabse tum duno bhuke padeho.
ashi and tia show no reaction at all.

here the continuation
they all reach the hillstation.the hostess treats them very well with some delicacies
H:woh dono ladke kitne acche the.us din jab who jaa rahete unko roknekilye mein bohat koshish kiya.lekin woh mere baat nehi sun rahe the.usdin who dono ko nahi pata tha lekin bohat saare log unkeo rok rahe the.
Soniya:apka matlab he ki avalanches ka board udhar rakha
H;ha lekin undonene usko nahi dekhahoga.aur chalte chale.......unlogo ka ye haal nahi honatha.
T:nahi ranveer aur yuvi ko kuch nahi huva hai.aap sab jooth bol rahe ho.
and she walks into the room.ashi follows her and tries to console her.
sumeet and soniya r deeply hurt and are worried abt their children's future.
soniya decides that they shd leave the next day but tia and ashi forces them to stay for 2-3 days.soniya agrees.
but now comes the twist.
ashi always feels that yuvi is very near her.

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wot r all u talented ppl doing sitting @ home
go publish sumthing please