Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wooow yaar its awesome os...mirza shirtless omg 👏 Razia jealous huyi 😆 ye os ke padne ke baad kisi ka mood bohot jyada accha hojayega 😊 Love this os...very well written 😃 mirza ko shirtless dekhna razia sultan mein ye mera sapna hai 😳 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The jealous razia ...!!
Aisa laga jaise wo abhi kanizon ka sar kalam karwa degi.. Possessive mirza miyan k kya kehne. I wish yasir Alzia k beech cupid ki tarah act kare or uss yaqut ko door bhaga de..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yaar,Sonu,kaise likh leti ho aisi stories👏🤗👍🏼.I swear on the heavens that I blushed like anything while reading this update.😳😳
Toh maids ko aakhri khwaish mein Mirza ke deedar chahiye😆😳 Well,I can understand their feelings.Aakhir hamara bhi kuch aisa hi haal hai😳

Watching the great Sultan getting jealous was a treat Par Sultan ko kya pata ki jis Mirza ki deewani har ladki hai woh Mirza sirf unhika deewana hai❤️

Yasir is such a cutie pie😳 I always love his scenes with his aapi and Mirza.👏 Forever innocent!!

Another good thing is that yahaan pe uss kmh Yaqut ne taang nahin adayi.seriuosly,uski pitaayi dekhne ka bohot mann ho raha hai😈

And last but not the least-AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW forever👏👏👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Astoria

Yaar,Sonu,kaise likh leti ho aisi stories👏🤗👍🏼.I swear on the heavens that I blushed like anything while reading this update.😳😳

Toh maids ko aakhri khwaish mein Mirza ke deedar chahiye😆😳 Well,I can understand their feelings.Aakhir hamara bhi kuch aisa hi haal hai😳

Watching the great Sultan getting jealous was a treat Par Sultan ko kya pata ki jis Mirza ki deewani har ladki hai woh Mirza sirf unhika deewana hai❤️

Yasir is such a cutie pie😳 I always love his scenes with his aapi and Mirza.👏 Forever innocent!!

Another good thing is that yahaan pe uss kmh Yaqut ne taang nahin adayi.seriuosly,uski pitaayi dekhne ka bohot mann ho raha hai😈

And last but not the least-AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW forever👏👏👏

dnt worry yaqut ki pitai milegi😉 abhi to aur blush krne k mauqe aaayenge😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Razia was all ready to attend the court and walking towards it when she saw Altunia.

Razia; aaj suraj to apni sahi jagah se hi niqla hai

ALtunia; haan to?

Razia; to aap kese subah subah darbaar k rukh krskte hen, haan agar koi ajoob hua hta to baat aur thi

Altunia; wo kya hai na aapke behnoi, yaani k hamare khas dost Atigin ne hum se guzarish ki thi, to hum taal na ske

Razia; acha? kyun ki guzarish

Altunia; ye to wahan ja k pta chale ga na, Sultan!

Razia; chaliye, pr eid k chaand ko dekh kr darbari kuch der k liye to sadme me ajayenge

Altunia; hum jahan bhi jaate hen sb hairan ho hi jaate hen, kya kren Allah ne shaqal hi kuch esi di hai

Razia; hum dekh rhe hen aaj kal apne husn ki badi tareefen kr rhe hen aap?

Altunia; yani maanti aap bhi hen k hum haseen hen?

Razia made a face and walked away, Altunia smiled.

They both entered the royal court and settled down. Altunia sat beside Atigin, their seats being the nearest to Sultan.

Atigin; agaye miyan

Altunia; haan, chodhween k chaand hen hum, roz roz to aa nhi skte na

Atigin; acha hua chodween aaj he phir

Altunia; kyun?

Atigin; abhi ruko pta chal jayega tumhen

Yaqut stood up

Yaqut; Sultan-e-hind ko hamara Salam qubool ho, daaku Aftab ki taraf se ek aur pegaam aya he, us ne hamari taraf se bheje huye paigaam ko na maante huye kaha hai k agar hum ne uski maangen puri na keen to wo un sb gaon walon ko jala dega

Altunia; ye dakoo kon he?

Atigin; arre miyan bada hi khatarnaak daaku he kai Sultan tak darte hen is se, ab usne apne ilaqe ko delhi sultanate se azaad kr uska badshah banne ka mutalba kiya hai aur isi waja se kai masoom ladkiyon aur bachon ko agwa kr k unki jaan ka soda krna chahta hai humse

Razia; samjh nahi aa rha kya kren, uski maang to hum kisi haal me puri nahi kr skte aur agar na ki to wo un masoom ladkiyon aur bachon ko...kisi aur samjhote ke liye wo tayar nahi...aap sab ka kya kehna hai

Altunia; Sultan agar ijaazad ho to hum kuch kahen

Razia; (in her head) ijazat to ese maang rhe hen jese hum mana kr denge to ye chup rahenge, aaj hi inka darbaar me ana zaruri tha, ...(loudly) jee ijazat he

Altunia; shukriya, hamen lagta hai hamen us daaku ko sakht alfaaz me mana kr dena chahiye

Razia; aap ye kesi baaten kr rhe hen, aap jaante hen na unhone kitne logon ko bandhi bna rkha he to phir hum kese?

Altunia; Sultan puri baat to sun lijiye hamari, hum ek taraf use mna krdete hen aur apne Yaqut miyan ko bhej dete hen unse ladne

Razia; Mirza! hamara matlab hai Malik Altunia ye aap kya keh rhe hen? Malik Yaqut akele kese us itni badi dakuon ki foj ka saamna krenge

Altunia; nahi kr skte? acha? (he looked at Yaqut and smirked)

Yaqut; Malik Altunia sahi keh rhe hen Sultan hum sambhal lenge

Razia; magar kese? agar kuch gadbad hogai to un ladkiyon ki jaan ko khatra aur bhad jayega

Altunia; Sultan..to kya hum ek mamuli dakoo k liye apni foj bhej kr use sir pe bitha len? aur awaam ko ye paigaam den k do qaudi ka dakoo Sultan ko itna dara deta he k wo puri foj bhej deti he,aur agar aap unki baat manti hen to phir to aaye din dakoo farmahishen liye khade honge...ab un ladkiyon ko bachana bhi zaruri he..dekhiye agar humen aapne itne kaam na sonpe hte to hum to abhi tak us dakoo ko thikane laga chuke hote, pr ab hum to masroof hen, Malik Atigin bhi masroof hen, phir Malik Yaqut ko dikat kya he? ek mamuli dakoo ko nhi jhel skte jung hogi to kya krenge

Razia fumed, Atigin smiled, Altunia smirked, Yaqut stood with no expressions.

Razia; theek hai par Malik Yaqut akele nahi jayenge,unke saath 10 log aur jayenge

After the court session was over Atigin and Altunia were chilling.

Atigin; miyan chehra dekhne wala tha us ka, choose huye aam ki tarah lag rha tha

Altunia; (mimicking Yaqut) hum sambhal lenge

they both laughed loudly. A slave came

Slave; Malik Altunia aapko Sultan ne yaad farmaya hai

Altunia; lo agaya buawa, ab wo hamen dhair sari khari khoti sunayengi, khud hi us yaqut ki tareefon k pul bandhti hen aur jab kaam kaho to pul kaat deti hen, is Yaqut ko to na hum

Atigin; arre miyan chodo bhi, tum jao aur hamari saali sahiba ko karare jawab de k aao

Altunia went to meet her, he came walking in style, Razia caught him and pinned him to the wall.

Altunia; arre Sultan kya kr rhi hen aap? hamari izat pe ese waar mat kijiye

Razia; chup kijiye aap..ye kya he kyun kiya aapne wo sb, hamen pta he Yaqut aapko pasand nhi pr akele bhejne ka sujhao? itni bhi kya dushmani he aapko?

Altunia; arre hum to unko apne aap ko sabit krne ka mauqa de rhe the isme dushmani kahan se agai? aap bhi jaanti hen hum to akele ese darjanon dakuon ko maar girayen.

She turned away

Razia: aapki baat aur he

He came close to her.

Altunia; wo kese (he whispered in her ear)

she turned to face him again

Razia; aapko hawa me udne ki adat hai jo baqiyon ko nahi hai

Altunia; aap maan bhi jaiye ab k pure darbaar me, balke puri dunya me hum jesa ladaka nhi hai, aur aapke darbaar me to saare hi aaltoo faltoo bhare pade hen, Atigin ne itne masle bta diye hamen, kr kya rhe hen sb, kuch din hum ne darbar se duri kya barti sari sultanate hi ulat di

Razia; tana maar rhe hen aap, kuch nhi bigda, sb sahi hai

Altunia; hamari majaal ke hum Sultan-e-waqt ko tana maren

Razia; hum kabhi nhi kahenge jo aapko sunna he phir dete rahiye taane hamen farq nahi padta

he pulled her close

Altunia; acha? kehna to aapko padega

Razia; baaz nahi ayenge na aap, khud hi chale jaiye na aapke sb kaam koi aur dekh lega wese bhi aapko to talwar ki bhi zarurat nhi he aapki ye zaban hi kafi he, talwar se bhi tez chalti he ye, kisi ko bhi apne tanon se ghayal kr den aap

Altunia; acha? humne to suna he kai haseeno ko khete, mirza k nasron k teer sabko ghayal krte hen

Razia was lost in his eyes for a while.

Razia pushed him and moved away.

Razia; konsi haseenayen hen ye zara hum bhi to jaanen?

Altunia; hamare chahne wale to bohot hen zamane me, par dil-e-nadaan ne usko chaha jisko fursat hi na mili dil lagane ki

Razia; aapki ye shayariyan hamare samjh me nhi aati

Altunia; ajayengi mohtarma, ek waqt ayega jab aapko raat k andheron me bhi roshni nazar ayegi din k ujalon me bhi tareeki nazar ayegi, mehfil me bhi khud ko akela aap payengi aur tanhai me bhi kisi ki yaadon k sahare hujoom ka ehsas mehsoos krengi

Razia was hearing him carefully.

Altunia; isse deewangi kehte hen mohtarma, aur koi bach nahi skta is se, ye naimat jab aapko ata hogi na tab sb samjh jayengi aap

She looked at him curiously.

Altunia; humara kaam koi aur kre ye hum se bardasht na hoga isiliye jana to Yaqut ko hi hoga aap bas duayen kijiye ab k wo zinda lot aye

Razia; kya? (she was still lost) huh..haan haan..wo kal rawana hojayega

She walked away lost in thoughts. Altunia sighed heavily

Altunia; deewangi ne iss sakht dil ko bhi pighla diya mohtarma to phir aapka dil to hai hi komal, kab isko ishq ka rog lag jaye kon jaane, bas Rab se yehi iltijaa hai, k wo khushnaseeb koi aur na ho
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kasam se kamal ka os hai...ama aap na mohtarma show mein nahi toh apne os mein hi atigin ko razia brother-in-law bana diya... Humare paas words nahi kuch bolne ke liye lagta hai yaqud ka chita chita hone wala hai...alZia ke bare mein hum kya farmaye ye dono kabhi bhi nok jhok nahi chodhege...aur ha mirza kabhi bhi apni mohtarma ko cherna nahi chodhega...aur sonu aapki shayri bohot lajawab hai... SubhanAllah 😃 aur ha eid mubarak
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Sonu jaan... sorry i didn't comment on prev chapter... i read them both... they were awsome...👏👏
Ky baat hain... Altunia kee dialogues too aap kamal hi likhte hoo...😃... Haha.. Yaqut koo bhej diya daku o se ladne...😆... and mirza kaa signature flirt... Masallah!!👏👏

cont asap..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Arrey waah,Sonu meri jaan,dil par kabza karliya aapne iss update ke saath👏
Atigin is Razia's bro in law😉 Hmmm,ShaGin😳
Yaqut ki haalat dekhne layak thi🤣🤣 Lagta hai ki jald hi uska band bajega😆
And Alzia are AFSAW beyond words😳👏

And so is this update AFSAW👏👏

BTW,there is a doubt.What is chowdeen ka chand?😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Astoria

Arrey waah,Sonu meri jaan,dil par kabza karliya aapne iss update ke saath👏

Atigin is Razia's bro in law😉 Hmmm,ShaGin😳
Yaqut ki haalat dekhne layak thi🤣🤣 Lagta hai ki jald hi uska band bajega😆
And Alzia are AFSAW beyond words😳👏

And so is this update AFSAW👏👏

BTW,there is a doubt.What is chowdeen ka chand?😊

the full moon yr 14 ka chaand 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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bechaara yaqut !!!😆 saath mein 10 log bhejo ya 100, band toh bechhare ki bajni hi hai !!
proud of you mirza!!👏
first time aitigin is also included...! pta nahi tha he playd +ve role in Alzia romantic story..😲
haaye yeh Alzia ki sweet si nok jhok😳 wish yeh kabhi bhi khatm na ho
great writing sonu! u r too gud in writing down emotions👏
continue soon

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