FS: A traitorous taste (for Smitar) Part 5 page 27 completed - Page 8

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

Sorry to barge in between ... I hope you guys will exscuse me but there was an audition for Nandini ???😲really ??? 😭 Who had auditioned for it? I missed it ! I forever waited to see the Nandini track and wanted to ship Aman + Nandini !! But sigh ...it never happened !

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-

I'm not sure who the actress was. But I remember pics in this forum about her.
I think she was cast opposite Sumer as he was supposed to be the parallel lead. Aman and Nandini would have been an interesting track as well.

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-

@aaliah3108 - I think there is a new ocean somewhere formed by all the tears we have shed for all the stuff that went wrong with our show

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..

Beautifully written

Awesome update

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Sabs👏

congratulations for coming to the world of FF and I can see you enjoying it with lots of fun.

I must admit, RR and its intensity in the beginning was so high that I wanted to ride this journey but it made my heart broke with constant change of storyline.

Come 2 ur Update

That was awesome.👏

Very narrative style as you always have, the scene where Paro being caught in the desert by Rudra after her running away from the Haveli can be visualized ⭐️ a vivid description all over of whats going on in her mind. Paro's defiance to his proximity with deep desire for more, ...😳her helplessness against her new emerged feelings, 👏

her concern for her jija and all 😊

just wonderful.👏

Rudra's POV will explore this story more.

Thnx for the scrap😊

Originally posted by: pree_28

Woww.. amazing writing 👏
Your each line description is so vivid. Rudra comparing small desert animal to paro
unaware of the danger. His BSD mind working hard and it make sense that he used
Nandani's card & paro to not sit and worry but do what she can even if it dangerous
for her. Your description was so good that felt like watching the episode 😃

How much he was reasoning for his actions..for Rudra it has always been actions
speak louder then words. 😳

This story reminded me of rangrasiya promo in which paro is running away in deseart and is
being chased by Rudra. Their was some kind of this line " jaha jaha jaegi, mujhe sarhad ki
tarah vaha paegi"! I got that feel from your story. Seriously in serial they could have used
this senario.

I have a request if you send pm then can you send me too..I would be delighted 😛
as i dont want to miss new parts of your story.. thank you buddy for giving us pleasure
of reading about our loved couple 😳

Originally posted by: varshu27

What a master stroke this chapter is...Bravo👏. Loved the intensity, the passion and the emotions playing out. Absolutely brilliant.

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-

I have a feeling after Tejawat was exposed, the CVs had two options - either make Parud fall in love or have one of the leads go after Nandini. The budget for the love story would have been more feasible. How I wish they had combined both and the leads had developed feelings while on an adventure.
Pls send a PM when you post the next part

Originally posted by: Rummykub

Hi bugsa!!!

I am so shocked to see you here after a long time.welcome back.

I have been a huge fan of your RReviews. So you can imagine how ecstatic I am to see a work from you.

You have taken me and the others here back to our original RR...the one we were all promised.

I can vividly imagine every single scene you have captured here between Parud and also the gamut of emotions paro and rudra are going through...such is the magic of your words, truly.

You have shown us a glimpse of the RR we were all hoping for and had expected to see. The passion. The intensity. And both paro and rudra true to their original nature.

Please do continue writing more and we ardent fans of RR and Parud will cherish them.

Can't help but wonder if the makers had stuck to their original version of RR without the TRP pressure etc...would it still be running now? And where would it be poised right now..I mean storywise?!! Sigh!!!

All that is left for us is to relive and imagine itt thanks to awesome writers like you.

One request. Could you please pm me when next time you update? I would be forever great full.

Thanks,

Prati.