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Posted: 10 years ago
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Razia was in the middle of a beautiful garden, smiling dancing, it was full of colors, colors of joy, colors of happiness, she sniffed the smell of the beautiful flowers around her and inhaled the pure air, and the she saw the face of the person who made her the happiest, he smiled at her and raised his hand for her to take, she reached her hand out, to give it to him and suddenly she heard someone saying, "Sultan...aapki awaam ko aapki zarurat he" she turned her head in the direction of the sound, and saw her throne, and her crown placed on it, she turned back to see Altunia who was no longer smiling but seemed to be furious, "hamen bacha lijiye Sultan, hamari isme koi galti nahi" she heard a familiar voice say, she turned her head again and saw Yaqut lying in the middle of war field surrounded by fire, and the lamp that lid the fire was in his hand, who was the person she loved the most, she saw anger and fire in his emerald eyes, the fire completely encircled Yaqut and he yelled, Sultan" before he breathe his last

"Yaqut" Razia woke up sweating, she realized it was a bad dream, but why? Why did she dream this way? Yaqut dying in the middle of battle field? Was he in danger, since he was out for the same reasons, her throat was completely dry and there was a lump in her throat. She got out of her bed and poured some water in the glass and drank it, then she stood by the window and sniffed some fresh air.

Razia; maula..Yaqut ki hifazat krna, humare galat faisle ki saza use kabhi mat dijiga, jo saza ho wo hamen hi milni chahiye

She tried to sleep again but was restless, but sleep did take over and she forgot all her worries for a while.

The next morning Razia was again tensed about the dream, she was getting ready for the court when a maid came to inform something

Maid; Mubarak ho Sultan khushkhabri he, Malik Yaqut aur baqi fojdaar gaazi ban k laute hen

Razia; sach main? Mailk Yaqut wapas agaye

Razia forgot about the dream and ran to meet Yaqut, she was in such a hurry that she didn;t see Altunia who crossed her and even greeted her.

Altunia; inhe kya hogya he?

Fatima; Mubarak ho mirza, sultanate ne us daaku pe fata hasil ki hai, Malik Yaqut aur baaqi sb khair se wapas lot aaye hen

Altunia's became a statue, he felt as if his heart was crushed into a billion pieces.

Altunia; uske aate hi hamen bhul gai aap? pr hum ye hone nhi denge, Malik ALtunia ka junoon hen aap, aur hum apne junoon ko har qeemat pe hasil krna jaante hen, dunya ki koi bhi taakat aapko humse cheen nhi skti phir wo Yaqut ho ya aapki puri sultanate.

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Altunia joined everyone else where Yaqut and others were being welcomed

Razia; aapko is bahaduri k liye kya inaam chahiye , aap bejijhak ho k maangiye, humare bas me hua to zarur pura krenge

Yaqut; aap k to wese hi bht ehsan hen is ghulam pe Sultan humen aur kya chahiye humen sb to mil chuka he jo chaha tha us se bhi kai zyada

Altunia was standing with Atigin

Atigin; agaya wapas chamcha, wo daaku bhi na, itna sasta niqla uska hausla, is se hi haar gya, acha hua foj k ziada log barbaad nhi huye

Altunia; sahi kehte ho biradar, is se haar gya , sher smjh k jis se sultanate khof kha rhi thi wo to chuhe se bhi gya guzra niqla

Razia awarded Yaqut by giving him a new sword, and the everybody left the courtroom to enjoy the feast

Altunia; geedad k shiqaar pe daawat-e-aam humne pehli baar dekhi he

Razia was looking for Altunia with a jalebi in her hand but he had left the feast and gone back to his room.

Razia; pta nhi kahan hen ye mirza bhi, unhi ki wja se to aaj ye fata mili he hamen, unke mashware ko aise hi kam aank rhe the hum, wo sach me sabse zaheen hen.

Fatima; kya hua Sultan kise dhund rhi hen aap?

RAzia; miza ko aur kise,,tumne dekha he unhe kahin?

Fatima; haan wo to apni khwab gaah me wapas chale gye, shayad mijaaz theek nhi

Razia; ya Allah kya hua khaireeyat, zarur kuch ulta seedha kha liya hoga hum dekh k aate hen

She was leaving the feast to meet him when a courtman stopped her

Courtman; Sultan kaha ja rhi hen aap, sb mehmaan aap hi ka pooch rhe hen

Razia; aap chaliye hum aate hen

she was again leaving when Shazia pulled her

Shazia; RAzia tum chalo na hum tumhe apni kuch khas saheliyon se milwate hen chalo, Razia tried alot but all in vain, and she was unable to leave.

Altunia sat alone in his room, his heart was heavy, but he was not letting his tears escape his eyes.

Altunia; wah Sultane-Hind wah, humen ek hi din me bhula diya, hum bas ek waqti khilona the shayad aapke liye, jo tab tak aapka man behlata rha jab tak wo mardood wapas nhi agaya, bas yehi thi aapki dosti, aapka wo sharmana? sab jhoot tha wo? hum yahan akele hen aur aapko is baat ka bhi ehsaas nahi k hum wahan nhi hen, bas yehi ehmiyat thi hamari aapke dil me? Nahi mohtarma nahi, mirza ko ye manzoor nahi

he took out his sword and gave himself a wound on his hand, blood fell on the cream color carpet.

Altunia; aaj hamara lahu baha he, kal uska bahe ga, aaj hum ghayal huye hen, kal wo ghayal hoga, aaj hum tadap rhe hen aur kal aap tadpengi Sultan, aap hamarajunoon hen aur junoon-e-ishq me to kaiyon ne jaan ki baazi lgai he ab ye Altunia apne imaan ki baazi lagane se bhi na qatrayega.

Mohobbat ki thi humne tumse dil o jaan se
ab is mohobbat ki khatir jayenge hum imaan se
Khud ko to kr chuke hen badnaam
ab tujhe bhi ruswa kr jayenge zaman-e-aam me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Sonu,meri jaan,I was blown away.Literally blown away.You left me speechless.👏👏👏
Finally,Mirza ke andar ka Malik Altunia jaag gaya.⭐️

Raz had a dream about Yaqut.Well,it was a foreboding.Aur yeh Yaqut?? Sapne mein bhi Sultan se help maang raha tha?Khudki hifazat nahin kar sakta hai kya???🤢

And Altunia's junoon.His passion.I am calling him Altunia because he is not the playful lover Mirza anymore.He is a man on the mission and he seeks justice for his broken heart.Apni aankhon se aansoon behne nahin diye usne.For he knew that he would need to preserve his rage to unleash it on those who come in between him and his love.That is Malik Ikhtiarruddin Altunia!!!👏👏

I wish that the CVs take a leaf out of your book,Sonu.They should know that the viewers want to see the real Malik Altunia.

And lastly,though I know that it won't be enough yet,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW!!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Astoria

Sonu,meri jaan,I was blown away.Literally blown away.You left me speechless.👏👏👏

Finally,Mirza ke andar ka Malik Altunia jaag gaya.⭐️

Raz had a dream about Yaqut.Well,it was a foreboding.Aur yeh Yaqut?? Sapne mein bhi Sultan se help maang raha tha?Khudki hifazat nahin kar sakta hai kya???🤢

And Altunia's junoon.His passion.I am calling him Altunia because he is not the playful lover Mirza anymore.He is a man on the mission and he seeks justice for his broken heart.Apni aankhon se aansoon behne nahin diye usne.For he knew that he would need to preserve his rage to unleash it on those who come in between him and his love.That is Malik Ikhtiarruddin Altunia!!!👏👏

I wish that the CVs take a leaf out of your book,Sonu.They should know that the viewers want to see the real Malik Altunia.

And lastly,though I know that it won't be enough yet,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW!!!!👏👏👏


I told u na Malik ki jealousy abhi baaqi he abhi to uska ghussa badehga 😈
Cvs to pta nhi kya chahte hen🥱
The dream had a bigger meaning, raz wanting to hold mirza's hand but she was distracted and that led to the fire that burned everything. And she isn't at fault too coz she loves him but circumstances 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

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I told u na Malik ki jealousy abhi baaqi he abhi to uska ghussa badehga 😈
Cvs to pta nhi kya chahte hen🥱
The dream had a bigger meaning, raz wanting to hold mirza's hand but she was distracted and that led to the fire that burned everything. And she isn't at fault too coz she loves him but circumstances 😭

Yaar abhi mera aisa haal hai toh aage kya hoga???😳
Bhagwan se yahin dua hai inn CVs ko thodi si sadbuddhi mile.Abhi bhi der nahin hui hai.
I see now what the dream meant.No one was at fault.Only the circumstances were such😭
But the funny part was Yaqut calling Raz to help him.😆
Jaanti hoon that this update was a bit serious but uss scene ke baare mein soch ke mujhe hasi aati hai😆
Malik Rocked!!!⭐️ Yaqut Shocked!!🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was going to write the same thing just now. I hope the CVs read the stories here of this forum and take some ideas. The transformation from the sweet mirza to the grey malik was just too good and im hoping to see something like that only on tv soon enough. 😃
secondly, isnt razia in love with mirza yet ? Im still a little confused about that.
And lastly is a complain from me.
itnaa tadpake kyun update karte ho ?? I was dying to read it and infact was about to drop a PM to u begging for an update. 😭
now his character has turned grey now im definitely gonna nag u for sooner updates hope u dont mind😆
aur haan yaar tum log sab apna apna version of Razia Sultan serial khol do 😆...im enjoying here
big hug to u...thank u for the update🤗

Haan ek aur baat...request hai actually. Since mirza has turned or is turning grey...can we see a lil angry cum passionate moments btwn them ( like how it was on tv their almost kiss one...he was angry at first n then became a lil romantic) please please...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshia200

I was going to write the same thing just now. I hope the CVs read the stories here of this forum and take some ideas. The transformation from the sweet mirza to the grey malik was just too good and im hoping to see something like that only on tv soon enough. 😃

secondly, isnt razia in love with mirza yet ? Im still a little confused about that.
And lastly is a complain from me.
itnaa tadpake kyun update karte ho ?? I was dying to read it and infact was about to drop a PM to u begging for an update. 😭
now his character has turned grey now im definitely gonna nag u for sooner updates hope u dont mind😆
aur haan yaar tum log sab apna apna version of Razia Sultan serial khol do 😆...im enjoying here
big hug to u...thank u for the update🤗

Haan ek aur baat...request hai actually. Since mirza has turned or is turning grey...can we see a lil angry cum passionate moments btwn them ( like how it was on tv their almost kiss one...he was angry at first n then became a lil romantic) please please...😳

yr i have a bz week so i update mostly on weekends until i get a super notch idea for the update😆 i knew u must be waiting so i decided to make an update as quick as possible😃

Razia is in that state where u start developing feelings for a person, the fantasy period before love and after infatuation, even Altunia was in that phase only but his jealousy from Yaqut is at a dangerous level coz he can't share his mohtarma's attention, Razia's fondness for Yaqut is not going well with Altunia and suddenly when he was gone she grew closer to him and on his return bcoz of the dream thing she kind of ignored Altunia which didn't go well with him😳

u will get ur dose of passion soonish😉

hug back 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
I know I know its just a story par padhne k baad I m so scared n nervous yeh soch kar ki Mirza aage kya karega ki I m having goose bumps right now..!!
Waise Mirza nahi, Altunia kehna chahiye since ab wo madhosh awara aashiq kahin kho gaya hai aur uski jagah ek badle aur junoon se bhare shaqs ne le li hai.
Sonu, u r just fabulous at writing yarr !
Waiting 4 ur update ..!! 😊
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Originally posted by: ..radiance...

I know I know its just a story par padhne k baad I m so scared n nervous yeh soch kar ki Mirza aage kya karega ki I m having goose bumps right now..!!
Waise Mirza nahi, Altunia kehna chahiye since ab wo madhosh awara aashiq kahin kho gaya hai aur uski jagah ek badle aur junoon se bhare shaqs ne le li hai.
Sonu, u r just fabulous at writing yarr !
Waiting 4 ur update ..!! 😊


Arre are ye to sirf trailer he picture to abhi baqi he mere dost😛 haan haan no mirza isiliye i always call him Altunia in my stories bas raz use mirza bulati he😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Altunia was walking in the corridors when he heard the sound of swords clashing with each other, he went to check who was practicising and the moment he saw her, his eyes widened, for a while he forgot everything else in his life, nothing else mattered, his eyes were fixed on her focussed, she was the centre, pulling him, while the rest of the world became invisible to him, her hair were open loose, flying with air as she twisted and turned in her moves with the sword, her eyes focussed on her target, her muscles ready to attack, it was like watching a tigress attacking her prey, and for Altunia the most beautiful sight that could ever be, coz it was not only her immense beauty or her kindness that he loved, what he loved the most was the fire in her, a strange fire that was like ice to his own burning self, she was his obsession because she was the only one who could match him in all aspects.
He moved towards her, he just couldn't control his steps, she had a gravitational pull on him and he couldn't ignore it, he walked towards her with his gaze fixed on her, he was so lost that if someone had crossed him her wouldn't notice, he reached close to her and grabbed a sword , pulling the soldier away he himself hit her sword with his.

Altunia; ek sherni he sultanate me akeli si, na de skta he usko taqar koi aur, jab sher ho saamne to kyun kr panja maare he masloomon pe

Razia smiled, and her smile was like a cure for his wounds, wounds he had almost forgotten about, her smile for him was different then usual, it had a tinge of blush and her eyes sparkled like diamonds.

Razia; Sher se sherni kyun kr lade, jab sher ne sherni ko bin lade krdiya he ghayal

they started fighting, their swords clashing was not a noise anymore it was musical, their sords colided in such a fashion that the viewers would feel they were a part of a dance performance instead of a fight.

Altunia; ghustakh sher ki itni majaal, jungle ki rani ko kiya ghayal? krde sir qalm uska sherni, wrna pad jayega bhari ye badsalook ghustakh

Razia; sherni kya kre, ghayal ho k bhi na he wo naraz na mehsoos hta he use koi dard, k jungle ki rani k dil pe bhi raj he kisi ghustakh sher ka

their swords kept clashing but their eyes were locked, they were staring into each other's eyes unaware of the world behind.

Altunia; gustakh ki ye majal k sherni k dil pe khadi krdi apni hi sultanate? is gustakh se sherni ko rehna hoga bach k, wrna sher ki dahad krdegi uske dil ko kamzor or beqaar

Razia pinned him to the pillar.

Razia; na miyan, sher ki dahad sherni ko kamzor na kregi, sher to sherni ki sabse badi taqat he, uska ishq uska junoon he, sher k liye hi he wo zinda, sher k liye uski jaan bhi hazir he, us sher ko to maloom bhi na hoga, k sherni k dil pe raaj he uska, aur raj bhi esa k koi uska takht palta na skega, hazaar dushman bhi ayen to sherni k dil se sher ko hata na skega, us sher k rang me rang chuki he sherni, ab futoor uske ishq ka koi utar na skega.

They kept staring in each other's eyes, their lips were close, they got closer, their eyes were half shut, lips so close they could feel each other's breaths on their faces.
Yaqut arrived and called her, "Sultan"

Razia at once moved away, but she lost balance and was about to fall, Altunia grabbed her waist.
He got furious at Yaqut, he helped Razia stand properly and went to Yaqut, his face reminded him of all his wounds that had suddenly started ti burn again. His eyes went red as he stood infront of Yaqut.

Altunia; is tarah peeche se awaz de k kyun chonkaya Sultan ko?, gir jati wo to? unhe chot lag jati to? aapki aqal kya sirf darbariyon k saamne dikhawe ki he?

Razia at once interefered

Razia; chodiye na mirza, koi zaruri masla agaya hoga

Altunia; aapki salamti se ziada zaruri kya hoskta he mohtarma?

Razia; galti hamari he mirza, unhe thodi pta tha k...Yaqut aap btaiye kya masla he

Yaqut; kuch khas nhi sultan wo hum btane aaye the k aaj darbar barkhast hogya he

Altunia; itni si baat k liye aap..

Altunia moved forward but Razia pulled his arm.

Altunia faked a smile

Altunia; jee Sultan hum jaante hen, Malik YAqut to farishta seerat insan hen, galti to hum jese shaitanon se hti he, maaf kijiye hum ne inki shaan me gustakhi krdi

Yaqut; Malik Altunia, har baat ki ek had hti he, aap har waqt hamen zaleel krne ki koshish krte rehte hen, hamare sabr ka baandh toot na jaye kahin

Altunia; to tod do na roka kis ne he? humne to aapko bardasht krne ko nhi kaha, balke kabhi aur kyun aaj hi do do haath kr k maamla khtam krdete hen.

Altunia pointed his sword at him, Yaqut took out his sword too and they started fighting.

Razia put her hand on her forehead.

Razia; ya Maula hamari kya galti he jo in dono ki ladai krwa di aapne subah subah, ab Yaqut ko kon samjhaye mirza ghusse me unka qatl bhi krskte hen, hamen inhe rokna hoga is se pehle mamla aur garam ho

Altunia was furios and his anger was standing out, Yaqut was no match for him, but he was trying his best and putting up. Razia kept thinking of a way to stop them. She looked a vase and got a plan, she moved quickly and hit the vase, the vase fell on her foot and she screamed. At once both of them stopped and ran to her.

Altunia; mohtarma!! kya hua ye kese hua?

Yaqut; aap theek to hen Sultan?

Razia; haan wo hum bas takra gye is se

Yaqut; bht ghera gao he hamen dekhne dijiye

But Altunia pushed him away.

Altunia; door raho hamari mohtarma se, darbari ho to darbar tak khud ko mehdud rkho, khandaan ka hissa banne ki koshish na kro miyan wrna humse bura koi nhi hoga

Razia sighed in helplessness. Altunia sat down and removed the broken pieces of the vase from her foot.

Altunia; ab khade kya ho ja k hakeem ko bulao

Yaqut nodded and went away, Altunia picked Razia up in his arms.

Razia looked at him with love.

Razia; aapke liye dunya me sbse khas kon he?

Altunia; aap nahi hen!

Razia; kyun?

Altunia; kyun k aap hamari sunti hi nhi, apna khyal nhi rakh skti aap? aapki chot aapko nhi hamen mehsoos hti he

Razia smiled again.

Razia; pr hamen to dard hi nhi ho rha

Altunia; acha? haan kese hoga saare dard sehne ka theka to humne le rkha he na

She rested her head on his chest, his heartbeat was raised and she could clearly hear it, and she could feel that his heart belonges to her, she closed her eyes and put her hand on his heart, and she was lost like listening to a lullaby, and she didn't know when she fell asleep listening to the love coming from his heart
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
FIRST THINGS FIRST

Please send me a PM of your update next time. I had no idea that you updated again...i thought you just replied to the comments here yesterday. Its a good thing i opened this story to read it all over again...then my eyes fell on the new update.

Now coming back to the new chapter

🤣🤣🤣 Whaaat ?? just whaaat was happening...i was so excited and laughing all the way at Altunias anger towards Yaqut Pakoot. Bloody idiot on earth he is😡 I WILL NEVER FORGIVE HIM FOR INTERRUPTING THEIR ALMOST KISS.

Your URDU AND SHERS YAAAR...I am officially your BIGGEST fan here of ur Urdu and sher and shayari....send some on these to Babaji he could really take some tips from you...I am serious...
I need to learn from you...you are amazing !

I loved the way you described their talks refering to gustakh sher and sherni...etc etc...i must have read that conversation atleast 10 times before commenting here...😊 and will keep reading it until i dont by heart it or get enough of it really...i sent this link to my cousin sister as well...shes not on india forums but i make her read some stories sometimes and shes in total awe of u...

KEEEP WRITING THIS WAY AND KEEP GIVING US UR DAILY DOSE OF URDU AND SHAYARI AND CUTE CONVOS AND SHERS

I LOVE U TO BITSSS YOU MADE MY MORNING !🤗🤗

UPDATE SOON SOON SOOON... (yeh bhi kehna padega kya ?😉)

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