Hey Sabs, yet another visual delight.
The makers started RR with a larger than life canvas. Enticed the viewers with passion, intensity, rawness and a magical pair Parud. Somewhere in the midst the maker forgot the essence, made many mistakes and finally left the painting midway and also left its lovers sad.
Then came writers like you who wanted to keep the magic alive and started filling the canvas each with their unique style and vision. Reading these FFs, the sadness fades away a little, the angst melts away a little, and a smile spreads across the face reminiscing the RR and Parud we had.
Gaddaar!
For me Paro called herself the gaddaar. But Rudra assumed it was for him.
The initial part made me think that Rudra was attracted to Paro's physical beauty and not her heart. At each instance he was refering to her as a beautiful woman and reprimading himself for letting his guards down. He was noticing her each small action and against his mind his body too was responding to it.
Rudra's gruffness and dare-me-not attitude while making her wear the jacket. His arrogant and rustic care while giving her water to drink. His fighting her attraction. His angry, hating her and yet concern for her safety. Just awesome.
Paro was much at peace with her attraction for Rudra. Probably was not thinking too much in her current state. She was dazed, tired, thirsty, hungry, being through too much.
Second half, You brought in the adorable Aman. Loved his care towards Paro.
Then the mirroring of hospital scene. Again Rudra calming her down in his way or the way Paro wanted him to. The kiss for calming down her, ignited thousands of fire in him. Just a magical description.
And now a final question. Did he give in to his desires or her's??
Awesome Sabs. Just want you to write more.
And now ending with a quote which fits your writing to the T.
Edited by psagars - 10 years ago
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