ALZIA - NEK DIL ZAALIM... Pt9 - pg10 - Page 6

This was another mind blowing chapter from you

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

This was another mind blowing chapter from you

Loved the bonding that Razia and Fatima share

I'm glad she advised razia to marry mirza

And thank for the pm and also thanks for adding me to the buddy list and also thanks for mentioning me

And you much deserve this appreciation

Waiting to read ahead

Keep writing

-Manu-

Brilliant ! I loved the heart to heart convo between these two besties.

Originally posted by: arshia200

Brilliant ! I loved the heart to heart convo between these two besties.

So i assume now the next update will be a flashback...oooh im waiting...u know ever since Razia told her bro nasir abt mirza i was dying to see the scene when these two great men will meet each other, I was in the hope that we will get to see a few scenes of nasir-mirza bromance. i was most overjoyed when nasir and mirza finally met and it went so well btwn them. but alas ! he was killed soon after that aur reh gayi bromance ki ek adhoori kahani. But now there u are ready to bring it up for me. YAAAR YES ITS TRUE WE DO THINK ALIKE AND WANT THE SAME THINGS TO HAPPEN. Another sign !!

sorry for the late reply...i had left this forum on so was shown online, i was writing my SS.

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE ...thankkk u so much for bringing nassir and mirza together here. hugsss🤗

It was a great

lovely update

why so short yarr.!!? 😔

res😊unres I know sabse last mai comment likh rahi hun you can bash me for that but comment kare bina mai rah nahi sakti thi kya karun aap itna accha likhte ho ki words kam pad jaate hai aapki taariph k liye what a chapter mind blowing but last part is my favourite. kya likha hai ye khubsoorati se aapne ye chanda and nasir ke love part ko likha hai bina alzia ko sidelined kiye hua pata hai aapki story ki grip nahi chooti character k action justified hote hai royal factor hamesha rahta hai chaahe kitna bhi time lo but update kiya karo aapki story baar baar padhne ka dil karta hai Salute to you aur kya likhu mere paas words nahi hai.👏👏

NEK DIL ZAALIM

PART 8

Fatima: Humse behtar iss baat ka gawah aur koi nahi ho sakta shehzaadi. She said with a strange guilt on her face. Haan shehzaadi... Agar Mirza ko taqt hi chahiye hota toh woh uss qambakth Moiz-ud-din se humare bete Nasir ko bhala kyun bacha laate?

Razia: Bacha laate, kya matlab? Nasir yahan hain?

Fatima: haan shehzaadi pichle ek mahine se sirf aap hi nahi balki hum aur nasir bhi yahin hai. Mirza badi mushkil se, uss namurad Moiz-ud-din ko behla phusla kar Nasir ko yahan lekar aaye hain. Unhone yeh sab qutub shahi khandan ke liye kiya... aap ke liye kiya. Nahin toh kitne pehle hi who Moiz-ud-din aapke bade bhai Shehzaade Nasir ki aakri nishaani bhi humse chheen leta.

Fatima: Razia... shehzaade Nassir ne humesha yahi chaaha tha ki unki pyaari si chutki humesha khush rahe. Uska nikaah aise jabaaz se ho jo unki behen ko palko par bitha kar rakhe, usse duniya ki saari khushiyaan dene ke kaabil ho. Aur unhone yeh saari khoobiyan Mirza me dekhi thi. Koi laalach nahi, bas apne mazbooth hosla aur fauladi iraade.

Razia stopped breathing for a moment. Razia: Bhai jaan Mirza se mille the??? She asked forcing her voice out of her chocking throat.

Fatima: Jaan toh bohot pehle hi chuke the. Aapke ghazni se lautne ke turant baad hi. (Fatima walked a few steps towards a lavish stone clad pillar remembering her conversations with Nassir.) Ghazni se aap ke lautne ke kucch dino baad hum shehzaade Nassir ko Khaana parosne unke khwab gah mein gaye the...

Flashback:

Fatima walked into Nassir's bedroom to see him sitting on an arm chair lost deep in thought. When she had asked him for permission to enter, he had swiftly just nodded his head granting his permission. Fatima kept the large Thal on the ottoman kept in front of Nassir.

Fatima: Shehzaade Nassir, Khaana tayiyaar hai.

Nassir: Humme bhook nahi hai Fatima... le jao isse yahan se.

Fatima: Gustakhi muaaf ho shehzaade, par aap kucch pareshaan lagrahe hain. She asked hesitating.

Nassir: Nahi kucch nahi, Jao yahan se. Fatima didn't quite like his tone, but knew that his temper towards her was only temporary. She bowed down lightly and started to leave when his voice made her to stop in her tracks.

Nassir: Fatima! Ruko...

Fatima: Ji?

Nassir: Iss Laal dupatte ke bare mein kucch jaanti ho tum?

He came straight to the point taking Fatima by surprise as the smile on her face washed away seeing Razia's red dupatta in his hand. The fact that he didn't play any games with her to ask her about this cloth made it clear to Fatima that Nassir was dead serious in asking her this question. Nassir was usually not the one to "ghumao-phirao" and ask questions especially when the matter concerned Razia. And Fatima mentally kicked herself for always getting caught between the royal siblings.

Fatima: Ah! Yeh... yeh toh Shehzaadi Razia ka duppatta hai. Yeh aapke paas kaise aaya? She tried to answer back keeping her face as normal as she could... looking completely clueless on the matter. Laayiye hum lejaakar yeh kapda waapas shehzaadi ke kamre mein rakh dete hain. Nassir pulled away her his hand before Fatima could reach it and stepped forward, boring his eyes at hers.

Nassir: Hum dobara nahi pucchenge ... he whispered against her lips.

Fatima: Hum waada nahi todh sakte.

Nassir nodded slightly and continued: Tum waada khilafi nahi kar sakti na, theek hai... par humaare sawaalon ka haan ya na mein jawaab toh de hi sakti ho.

Fatima: woh... woh shehzaade!

Nassir: Koi hai Razia ki zindagi mein... koi aisa jisse woh pasand karti hai? Mohabbat karti hai? He made his each and every word clear.

Fatima: Hun??? Ji... ji humme nahi pata.

Nassir: Jhooth mat bolo Fatima!!! He screamed at her pushing her away with a jerk. Hum gayye the Razia se milne, uski dil ki baat jaane ke liye humme uske kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Bas uska chehra hi kaafi hai, uske dil ka haal bayan karne ke liye.

***

Flashback in Flashback //

Razia sat in front of her huge dressing table in the palace of Dilli, remembering her moments with Mirza all along en route to Ghazni. She saw him, felt him all around her... and was just hoping that he would come soon forgetting all his angst against her (for keeping her identity hidden) and will just swing her in his arms.

The Darban announced the Prince of Delhi Nassir-ud-din approaching Razia's chambers but she remained oblivious to any sound around her. All she heard was a soft music reminding her of her lover. Nassir entered Razia's khwab gah to see his sister sitting in front of the huge wall size round mirror adorned with precious and semi-precious stones.

Nassir: Aaj hum tumhe aisi khabar sunane aaye hain jisse sunkar tum khushi se pagal hojaogi!!! He exclaimed. But his sister remained oblivious to his presence. Nassir walked towards her noticing her quietness calling for her again lightly. Nassir: Razia?

Nassir quietly moved and stood right next to Razia and slowly kept his palm on her shoulder, only to bring Razia back out of her dream world with the sudden touch.

Razia: Huh! Ji..Ji Bhaijaan. Aap kab aaye?

Nassir: Kahan khoi hui tum? Humne Darbar se kehkar humare aane ki khabar bhi bhijwayi thi... tumne sunna nahi?

Razia: woh...woh.. suni thi na bhaijaan... par hummein laga tha ki aapke aana mein abhi waqt hai...

Nassir: Aur hum jo kabse tumhe awaaz diye ja rahe hain? Uska kya?

Razia: Woh toh.. darsal... arre jaane dijiye na bhai jaan, aap bataayiye kaise aana hua? Kucch zaroori kaam tha?

Nassir: Haan... par aise nahi! Ek khush khabri hai... Hummein khwaja ji ki dargah par jaana hai. Tum tayiyaar hokar aajao. Hum bahir intezaar kar rahein hai.

Razia: Ji! Razia moved away to her bath chamber and Nassir was about to leave when his eyes fell on a laal dupatta on the dressing table. He remembered how Razia kept staring at the dupatta all throughout while he was calling for her minutes ago.

// End of Flashback in Flashback

Nassir: Toh ab tum bagair humara waqt zayar kare humein batao ki aakhir woh kaun hai? Ghazni mein mila tha woh usse? Kahin ka shehzaada hai? Kaun hai woh FATIMA??? He almost screamed at her while she looked back at him pale faced locked in his arms.

Fatima: Nahi! Woh koi shehzaade nahi hain... Aah! (She hissed in pain). Hummein jaane dijiye shehzaade.

Nassir's arms relaxed a bit on Fatima and though he still had her locked in his arms, his hold on her was much softer... so was his eyes.

Nassir: Kahan mili thi Razia usse?

Fatima: Dargah par... Aapki fateh ki dua karne gayi thi tab. Aur phir Ghazni bhi sahi salaamat woh unhi ki wajah se pauhchi thi.

Nassir: Naam? He asked with no expression on his face, which made Fatima to answer immediately.

Fatima: Nahi... Nahi pata! Par shehzaadi unhe Mirza kehkar pukaarti hain.

Nassir: Karta kya hai? came another question...

Fatima: Nahi... Nahi pata... Aaahhh!!! His hold became tighter as another of her "nahi pata"'s came by when she exactly knew everything.

Fatima: Hum sirf itna jaante hain ki woh wohi jaabaaz ladake hain jissne dilli ki subedaari jeeti thi.

The moment Fatima finished the sentence Nassir left her with a jerk as shock took over him, he didn't know how to react for a moment... and then walked out leaving Fatima horrified.

Fatima: Ab Kya hoga??? She exclaimed to herself.

***

//End of Flashback:

Fatima and Razia stood in the corridors of Bhatinda...

Fatima: Aur issiliye jab Shehzaade Nassir dobara aapse milne aaye aur unhone aapke saath talvar baazi ki toh unka shak pukka hogaya ki aap Mirza se mohabbat karti thi.

Razia swallowed the lump in her throat: Unhone humse waada kiya tha ki woh Mirza se zaroor milenge. She said while looking at a random point on the heavily decorated pillar in front of her.

Fatima turned around: Aur woh unse mile bhi! She said with pride in her voice

Razia: Kya bhaijaan mile the... Mallik sahab se?

Fatima: Mallik sahab se nahi... Aapke Mirza se!

A tear rolled down Razia's pink cheeks.

***

Next: Nassir Bhaijaan and Mirza ( Pakka this time )

And

Razia sees Mallik sahab keeping his promise!

Sorry guys I have been a little too busy with work last few days, so sorry for a late update.

Hope you'll like Nassir and Fatima in this one. Hot Alzia coming in the next update

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