my first fanficplz completed - Page 5

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ok suddenly ashi and tia run towards yuvi and ranveer{suraj huva madham tune when kajol runs in the end of the song}
both the bridegrooms get up and go back to pull their bride
and yuvi and ran put ashi and they start beating up aditya and arjun.
they beat them up very badly
and suddenly arjun falls
"arjun"thes a shrill cry
everybody r shocked and they look arnd

guess whos the one who screamed

nice one shweta....looking forward to the next bit

write it fast its 2 gud i thimk u shud b the script writer for remix

ok the person was latty.
ashi:latty tum kyu chillarahi ho.
latty:kyunki,kyunki ye mera pati he.
all are shocked.
meher;tumne humko ye sab kyunahi bataya.
latty:kyunki me arjun ko promise kiya tha ki me kisiko naho batavoongi.kyunki arjun aur mujko yuvi aur tia se badla lena tha.
yuvi:kya?mujse kyu.
latty:kyunki tumne mujko cheat kiya.tumne kaha tha ki mein sid ke saat rehasakti hoon.
sid:kya?mujhe kyun?
latty:mein tumse bohat pyar karti thi aur tumse alag karna chathi ti
sid walks towards latty and gave her a tight slap
everybody r shocked
sid:tume pathatha ki mein tumko kabhi like nahi kiya hai.sirf yuvi ke liye mein tumko chane laga.abhi chale javo
vrinda:lathika,tum mujse ek bari kehe sakti thi.
sid:very angry 😡 .vrinda tum isme mat aao. vrinda walks away towards m.p
tia:arjun tumko pata ha ki tia tumko hate karti hein.
malvika:mujhe ek aur baat pata hai.
everybody:kya?
malvika:woh kya he ki,arjun aur aditya he ne yuvi aur ranveer ko marne ka plan kiya tha.magar jab mujhe pata chalte sab katam hogaya tha.
sumeet:apne sab sunliya inspector.in teeno ko yeha se lejayiye.
ashi:papa in logo ko chodo.
sumeet:kya?tumko pata hai ashi tum kya keheraheho
tia:haan papa inko chod do.hum inlogo ki shakal bhi kabhi nahi dekna chatenge.
ranveer and yuvi:tum done sahi keherahiho.inlogoko .
sid:pehele in logo ko kahi is sheher se door chod diye. 😡 😡 😡 .
everybody r happy.and in the last all the couples hug each other

wow........remixfan...its gr8....congo on completing it...

Hi remixfan the fic was superb 👏 👏 👏great job.

hey it was dufferent! plz continue!!!!

Originally posted by: american pie

hey it was dufferent! plz continue!!!!

yaar it has been already completed.b/w remixfan gr8 n fantabolous fanfic.cant find words 2 describe it, keep it up!!👏👏👏