Alzia SS - Chapter 8 UPDATED Death is not the end, its a new beginning

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ..radiance...
hey arshi i have got a running nose now due to crying ... thankfully my parents r not their right now ...
d chapter was extremely emotional.. rather d most emotional one on Alzia ever
Its so horrible thinking how short their married life has been n more shorter was d happier married one..

aww ..Arrey meri jaan...🤗🤗

true their married life was short...true, shorter was the happier married life. But in my story a happy ending does exist. No i will not change history. just stay tuned😊

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Shopau

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

I don't even know where to start with ❓ 😭

The way you have described the pain Razia and Altunia are going through... it is mind boggling, and heart wrenching. 😭 more tears

But on a happier note I just love Altunia's attitude in life... he can make any situation, any moment worth living only if he has his mohatarma in his arms!!!

And Itna bada tease 😈 nikaah ki raat ke baare mein tadapana toh koi aapse seekhe ya phir Mirza se Can't wait... u too have turned a ZAALIM ???😆

At LAST ... I really am AMAZED at the way you are handling this war themed SS... No one knows it better than me how difficult it must be for you to write a whole story and excellent updates with war in the background. It is not easy at all... I am already dreading about how will I manage the plot once the war part comes... which isn't far away for NDZ!

So A BRILLIANT UPDATE ONCE AGAIN❤️ KISSES AND BIG HUGGS🤗🤗

Love

Shopau

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Shopau
I don't even know where to start with ❓ 😭
The way you have described the pain Razia and Altunia are going through... it is mind boggling, and heart wrenching. 😭 more tears

But on a happier note I just love Altunia's attitude in life... he can make any situation, any moment worth living only if he has his mohatarma in his arms!!!

And Itna bada tease 😈 nikaah ki raat ke baare mein tadapana toh koi aapse seekhe ya phir Mirza se Can't wait... u too have turned a ZAALIM ???😆

At LAST ... I really am AMAZED at the way you are handling this war themed SS... No one knows it better than me how difficult it must be for you to write a whole story and excellent updates with war in the background. It is not easy at all... I am already dreading about how will I manage the plot once the war part comes... which isn't far away for NDZ!

So A BRILLIANT UPDATE ONCE AGAIN❤️ KISSES AND BIG HUGGS🤗🤗

Love
Shopau

Hahahaha ...amaa nikah ki raat kya gustakhi hui thi mirza se woh agle chapter mein barabar pata chalega. Thoda sabar rakho hum itne bhi badey zaalim nahi hai. Atleast nttn compared to mirza and razia naa😆

yes it is difficult to describe both the war and the romance n talks of alzia going with a smooth flow together. I cant forget tht this is a very serious war they r fighting... bt alzia together and not having alzia romance n nok jhoks and talks is like eating n oreo without the cream🥱 so im trying to maintain a balance and im so happy tht u understand incase I lose track of it sometimes.

ohh yes the bloody part of the war is yet to come...these r just mere starters...😭

huggsss n love n kisses back yaar...im the happiest when u and some others enjoy the update🤗🤗

hello and im waiting for nasir mirza bromance too...update soon love

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Ohhh u meant war of nek dil zaalim ???

I didn't knw ur planning tht too. ...oooh shit nw my eagerness has increased 20000 folds more...I can't wait to see hw u write it...pls continue soon

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Shopau

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: arshia200
Ohhh u meant war of nek dil zaalim ???
I didn't knw ur planning tht too. ...oooh shit nw my eagerness has increased 20000 folds more...I can't wait to see hw u write it...pls continue soon

YUP ...

Thats's what I meant when I said the original idea for Nek Dil Zaalim was death and war... I just started much before story wise...

The good part is I planned something different then yours, so it will be interesting for both of us to read each others FFs. Keep reading!!! ( A different perspective to Alzia Story)

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Shopau

YUP ...
Thats's what I meant when I said the original idea for Nek Dil Zaalim was death and war... I just started much before story wise...

The good part is I planned something different then yours, so it will be interesting for both of us to read each others FFs. Keep reading!!! ( A different perspective to Alzia Story)

yaa I just remembered that u had said that right after I clicked the post button for my previous comment. Hehe

yes im very much excited to read ur SS just as much as ur excited to read mine.

update soon. Much love

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486792

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

First of all,I am extremely sorry Arshi for being late.I hope that you will forgive me.😊

Yaar,this chapter made me emotional😭 These two deserved all the happiness in the world.They deserved to have a blissful and happy life and yet this did not happen😭 Its heartbreaking.🥺

You are a very powerful writer Arshi.👏 Reading this made us all emotional.You have put each and every word beautifully.Hats off to you!!!👏

And here are your hugs-🤗🤗🤗

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Astoria
First of all,I am extremely sorry Arshi for being late.I hope that you will forgive me.😊
Yaar,this chapter made me emotional😭 These two deserved all the happiness in the world.They deserved to have a blissful and happy life and yet this did not happen😭 Its heartbreaking.🥺
You are a very powerful writer Arshi.👏 Reading this made us all emotional.You have put each and every word beautifully.Hats off to you!!!👏

And here are your hugs-🤗🤗🤗

Arrey meri jaan phir sorry bol rahi hai... naa bol yaar...i understand...and sooner or later...u comment na thats what matters to me...bhale hii do teen words ka bhi ho. gets me encouraged and geared up to write the next one🤗

i know...it tears me up from inside literally to plan and even think abt their end...while jotting these down itself gives me the feel of heaviness and cold inside. they deserved a bigger share of happiness compared to what they got. but i promise u that even through the heartbreaks and tears of reading the end...u guys will smile. i will put it in that way...i just hope i am able to deliver that well...as that day comes close im getting nervous from inside...

thanks for the sweet words of appreciation love...hugsss back🤗

Edited by arshia200 - 9 years ago

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overactor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

arshi u almost made me cry 😭 why oh why did they die so bad in the battle field😭 i am feeling so heavy hearted that i can't write more, u r awesome at writing continue soon😳

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: overactor
arshi u almost made me cry 😭 why oh why did they die so bad in the battle field😭 i am feeling so heavy hearted that i can't write more, u r awesome at writing continue soon😳

Thank u love for the lovely comments...
i too cried a bit while writing this chapter...bt the next ones gna be a happy one...stay tuned 😊
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