Two Shot: PARUD's 'Sawan Aaya Hai' (Part2 in pg 7 updt)

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aaliah3108

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Deepa dear ...

It was an awesome part. You have made me remember Parud so much. There was so much to do in RR and Sanish as Parud were a goldmine capable of delivering any emotion perfectly. Plus the ensemble cast was great too.

I wish RR could have been luckier in not landing with COLORS who brutally screwed it up !

This is a beautiful piece of work

and don't bother much about not being able to write intimate scenes because sensuality in itself is very alluring and beautiful and that is what emnates here!

Lot sof love.. tc dear! 🤗

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BillyJean.

@BillyJean.

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Thanks for PM Deepa!
Lovely reading!
Missing PARud now after reading this

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aniakool

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

That was Awesome Deepsel Di

I Loved it..

Do Write More...

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

wow nice decent stop deepa!

Loved it totally!! will you keep continuing instead of stopping it in next update?

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Mukti

@-Mukti-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Such passion in the update...I am at loss of what to say...👏👏
But in the morning😡 😳
Thanks for the pm🤗

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Mano.M

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: believe77
Such passion in the update...I am at loss of what to say...👏👏
But in the morning😡 😳
Thanks for the pm🤗

U know she posted it at midnight😆😆

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Mukti

@-Mukti-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: multimediaa

U know she posted it at midnight😆😆

But I read it in the morning,😡 lo gaya mera pura din, 😳or as Paro would say Lo gayi Basanti pani mein.😆

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Mano.M

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: believe77

But I read it in the morning,😡 lo gaya mera pura din, 😳or as Paro would say Lo gayi Basanti pani mein.😆

But when Paro said that I imagined a cow but here...😆

Don't worry,I had revenge on Deeps on behalf of u.

She checked my post at midnight thinking it will be a gutter😆😆 .

But what she got was🤣

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Mariia

@Mariia.R

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Deepa,

First sorry for late comment. Had a rough day.

You made me miss even more our RR and Parud ❤️...

"Major Saab"... that made me almost cry.

Especially loved the phrase; "mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon Paro". How beautiful was that!

And it would have been beautiful scene in RR.

And the chili powder... awesome 👏

Deepa, please continue writing. These two updates have been so beautifully written.

Thank you 🤗

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: DevdasiSingh
Dead. I am dead.

You made me miss RR. I wish the confession happened liked this. I wanted Rudra to tell her he loves her outright. Wonderful. What more can I say? 👏

Thank you Alyssa darling.. Its indeed overwhelming to hear from a writer like you...Me too felt there were so many unspoken emotions left out in RR due to mad rush of TRPs..I would love to see if writers like you can pick up those moments and make stories out of it...

But why dead? 😲 I haven't given you even an ounce of gutter 😆😆😆

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