Two Shot: PARUD's 'Sawan Aaya Hai' (Part2 in pg 7 updt)

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..
Awesome update..

Thanks Jyoti 😳😳

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: aniakool
That was Awesome Deepsel Di
I Loved it..
Do Write More...

Thanks darling...😳😳Well I will surely try more when time permits..😛

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: deepa.e
wow nice decent stop deepa!
Loved it totally!! will you keep continuing instead of stopping it in next update?

Thanks da..Illa pa I have decided to stop here to maintain the sanity of this gutter group😆😆😆

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: believe77
Such passion in the update...I am at loss of what to say...👏👏
But in the morning😡 😳
Thanks for the pm🤗

Thanks a lot Mukti 🤗..Well iIdid posted it midnight and I am sorry you slept all because of the revenge GIFs you make for Mano...So the culprit is Mano here too 🤣..don't leave her..

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

But when Paro said that I imagined a cow but here...😆

Don't worry,I had revenge on Deeps on behalf of u.

She checked my post at midnight thinking it will be a gutter😆😆 .

But what she got was🤣

Enna Sirippu..😡😡😡..Wait and watch my reverse revenge this Monday 😈

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Fimiramak
Deepa,
First sorry for late comment. Had a rough day.
You made me miss even more our RR and Parud ❤️...
"Major Saab"... that made me almost cry.

Especially loved the phrase; "mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon Paro". How beautiful was that!
And it would have been beautiful scene in RR.
And the chili powder... awesome 👏

Deepa, please continue writing. These two updates have been so beautifully written.

Thank you 🤗

Hey Mira..

Please ..no need to apologize..we all are busy. somedays...

Hope everything is well in your work for you

Thank you dear..I am really glad you enjoyed this not so romantic version😆😆😆..

Well i will definitely try more when time permits😳😳

Take care and You are so welcome 🤗

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: deepsel

Deeps loved it. Thank you so much for making Rudra give the mangalsutr. Write OS or TS for now, I understand that you are busy. You're right about the intimate scenes, we can write sweet moments but it takes writers like Sonia to create sensuous moments between Parud. Let's stick to reading and drooling.
Coming to the update, I can't believe you created chilli powder romance. That's why I say you are an amazing writer. I never saw that coming. It was so sweet the way he cleansed her eyes with rain water and then kissed her eyelids. Well done deeps 👏
And the confession, it was exactly how Rudra would go about slightly awkward but still trying to be clear about his feelings. Loved it. 😊
Can't wait for more. .

Thank you Rithu darling🤗..Yes lets fulfill our gutter cravings with Sonia😆😆😆Poor girl..now my respect for her increased million times how she managed to pull off such updates without being vulgar...as I almost huffed and puffed to write this small one😆😆

Yup I wanted Rudra to approach Paro rightfully after giving her what rightfully hers..And I wanted that BSD reverse mirror confession to be heard by Paro coz that was beautiful and Paro never heard those words in original..

I wanted some medium for Rudra to approach Paro before giving mangalsutra hence used Chilli😆😆..Glad it worked..as I felt it might be too cliched..

I loved the speech he had originally planned though I understood why he turned into a bumbling fool when he spoke to her.
So what if its a clich, we never got a clichd ILU from Rudra. As beautiful as the 'Mein...tu...hamesha' was we still regretted not hearing the traditional confession of love.

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KhushiParo

@KhushiParo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Well... Well... Well.. what we got here😳

So Deeps now you can not say I'm just saying because you're my sis when I tell you write beautifully ...read the comments.😡 😆

Ok about the update... one word from me... Sensuous... just like the Mangalsutra scene in the serial.

I can totally picture Parud here and Rudra's hubad dubad speech.

Paro trying to move away with shyness and Rudra covering her to make her comfortable ... there is so much feel ☺️.

Some where I missed the point TS... two shot and I was thinking it's a three shot so when you ended the story I was 😲😆

Now please do write more whenever you have some time.😊

🤗

Edited by KhushiParo - 10 years ago

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SPraba

@SPraba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Deepa my sweeth heart u have a writer in you.
Super story and wow I loved every thing in it
A full Parudlicious update and made me miss RR and Parud more
But thank you for this lovely 2 shot and help us keep Parud fresh in our memories
Please do write more if u have time deepa cos u have the knack for it.
The more stories on Parud the better it would be
Hugs dear and god bless

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ELLUNDAA

@ELLUNDAA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Wow deeps... 😲
I didn't know that you used to write before...
Ohhh my god...it was beautiful...
I mean who told you that it is not-so- romantic...
Damn...it was...so romantic...
Oh I loved it...wow...
I loved it when he covered her with her dupatta...
And the rain...blessings of bholenath...

Loved it totally...
Thanks u deeps for this beautiful ts... ❤️
Special thanks to you too...parud7 ❤️

Parud hamesha missing them a lottt... 😭

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