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Cutemithra

@Cutemithra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Wow.. Just nw read part 2.. You write beautifully... An intense update again.. Thoroughly enjoyed it..

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silvercloud1980

@silvercloud1980

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Nice chapter. Plz make it a longer one

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

I know Rithu I know ...very cutely said by you ! 😆 by the way ! I am Ruchi 🤗 for everything !

😳 Sorry, I had confused you with someone else so didn't use you name.
🤗 to you too.

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Interesting that you say that because actually in the epi when Paro gives her testimony against Tejawat to the media, she actually tells her Mamisa that she needn't worry, that Rudra will get Nandini and the other girls rescued.

So they were indeed keeping their options open at that point. And then there was absolutely no noise on that angle after that. Not a murmur. Such a pity!!

Would be delighted to pm you when I post the next bit, thank you..😊

This was the exact moment after which they started to rush the love story. They could have skipped the Dilsher's coma and focused on this instead. Anyway it's too late to crib.

Waiting to see how your story will unfold.

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

That was absolutely super, TVBUG! I feel as though I just had a feast. Waiting eagerly for the next part.

Lots & lots of love,

Smita

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Smitaaa!!🤗
I was waiting for you to turn up!! And delighted that you did.
As for what happened next well, I'm wondering how much heat the forum can take. 😉😆

A lot more than you imagine, TVBug! Bring it on, darl!

Edited by smitar - 10 years ago

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Navya

@Navyya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: smitar

A lot more than you imagine, TVBug! Bring it on, darl!

TVbug...come on ...test us...I will make sure I have tub full of ice cold water ready for me to jump in after reading your take...

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Deepa

@deepsel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Dear Tvbug ,

What an absolute delight of words you are playing with..I was thoroughly mesmerizied with the beauty of your language..so riveting just like your RReviews 👏👏..So poise, poignant, just wonderful..

Am so glad you made the OS to TS (I hope u make it as a FF 😛 if not plz do)..I personally miss this show so much which is very close to my heart and they are brought alive again by writers like you..Am very thankful that you have decided to pen your words in the form of story for hopeless Parud lovers like me 🤗

Special thanks to "Smitar" for bringing out another wonderful storyteller😊

Part 1 left me spellbound with Paro's thought process gasping in the end but you wickedly mesmerized me with Rudra's thought process in Part 2..Totally magical..now waiting for the hot quotient☺️

Thank you for this wonderful journey you ought to take us 🤗

Deepa

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: deepsel
Dear Tvbug ,

What an absolute delight of words you are playing with..I was thoroughly mesmerizied with the beauty of your language..so riveting just like your RReviews 👏👏..So poise, poignant, just wonderful..

Am so glad you made the OS to TS (I hope u make it as a FF 😛 if not plz do)..I personally miss this show so much which is very close to my heart and they are brought alive again by writers like you..Am very thankful that you have decided to pen your words in the form of story for hopeless Parud lovers like me 🤗

Special thanks to "Smitar" for bringing out another wonderful storyteller😊

Part 1 left me spellbound with Paro's thought process gasping in the end but you wickedly mesmerized me with Rudra's thought process in Part 2..Totally magical..now waiting for the hot quotient☺️

Thank you for this wonderful journey you ought to take us 🤗

Deepa

Thank you Deepa for your generous, beautiful words. 🤗You've absolutely made my day!!

As it turns out, I've just finished Part 3 and hope to post it tomorrow after I've replied to the remaining comments. I do hope it lives up to your expectations.😃 Looks like I'm headed for a Part 4, because the story's not done yet.

Cheers,

Sabs