~* The Way We Were *~ pt 9 page 16! (A TiaRa ff) - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna_1988

oh tanya ..thank you somuch for taking my word and making an effort to read this fic..

aww appy, ur so sweet for spreading the word abt this ff!! thank uuuuu😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel3142

gosh ash very weell written you are truely pro in this i just loved the whole secanario

both of them feeling trying to talk to see each other look at each other wanna be close to each other but too much fear to speak their feeling loud and trying to stay away from touch and breeze of love but still not able to get away from it i could visualize all this in this parts it is amazing😳😉👏
i wished that nainika didnt came so early and ranveer tia had spent much memorable time with each other loved the part where tia says to him tum gaaon mein jake aur bhi clumsy ho gaye ho and ranveer reply kaunsa gaon miss tia ahuja london it brought back sweet tiara nokjhok which they always had😳😉
gosh well written waiting to know what will happen further😛

i wish i didnt have to bring her in so early, bt wanted to continue the story!😳
haha yess i just had to get in a little fight sumwhere...coz i cud completely imagine them saying that!
n u noo wot im gna say now: THANKS for the comment!!!!😆
Luv
Ash
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ash, when r u gonna update dear,
plzz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi ashma.. payal wanted me to tell you that she is extremly busy hence coudnot come on line or visit rf.. but willcatch up with your fic asap and post her comments..😊 and iam waiting eagerly for your next par ps.. i hope yopur satisfied wth the response that you got😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part
the way tia and ranveer reacted to each other was amazing they still have feelings for each other even though they try to deny it.
the dance scene was really good i liked the way u potrayed how they both couldnt even notice the other people surrounding them.
cant wait to see how tia is going to react after ranvdeer tells her what relation he has with nainika.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ashma wen r u gonna update the .continue asap dear. al the ppl reading the ff are like loosing patience .look what ur f has done to us lolz😊😉 .continue very very very soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
ashmaa relii loevd dis partt but nainika had cum dis tiem only wen actuallly d love flames ver rising up freakkk i m dieng2 read ur next update i rli love ur writing style u have gt amazing skilllsss ...... keep it up

luv ash
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Posted: 16 years ago

eagerly waiting for you to post your next prt ...

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ashma we r really waiting for ur next part. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone! Sorry for the long wait, was a little busy.. somehow managed to put this together this morning!😳 But i promise a quicker, and better part next time!
Part 8: A Raging Tempest

Ranveer hadn't meant for anything that spellbinding to happen that evening, but the incomprehensible ways of his heart were beyond his own control. One look at Tia Ahuja and he had forgotten everyone else. That is, until they appeared and called out his name.

"Ranveer!" called Nainika, running straight into his arms.

"You.. here.. how?!" asked a befuddled Ranveer. This felt like dj-vu... Nainika really had a terrible knack of turning up at the wrong place at the wrong time. And this was without doubt the worst timing and placing. The most blissful of dreams had instantly turned into a nightmare...and the worst thing was he couldn't pinch himself and wake up from his slumber.

"You remember I called you earlier on this evening? Well I was already in Bombay at that time! With you gone, I was feeling so lonely Ranveer... then I had an amazing thought. I'd come and visit my parents here, and surprise you at the same time!!" grinned Nainika. "But you're the one who surprised me Ranveer, you could have told me you were having a class reunion; it would have been so adorable, meeting your old classmates!"

"But how did you find out?"

"Oh Ranveer, you can't keep important things like this from your girlfriend; just a couple of phonecalls and..."

Ranveer had tuned out by this time... all he could see was Tia. She was staring at Nainika in shock.

"And who's this beautiful girl? Ranveer, aren't you going to introduce us?" asked Nainika, noticing Ranveer's eyes on Tia.

Tia had now composed herself, a blank, polite expression on her face. And in a steely, cold tone of voice, said, "Hi, I'm Tia Ahuja. I'm so sorry, but I was actually just about to leave. Nice meeting you."

And with that she walked off. Ranveer's nightmare was getting worse by the second. He had to stop her.

"Tia! Wait!" He ran after her and grabbed her arm.

She stopped, but wouldn't look at him.

"Tia," he said desperately. "It's not what it looks like.."

"Puh-leez. You don't owe me any explanations Ranveer. What you do with your life has nothing to do with me."

"How can you say that Tia? After everything that just happened between us tonight?"

"Oh and what was that? A game you were playing with Tia? Do you still think I'm just a plastic doll you can play games with?? Someone to pass your time with until your... your girlfriend came?" Tia spat out the words like venom.

That made Ranveer mad. "Tia, you're the one who left me, remember??"

"What, does that mean you just go and find someone else to love?"

She looked him in the eye now, because she had nothing to hide. He knew he had hurt her beyond words, and there was no one in the world he hated more than himself at that very moment. It rendered him speechless.

All he could do was stand there, watching her leave him once again. It was all his fault.

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Tia felt as if her senses had momentarily shut down from emotional overload. Were people talking to her? She couldn't process anything. How could one person go through so many feelings in one evening? How could it turn from the best day of her life to the worst? She felt like she had fallen from the top of the world to the depths of hell. But, with an inner strength she didn't know she possessed, she kept herself together until she reached into the haven of her bedroom. Then she burst into tears. Her poor self had gone through too much that day...her mind was a full-fledged raging tempest: questions and tears pouring down upon a sea of seething anger and grief, with any rational thought swimming around helplessly, unable to reach a safe harbour. She gave up trying to understand and cried herself to sleep.

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Tia woke up the next morning with a throbbing headache, an emotional hangover from being drunk on love and anger the previous evening. She was afraid to look into the mirror, knowing what an awful sight she'd look with her puffy eyes and tear-streaked cheeks. Last night, she was confused to say the least. She had been driven crazy with fury at Ranveer for finding someone else, at her friends for forcing her to go to the reunion, and mostly at herself, for agreeing to go in the first place, and then for getting so hypnotised by a tainted love.

But despite all the pain, the morning sunshine bought with it a sense of reason and perspective. She saw the light in the light of day. Had she been at school still, she would have probably stayed angry at him, shouted at him, and called him names, found someone to make him jealous. But she was sick and tired of fooling herself, and too exhausted to be angry anymore... and those stupid ego-driven games made no sense to her anymore.

It was time to face the music. It was a melody that had been playing ever since she had met him, a song that she hadn't always wanted to listen to, a tune that she had tried to block out with every ounce of resistance she had. But now she heard the lyrics loud and clear: Tia loved Ranveer, truly, madly, deeply. It was an absolute truth: She was hopelessly devoted to him. She knew it was undeniable. There was a huge void in her life that only he could fill.

How could she have thought one dance would make everything ok? They had so much they needed to solve. And the worst part was she knew their problems were too complicated, the distances between them too big, that it could be impossible for them to be together again. Now all she could think about was the way they were. She had been given a blessing and she had let it go. It was all her fault.

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