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Can I just say how commendable I think it is to work on two FF's at the same time. *claps* and how kind you are to have combined both parts in one update.. love reading your chapters on my way to uni, one of my favorite ways to start my day!!
Rudra's character in this FF has got to be the best you've done. He's so self-conscious and humble. You'd think that because he's hot, girls like him and he's the son of a general, that he'd be a tad immature or insensitive in comparison to a very deep character like Parvati in this FF. Though he's not at all. He's thoughtful and I think his sensitive side will show very soon. I like how you've portrayed him and his traits, the makings of a real gentleman. the 'where do you want to go'.. and wanting to see not just her lips curve into smile but her eyes as well... too shweeett haaayyye.
Parvati's past is another genuine feature in this FF. Her unknown secrets and composed-like persona grabbed me long back. I actually feel like although she projects herself as someone who is somewhat emotionally detached, I feel like she's feels everything. And in this update especially, I'm glad she's unknowingly opening up. DDLJ.. how do you even think of these things!!!! Brilliant.
Bet you didn't think I'd be this deep. Well, that's just how I truly feel towards your work. I put a lot of thought into what I read, and if I still keep reading then, I'm hooked. Aur haa yaar, I hope this is the kind of feedback you like reading. :D
Once again.. thank you for PM'ing and thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU for the early update + two parts in one go!
But I'm still as eager as always to find out what happens next... teri jaduuu bhii naa.
Ps. I'm going to register this as their first date.. too cute!
Lots of love,
Ru.
