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Posted: 9 years ago
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Alzia are Alzia ..!!
Alzia aur unka endless love kahin bhi start ho sakta hai 😆
I can't believe this is your 1st attempt at writing ! So brilliant yarr. Loved it ..
Jis story ka prologue itna dangerous hai, toh story kitni katil hogi ..!!
Update soonish...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Alzia are Alzia ..!!
Alzia aur unka endless love kahin bhi start ho sakta hai 😆
I can't believe this is your 1st attempt at writing ! So brilliant yarr. Loved it ..
Jis story ka prologue itna dangerous hai, toh story kitni katil hogi ..!!
Update soonish...


Thanks meri jaan🤗
all u guys were so encouraging towards me i cant thank you enough for that.
I have almost completed the first chapter keeping in mind all ur wishes of reading Alzia romance. will update it tomorrow InshAllah

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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful starting! dear




He fought the funny and growing urge inside him to run towards her and take her in his arms and kiss her in front of everyone present there.

"Don't be stupid !" " This is a battlefield and theres a war going on here for crying out loud Mirza !"

"Who cares ?" " Shes my wife" "I can do anything I want to her, do I have to be worried about these douches around me ?"


this is the most lovely part of all... wow! i'am day dreming altunia saying this to razia... my god prologe is much intersting...totally diffrent from other's...thanks for the pm...continue soon.

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Thanks Shravani meri jaan !! update coming up sooon today...already done writing just a bit of editing required...stay tuned...will be done by early evening 😉
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CHAPTER ONE

NOTE -
Even though Urdu is my second language, I am not very strong with it. Hence to deliver perfect emotions and feelings, Some of their conversations are in English. Please excuse me for that🥱

*CLANG* came the sound of Altunia's sword just centimeters above Razias neck but successfully clashing with the enemy's sword, saving Razia in the nick of time. He pushed the enemy behind with full force with his other arm. He fell backwards. Altunia took slow steps towards him shaking with rage. He was about to slash his Mohtarma's neck, that too when she was helpless and without any weapons.

Fear rose on the enemy's face seeing Altunia's rage. He had heard from reliable sources that once Altunia is angry, he destroys everything thats in front of him without a blink. He tried to get up again and hit Altunia with his sword but with an easy push this time on his face which felt more like a hard slap, he fell down again. Razia watched all this with eyes wide in shock as it was a rare sight to see her Mirza so angry that he starts shaking with rage. Altunia continued walking towards the enemy and the enemy this time crawled backwards joining his hands together stammering something like "Humein baksh do".

"Kaha tha humne..." said Altunia dangerously

Bohot pehle kaha tha... aur aaj bhi keh rahe hai

Batameeziyan Mirza ko pasand nahi hai...khaas kar ke uski Mohtarma ke saath.

Saying these words he put his foot on the enemy's throat, causing him to choke. His foot was so heavy, crushing him underneath that what he was trying to say made no sense to anyone.

"Mirza !" said Razia in shock running towards him

"Yeh kya kar rahe hai aap ? Koi iss tarah ek sipahi ko jung mein maarta hai kya ?"

Mirzas head turned to the left where his Mohtarma was standing, facing her. The rage didnt leave his eyes. With one heavy and final crush he completely choked the enemy-soldier to death. He removed his foot from the enemy's throat and put it back to the ground but his eyes continued to stare at Razia, in a little less rage from before.

"Humne kaha tha na aapse Mohtarma ki aap Bhatinda mein hii rahiye. Lekin aap kisiki sunti kahan hai ? Aur hamari toh bilkul bhi nahi. Bas apne Shauhar ki baaton ko taalna aata hai. And where is your armour ? And your shield ?"

Razia gave a tiny smile, eyes twinkling, she slowly raised her finger and pointed towards him. For a split second Altunia thought shes pointing something at the back and maybe somewhere there she lost her armour and shield. He turned back but saw nothing there, he quickly turned his head and stared at her in disbelief ...

"Kahan hai ??? "

"Aap !" Said Razia. "You are my shield, You are my armour. With you around I don't need to have these artificial metallic stuff protecting me."

Altunia was startled at her answer. His eyes softened a bit as he continued to stare at her without any word. She was looking at him with deep tenderness in her eyes for him. Just how many times is this man going to save my life ? How does he manage to come to me on time ?

Finally Altunia snapped out of the eye contact coming back to reality and making his eyes a bit angry again in the hope that it scares her a bit so that she listens to him.

"Look" he said angrily in a dominating tone

"You need to get out of here this instant. Our army is small, I had warned you about that before but you just continued to dance on my head with your zidd of coming here. Now i have seen how dangerous its getting for you to be here, Khuda ka shukar hai I came here right on time to save you...else.."

he stopped talking. he turned cold from inside at the thought that what would have happened if he had not come here on time. But no... not this time. I will not listen to her this time.

"Ab aur koi manmaani nahi Mohtarma, aap yahan se jaa rahi hai bas, yeh ek Shauhar ka hukum hai uske Begum ke liye"

All this time Razia looked at him innocently with a slight smile. Hearing his tone at the words Shauhar Begum and Hukum she started laughing.

"Aapko lag raha hai hum mazak kar rahe hai ?" He said as dangerously as he could, but from the inside he was fighting a battle to hide his smile because he knew exactly the reason why she found this funny.

"Kya kaha aapne Subedaar Sahab" said Razia playfully

"Shauhar ka HUKUM hai Begum ke liye ?? Subedaar sahab, aapki dost banne se mashooka tak, mashooka se sultan tak, sultan se aapki qaidi tak, aur qaidi se aapki begum banne tak ek baar bhi aapka HUKUM humpe chala hai kabhie ? Hukum toh hum apna chalate thy aap par. Saying this she laughed again.

Altunia's eyes narrowed a little in a dangerous way. He dropped his sword put both his hands around her waist and pulled her close. She stopped laughing instantly, a bit astonished at his this kind of harkat in the middle of a battlefield. Seeing a little fire in his emerald eyes always gave a strange feeling of being slightly scared from the inside, though she never admitted this to him, She lowered her gaze half out of shyness and half out of a bit of fear of his intense, angry but passionate gaze. Her hands were on his chest, struggling a bit to break free.

"Humein aap par kabhie apna hukum nahi chalaya kyunki hum aapse beintehaa mohobbat karte hai" he said a little angrily

"Accha ? Toh humne aap par hukum chalaya apna iska matlab hum aapse mohobbat nahi kartey thy ?" She asked, looking up back at him, a little annoyed.

Alnunia gave her a slight smirk but his eyes remained intense " Aap ko hum ek baat bata dete hai. Zidd todne mein aur hukum chalane mein zyada faraq nahi hota hai Mohtarma, bhale hii sare aam humne aap par koi hukum nahi chalaya ho magar bandh darwazon ke peeche aapki zidd ko hamesha toda hai humne" He smirked a bit more, getting the satisfaction of seeing her eyes lower again due to complete shyness this time.

He got his face more closer to hers whispering "Yaad toh hoga na aapko...?"

He continued staring at her with a smirk and his intense green eyes, studying her expressions very carefully. She had turned crimson, trying her best not to smile out of shyness but it was in vain. The smile was very much evident on her face.

He knew what all she was thinking about. She was going in a flash back, Visions of her protest trying to run away from him as he kept walking closer with a seductive smile. Some of those times trying to escape were out of ego, some out of anger, some out of shyness where as some out of mazaak. All those times, yes ALL of those times he had managed to break her zidd of trying to escape from him, of trying not to give in to his demands whether it was to marry him, being intimate with him, or other things like not eating food and throwing tantrums due to anger and ego after being captured. All of those times he had been very slow, steady and tender with her, giving her time and space to be comfortable first. She was very ziddi yes but he was double of that. And he clearly knew that most of the times behind her No-No protest was a big Yes which she would try her best to hide. But Altunia knew her inside out. No one ever understood her better than him.

Mirza's tenderness had managed to break her zidd everytime. Every single time. True, his zidd had always bowed down humbly in front of hers but that was only if he was sure she wasn't hiding a yes behind her No-No protests. On a very few occassions he had given in to her demands specially when he felt she needed more time and space, but most the times he had broken her zidd.

Finally she looked up right into his green eyes and said sarcastically in a mocking tone " No ! I dont remember "

"Accha ?" He said passionately, "then let me remind you" he whispered as he drew his face closer.

She instantly knew what he was trying to do. She lowered her eyes quickly trying to get free of his clutches but it only kept getting tighter. Her hands were on his chest so in the process of trying to break free her nail accidentally touched the sword cut wound on his chest. Altunia hissed in pain but the grin did not leave his face. Razia looked up at him with half-apologetic and half-concerned eyes. He grinned more broadly at her "Haaye aapke dard dene ka saleekha kuch aisa hai ke humein ismein bhi ek ajeeb sa sukoon mehsoos hota hai" he said seductively.

He let one hand remain on her waist and the other hand was slowly brought upwards behind her head to keep in intact preventing it from shaking.

He wasted no time in taking her then. As he took her upper lip into his, her head suddenly stopped shaking, she froze and completely closed her eyes as if she was 'lost' in the moment with him. He slowly moved his hand back downwards to her waist and gently wrapped his hands around it massaging it a bit. She slowly took her hands off from his chest and wrapped it around his shoulders. His kiss was more passionate, demanding and aggressive, where as hers was soft and sensual. She moaned slightly as he pulled her closer to him.

She was melting in his arms and he desperately wished for time to come to a stand still.

Their romantic moment was rudely interrupted by the loud neighing of a horse. Razia quickly came back to her senses and broke the kiss and broke free from his clutches. She stepped backwards a little from him, looking at him in disbelief. He, on the other hand was grinning broadly as if he had just won the war.

She looked on her right at the source of her sound. She saw an enemy soldier on the horse a little distance ahead of them busy fighting with a soldier from their army. She looked left and right again fearfully making sure no one saw them. All were busy in their fighting.

She looked back at Altunia.

"What on earth you think you were doing ?" She said in her usual drama protest

"Yeh waqt hai koi ? Yeh jagah hai koi ? Yuhi sare aam sabke saamne...sharam lehaaz ki toh..." She looked around her left and then again on her right and continued scolding him then " Agar kisine dekh liya hota toh kya sochta woh ?"

Altunia chuckled loudly, "Yehi sochta na Mohtarma ki kitna haseen joda hai, aur kya haseen nazraana hai, inn dono ko inki mann ki aag ko bujhane dete hai phir inn par talwaar chalayenge" he said happily. "Aur waise bhi Mohtarma, Mirza yeh aap se baar baar keh chuka hai kii aap ki tarah humein duniya ki soch ki parwah nahi hai, aur kya galat kiya hai humein ki kisi se chup chupa ke karein ? Apni begum ke saath hi toh..." he smiled again tracing his lips

"Mirza ne kuch galat nahi kiya hai, Begum hai aap hamari aur yeh baat sab ko pata hai, phir hum jaisi bhi mannmarzi kare apni begum ke saath chahe woh hamare khwab gah mein ho, hamam mein ho, deewan-e-aam mein ho, baagiche mein ho, astabal mein ho, bawarchi khaane mein ho ya khule aam maidan-e-jung mein ho" he waved his hand around the place. "Koi farak nahi padta Mirza ko iss baat se ki log kya kahenge"

Razia was just staring at him without any expressions now unsure as to how she should react. He had just taken names of all those places where they shared all their passionate moments in, Maidan-e-jung now being added to that list.

Mirza continued with a little serious face this time " Par aap mudda na badaliye Mohtarma, Hum aaj pehli baar aapki kisi bhi mannmarzi ko sarakhon par nahi rakhenge. Hamari majboori hai. Jaan ki baat hai aapki jo bohot pehle se hii humari ho chuki thi, aur hamari jaan, jo aapke andar hamari amanat bann kar basi hui hai usko humein har halat mein mehfooz rakhna hoga. Aapko yahan se jaana hoga Mohtarma."

They were distracted by the sound of a horse again, this time charging towards them.

"Yeh dekhiye" said Altunia with a smirk, "Lagta hai iss janab ko hum par nazrey inayat karne ka waqt mil gaya, ab inko kya pata inki maut aayi hai" he looked back at razia with a smirk, who wasn't looking at him but at the enemy coming towards him. Fire rose back in her eyes again which made Altunia weak in the knees once again. Controlling his urge, he watched her pick up his sword from the ground, her eyes not leaving the enemy. He was not scared for her this time, for he knew she was ready for him and would finish him off in seconds. Besides, he was standing right next to her this time ready to become her shield once again if required.

He smiled broadly as he watched her strike and fight with the enemy soldier for a few seconds with a very heavy blaze in her eyes. From the time she had come in the battlefield Altunia noticed that she fought with everyone with the same blaze neither increasing nor decreasing, so angry as if this wasn't just a fight between them and Moiz, it was as if she had a personal grudge against every soldier of his for maybe betraying her and joining hands with Moizuddin after she fell as a Sultan. Finally slashing his throat she watched in rage as he fell down from his horse. She looked down upon him for sometime and then with the same rage in her eyes looked back at Altunia

"Hamari jaan ki fiqar hai aapko ? Jo ab aapki amanat hai ? Toh theek hai, hum bhi aapko yeh bata dete hai ki ab agar hamari jaan jayegi toh sirf aur sirf aapki baahon mein, kahin aur dum todna humein waise bhi gawarah nahi."

*End of chapter 1*

PRECAP - Altunia and Razia fighting some of the enemies together having nok-jhoks in between. Romance will be shown in a little different way from now.

Hope u guys liked it

Note - Please excuse me for the grammatical and spelling errors.


Edited by arshia200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yepii!!! me 1st it was so passionate...majhdahar mein kyoun rok diya??? dil mange more.
😆and the best part was
the long list of places where they had shared a passionate momment! great even they didn't left the battelfield...🤣🤣
my god by the way it was too hottt... update soon...thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshravani

yepii!!! me 1st it was so passionate...majhdahar mein kyoun rok diya??? dil mange more.

😆and the best part was
the long list of places where they had shared a passionate momment! great even they didn't left the battelfield...🤣🤣
my god by the way it was too hottt... update soon...thanks 4 the pm.


Thank uuu love... hehee im glad u liked it. Will update soon gotta start writing on the 2nd chapter...im having 2 days break from work so hopefully will update by tomorrowish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I thoroughly enjoyed your story! You're a good writer! Please continue <3


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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!
These Altunia and Razia are so in sink with how I have always dreamt of them to be...

"Haaye aapke dard dene ka saleekha kuch aisa hai ke humein ismein bhi ek ajeeb sa sukoon mehsoos hota hai" - Haaye main marjaawan ... I loved the Line❤️

And "Shauhar ka HUKUM hai Begum ke liye ?? Subedaar sahab, aapki dost banne se mashooka tak, mashooka se sultan tak, sultan se aapki qaidi tak, aur qaidi se aapki begum banne tak ek baar bhi aapka HUKUM humpe chala hai kabhie ? Hukum toh hum apna chalate thy aap par. Saying this she laughed again. 🤣 I suddenly burst out laughing in the office and my two colleagues asking me what's the joke about... AB kaise bataun kyun hasi ja rahi hoon????😳

I had a wide grin on my face while reading the whole update... And I still can't stop blushing☺️

And yeah - Razia was just staring at him without any expressions now unsure as to how she should react. He had just taken names of all those places where they shared all their passionate moments in, Maidan-e-jung now being added to that list. -- OMG Altunia is so NAUGHTY 😲 Bechari Razia handling his DEMANDS 🤬 all the time...

LOVED THE UPDATE DEAR WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT 👏

Cotinue soon 🤗 bigg hugs

love always
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh arshi i absolutely love u and ur idea, Altunia kissing his begum in the battle field was epic ziddi mohtarma k zid ka tod sirf mirza k paas he 😎 uff i loved the chapter completely ⭐️ and shohar ka hukum aww that moment was just so cute poor razia, itne hot husband ko kiss krne k baad ladne ki taaqat kahan se aai usme 😆

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