Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Itne time baad finally...
Dheere dheere sultan bhi mirza k ishq k rang mein rangne lagi hai
Bechari Shazia aapi ko confusn mein daal diya Razia ne 😆
D chapter was d best one uptill now... Update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Itne time baad finally...
Dheere dheere sultan bhi mirza k ishq k rang mein rangne lagi hai
Bechari Shazia aapi ko confusn mein daal diya Razia ne 😆
D chapter was d best one uptill now... Update soon..

kya kru yr exams the😳 to late hogai
abhi to sultan ki deewangi haden paar krne wali he😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Sonu,take my advice and write your own books of shayari.👏👏👏 Aapki shayari padh kar aisa laga ki jaise khud Mirza bol raha ho From your update,it seems that Razia is in a dilemma about her feelings for Mirza.And that dilemma is beautifull portrayed over here👏👏 From Razia and Shazia's convo,I am curious to know the equations between ShaGin😉 Glad that Razia is not fussing over Yaqut😆 And at last,Mirza and Razia's holi.It was just freaking awesome!!!😳😳


My fav line from this chapter is Rang di chunar humne ishq k rang se, wo waqt door nhi jab mehbooba bhi rang jayegi😆

And at last,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW👏👏👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Astoria

Sonu,take my advice and write your own books of shayari.👏👏👏 Aapki shayari padh kar aisa laga ki jaise khud Mirza bol raha ho From your update,it seems that Razia is in a dilemma about her feelings for Mirza.And that dilemma is beautifull portrayed over here👏👏 From Razia and Shazia's convo,I am curious to know the equations between ShaGin😉 Glad that Razia is not fussing over Yaqut😆 And at last,Mirza and Razia's holi.It was just freaking awesome!!!😳😳



My fav line from this chapter is Rang di chunar humne ishq k rang se, wo waqt door nhi jab mehbooba bhi rang jayegi😆

And at last,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW👏👏👏

haha credit goes to Rohit and shailesh sir k mere andar ki soyi hui shayar jaga di😆 there was a time i used to do alot of shayari but then i lost my interest😆
u will get shagin too and a surprise too😉 zaroon miyan ki masroofiyat😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Razia entered her room and was staring at her dupatta which was all red with the color Altunia wiped from his face. Fatima entered and shouted

Fatima; Ya Allah ye kya hogya Sultan, laaiye me abhi dho deti hun wrna rang jayega nhi sahi se

Razia held the dupatta close to her heart

Razia; nahi..koi zarurat nahi he, ese hi theek hai ye, tum jao

Fatima; lekin Sultan, ye rang

Razia; humne kaha na sab sahi he, isdupatte ko koi nahi dohega kabhi nahi

Fatima; jo hukum

Fatima left. Razia kep staring at the dupatta

Razia; uff..Razia tum pagal ho chuki ho, ye..hum ise dhulwa hi lete hen...(she moved a few steps then stopped)..nahi..rehne dete hen, hamare paas to bht saare dupatte hen..ek pe rang lag gya to kya hua...chodo...hum hamam jaate hen, hamen to ghusal krna hi hoga na

She went to the hamam and was shocked to hear alot of giggling from inside

Razia; ye andar kya ho rha he hamam me? ye Sultan ka khas hamam he isme kisi ko jaane ki ijazat nahi

she said to Fatima

Fatima; haan wo hamen pta hai Sultan, magar dar asal wo Mirza ko nahana tha aur unke hamam me bht ganda paani jama hua pada he, baqi koi hamam abhi farig nahi to wo yahan chale gaye..unhone kaha tha k unhone aapko btaya he

Razia; mirza hen andar? to ye itni aurton ki khee khee krne ki awaz kyun aa rhi he?

Fatima; wo to Mirza ki dasiyan hen na, aap nahi jaanti jab miza hamam me hte hen to mehel ki aadhi se zaaid dasiyan umki madat ko pohonch jaati hen

Razia fumed. She marched inside in anger, all the maids stopped giggling and stood up.

Razia; abhi k abhi niqal jao yahan se wrna acha na hoga

All miads nodded and rushed out. Mirza turned and tried to hide himself

Altunia; Sultan ye kya harqaten hen, maana k aap sultan hen pr hamari bhi koi izzat hai k nahi, ese din dahade aap

Razia; ziada baniye mat aap, in dasiyon se to koi parda nhi aapko le de k puri dunya me humse hi chid he

Altunia: (coming closer to the edge) acha to aapko mana kisne kiya he, yun har waqt dasiyon se jalna ek sultan ki shan k khilaf he

Razia; jale hamari juti, aap ye btaiye aap hamare hamam me kiski ijazat se aaye hen?

Altunia; mirza ko kisi ki ijazat nhi chahiye hti mohtarma, ye to aap ache se jaanti hen

Razia; (in her head) hamari majboori ka faida uthana ye khoob jaante hen, kyun razia kyun hojati ho kamzor tum inke saamne

Altunia; kuch kaha aapne?

Razia; nahi! ab aap jaldi kijiye, aapki wja se hum rang se lat pat hen, hamen bhi ghusal krna he

Altunia; haan to itna bada hamam he, kafi jagah he aap bhi ajaiye

Razia; Mirza!!!!

Altunia winked and smirked

Razia; aaj aapka qatl kr k hi maanege hum

Razia moved to fast and in a hurry she tripped and fell into the water, splash, and the next thing she knew, she was all wet and inside the huge pool with Altunia, her dress went all transparent and she fel embarrased, she tried to cover herself with her arms, Altunia was staring like a person who saw the sun for the first time.

Razia; nasren hataiye

But he was not responding, he started to move closer, Razia started to move back

Razia; mirza, mirza hosh me aiye ye aap...aap ko hosh bhi he..mirza?

She hit the edge of the otherside, Altunia was so close to her, she closed her eyes. He came very close and touched her right eye, removed something and backed off.

Razia opened her eyes

Altunia; aapki palk he aankh me chali jati to takleef hti aapko

Razia was shocked.

Altunia; kya hua? aapko kya laga..(he laughed) ..arre hongi aap delhi ki sultan, pr Malik Altunia pe dunya k saari khwateen marti hen, ese kisi sultan ka hamam me faida uthana hamara tareeka nhi, humare ek ishare pe haseenon ka rela lag jata he mohtarma

He smirked and moved out of the water and wore his long after bath cloak .

Razia looked at him in anger.

Altunia; chaliye jaldi se ghusal krlijiye wrna ye ilzam bhi hum pe ayega

Razia; aap aur aapki haseenaon ko hum dekh lenge!!!

Altunia; haan to jee bhar k dekhiye mohtarma, dekhne pe konsi pabandi he

Razia; hum aapko chodenge nahi

she came out of the water and ran behind to catch him, they kept running in the bathroom

Altunia; farsh bhi geela he aur aap bhi, aap gir jayengi mohtarma

Razia; aaj taang tute ya sir phute aapki khabar hum le k rahenge

Altunia: arre khabar hi leni he na, bta to rhe hen hum ache bhale hen sb Upar wale ka Karm he ab mohtarma zid chod dijiye

Razia; aap ziada hoshiyari na dikhayen to aap k liye acha hoga

She then yelled with pain and fell on the ground.

Altunia turned and rushed to her.

Altunia; aapko kaha tha na mat dod lagaiye ese geele farsh pe, sunti kahan he aap sultan jo theri, lag gai na chot

Razia started hitting him.

Razia; hamen chot nahi lagi..pr aap zarur zakhmi hone wale hen

Altunia; aap ne naataq kiya?

Razia; haan

Altunia; theek he maar lihiye hamen, ek kaam kijiye khanjar uthaiye aur utar diiye hamare seene me , pr is tarah jhoot na bola kihiye humse

He looked away, Razia felt embarrased.

Razia; acha maaf krdijiye hamen, hum aapko takleef nhi pohonchana chahte the, aapko pta he na k hamen kis baat ka bura lagta he to wo baat aap baar baar kyun krte hen

Altunia looked into her eyes.

Altunia; konsi baat? yehi k hum haseenaon k dil k Malik hen, ab jo sach he usko jhutlayen kese Sultan

Razia; honge, humen us se kya

Altunia; acha to wo konsi baat he jo hum krte hen aur aapko pasand nhi?

Razia; hamen pareshan, hatiye ab.

She pushed him

Razia; aur jaiye yahan se

Altunia; haan haan jaa rhe hen aapke is ghutan bhare hamam me rehne ka koi shoq bhi nahi hamen

He stood up and walked away, she turned her face, he stopped at the door and looked back, she turned to look at him too, both smiled and Razia blushed, then she quickly looked away and he left.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
ye dasiyan bechari sultan ko kabhi tension free nahi jeene dengi😆
ye Alzia ki khatti meethi ladaaiyan kabhi khatam na ho
Super update Sonu 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
The awww moment
"Ek kaam kariye khanjar uthayi aur utaar dijiye hamare seene mein magar jhoot na bola kijiye humse😳

Such a cute update yaar. And finally ek update aaya...the wait kills me yaar ab itna bhi na tadpao humein... jaldi se 6th part ko update kar lijiye 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
First of all,Sonu meri jaan,I am very sorry jo main late hogayi😃
Ab yeh Sultan lagta hai ek din Delhi ki saari ladkiyon ko jalan ke maare maar hi dengi😆
Sultan Delhi par huqumat karti hain par unke dil par sirf Malik Altunia ki huqumat hai😳😳😳
Lastly,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW.Likhte raho aise FFs aap hazaaron saalon tak🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Astoria

First of all,Sonu meri jaan,I am very sorry jo main late hogayi😃

Ab yeh Sultan lagta hai ek din Delhi ki saari ladkiyon ko jalan ke maare maar hi dengi😆
Sultan Delhi par huqumat karti hain par unke dil par sirf Malik Altunia ki huqumat hai😳😳😳
Lastly,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW.Likhte raho aise FFs aap hazaaron saalon tak🤗


abhi to sultan ki jealousy dekhi he, Malik ki jealousyabhi baaqi he😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: overactor


abhi to sultan ki jealousy dekhi he, Malik ki jealousyabhi baaqi he😉😉

Sultan ki jealousy agar aisi hai toh Mirza ki jealousy ke baare mein soch kar mujhe heart attack aajayega😳😳

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