FF: Unloved (Complete) - Page 15

ohh i justtt love theee update...ur writing is realy awesome i could totaly visualised it every emotion of paro and rudra...the best thing of todays update which i liked was wen rudra called her paro...everything was great execpt that chap over now i have to wait for the update...

Loved the update 👏

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter 😃

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Lovely update Alyssa.😳 How can you manage 2 stories so well... one filled with laughing riot and the other so emotional ... Hats off dear!

From Parvathi to Paro ... so nice to hear 😳

What Rudra will do now and Paro will she be normal or again covers up 😕

You brought tears with Paro's past and still there is more ... waiting for next...

Take care

Poor Paro !!!!!

Oh my Rudra is just a sweetheart. I LOVE that he consideres himself as her friend and wants to protect her. And then he just calls her Paro without asking her permission because as a friend, it's his right! LOVE! Paro was too overwhelmed with his kindness. So cute.

Dear Alyssa,

Again a soulful update..How do you do this??..every time I read your chapters I feel like am watching a movie in front of my eyes..such details so aptly described...that ending, Paro's unshed tears, Rudra's gaze on her..Iam just totally in love with your writing style dear..

So Rudra managed to bring out some emotion in that expressionless face of Paro..and did manage to shake a stone on that wall of Paro..hope she doesn't cement the stone back and build the wall even more thicker for him to impossible to break them again..

Now am dreading what was in Paro's past to make her think she is unworthy for anyone ..plz prove my thinking wrong (coz am thinking something extreme and terrible)

P.S: Alyssa dear, this may be my last comment for the next three months as am taking a long break from IF for personal reasons, but will definitely try to catch up the FFs am following now including yours and you may see my likes if not my comments once read..Just wanted to let you know, you are an amazing writer and its a pleasure I landed in your stories to have this experience..Keep rocking and keep sending me updates..

Hugs

Deepa..

awesome is just a small word...u seriously put life n soul in your writing...I just loved all d updates dear...they were fab

OMG...!!!! Please tell na what happened in Paro's past 😕

What lovely updates dear
I was busy hence could not comment. Aplogies for that
So Paro decides to go to the Mela with Rudra cos of Mamisas insistence and boy Rudra is happy.
Seems like Mala and Rudra share a very loving bond here
So Rudra has started falling for Paro and she has also started to open up
I am sure you will defintely rock the updates about Paro's past which has scarred her so much
Wishing you a happy pongal / Makarsakranti dear