Oh dear this is great...I dont know how to write for this update...I mean it has so many things so i am lost from where to begin or where to end ...I have read it many times but still in a process of digesting ...
I will repeat myself again what I did in my last comment that the beauty of your writing is in the 'minutest details' you weave in the narrative, be it depiction of doubt & khoobsurat woman syndrome ( thinking that the kiss was to distract him) or the subtle shades of love ( his eyes going more in the rear view mirror than the road , him holding the flask to make it easy for her to drink,voice going hoarse with care & concern & involuntarily telling her that he would never let anything happen to her ) or the justification he gives to himself as to WHY he is doing all that , all this, the essence of the show, is conveyed so beautifully & with such ease ...& oh boy oh boy how I loved, & still am going bonkers on the way his eyes " seemed to have a mind of their own"...and then the description of the moments that followed after reaching the safe house , each & every word was a pure delight to read, nothing short of breathtaking...
I would classify this series the summit of achievement in the FF world...It is not just great and power packed, although it is that; it is also a new human experience...I say 'new human experience' because a simple scene of a man sleeping on a chair can be so damn hot ...I mean , what's the big deal in that but somehow you have managed to make it a BIG deal...I fail to understand what was it about this particular scene that fired the raw passion in me which it did...hope I have not gone out of my mind for finding it immensely passionate because honestly I found it replete with passion...& then the last scene...ab uska kya kahun...it was so artistically penned...he tried valiantly to keep control of the situation , not give in to the hunger in him until the one moment of surrender that couldn't be fought...and then they both breathe again, finding solace in each other. taking in each other's essence. Souls uniting and merging... .Both are burning up in their all consuming passion for each other & I can bet my life that every single reader who read it would have burned along with them too...I , for sure did, all ashes after going through it.
The intensity was pure bliss to read.. I felt so much more passion and romance via this as compared to some hot scenes that I have read..This is beyond brilliant..
Please carry it forward...would it help if I go on my knees & request you to do it ?
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