Two Shot: PARUD's 'Sawan Aaya Hai' (Part2 in pg 7 updt) - Page 5

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Very nice concept deepsel..loved it...sawan aya!!..I never thought of it in this way...looking forward to read more...

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Ruchi, this is not the first time Deeps wrote.

Check her first OS: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/4094239/short-os-after-backhug-slight-mature

She writes beautifully but now a days became more of a critique.😆

Originally posted by: deepsel

Well you gave me the name besharmi😉 anyway so barging in and responding, check @bold red

Edited by KhushiParo - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Aww...Gussa mat ho Rithu darling🤗...Actually I was planning to make Rudra give the mangalsutra in next shot but after seeing your comment I am rethinking whether I should make it as three shot and tickle you more and postpone the mangalsutra track...😆..What say Rithu???</font>

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I will update tomorrow😉...</font>

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I will write to write more now after all the encouragement dear its just that I can't find time and also bit apprehensive to post mine in midst of all these wonderful writers</font>

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Ruchi, this is not the first time Deeps wrote.

Check her first OS: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/4094239/short-os-after-backhug-slight-mature

She writes beautifully but now a days became more of a critique.😆

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

...This is what I'm also telling.There'll be a good flow and feel in her stories or posts.

...🤔 Hmmm... Uhhh... I'll be on your side for everything but about stories hmmm.. I'll take the side of Mano and will send PMs everyday😃 if you are thinking of stopping.

Well you gave me the name besharmi😉 anyway so barging in and responding, check @bold red

Hello buddies...First of all thank you all so much for your overwhelming feedbacks...I am sure with all your encouraging words I can pursue writing for more stories in future..As of now please enjoy the second and final part of this TS..

Though the original Mangalsutra track was mesmerizing I didn't like the fact how he carried that precious chain for so many episodes like some candy in his pocket...I wanted it around Paro's neck as soon as he got it as my buddy Rithu too stated in her comment..so I have tweaked the scene as per my imagination along with Harry's request too...Hope you all can enjoy this part as well..

Part 2:

Rudra started walking towards Paro with his intense gaze unwavered and Paro trembled slighly at the slow drizzle but stayed rooted to the floor unable to move without drifting away from his look. Both kept looking into each other eyes as though the whole world around them have vanished into some oblivion leaving them in an unknown blissful heaven. Both their minds rolled on to various flashbacks from their first meeting to the epic jaipur trip to the latest railway track stunt with the melody playing in the background apt to their situation.

Rudra looking at the amazing pure milky white angel standing in front of him couldn't stop from beaming with the proud thought that she belong to him..only to him..her undivided love only for him..how can destiny be so good to him after all these years...his Paro..only for him..

Paro looking at him thanked her Bholenath for answering her prayers with a loving husband and that too with HIS name "Rudra"..amazed how the cruel Jallad changed as her Major Saab..how a man who didn't care for any life dared to leave his life for her..only for her..her Major Saab..only for her..

Both were brought back to their senses by the sudden windblow and Paro quickly moved her look away from his masculine body which is now visible from his white kurta drenching in rain. The wind made her fringes fall on her eyes blocking her view and while trying to correct them she accidently brush her eyes and immediately screamed "Aaaouch ". Rudra shocked launched forward quickly with his heart in his mouth "Kya hua??.. Paro..Paro.." Paro shivering at his closeness still squeezing her eyes "Ku..Kuch nahi Major Saab..I think the chilli is making my eyes burn". Rudra remembering the chilli bowl near the doorway understood Paro's hand still has that dried chilli scent.

"Ushh..Paro..ruk..Let me see" he stopped her from rubbing her eyes and came closer to soothe her burning eyelids. Suddenly he touched her eyes with his hands and wiped her eyelids with the rain droplets dripping on her. Paro trembled at his unexpected gesture tried to step back but Rudra held her hands with his and washed hers along with his in the rain water which has now increased from a drizzle to a slight heavy droplets..Paro closed her eyes shut tight with the scintillating feeling his touch has aroused in her. Rudra on seeing her trembling closed eyes and lips couldn't resist any longer and moved closer again, with all the newly blossomed love touched her delicate skin above her eyes with his lips and his hands covering her cold wet cheeks. Paro's hands quickly clenched to his Kurta when she felt the warm kiss on her eyes even with the cold rain now drenching them.

Her breathing hiked and her hold tightened with her lips quivering unable to comprehend what is happening. Rudra looked at the delicate lips all wet and shivering, moved his long fingers from her cheeks and touched the lower lip line but suddenly stopped and stepped back a little. Paro felt her hand being stretched a little and immediately tried opening her eyes against the splashing rain and found Rudra slightly stepped back. Rudra looking at Paro's confused face said slowly " Paro..I ..I.. need to say something to you"...Paro simply stared at him unable to understand anything happening for the past few minutes.

" I am never good at words Paro but today I need to say these...I know you feel I am your life..you have always tolerated with all my Jallad actions...always kept my respect...but inturn I gave only hurt for you Paro..only hurt...will you ever forgive me?"..Paro was too stunned to utter any words and simply stared at him ..Before she could say anything Rudra continued "When I missed you in the station my heart broke to million pieces..I realized how much you mean to me Paro..I can't imagine my life without you hereon.. I need you..need you all my life..but before I take you, I need to give the respect you deserve...the respect my Paro deserves..."

With his eyes on the red thread around her neck " now this red thread is hurting my eyes more..It reminds me how cruel I have been with you..I don't want to be that Jallad anymore Paro..I can't hurt you anymore" and continued after a pause " Kyunki ...mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon Paro"( because I love you very much Paro) and he pulled the beautiful mangalsutra out of his pocket choking " aur ye bohot pyaar paro..bohot"(and this is my immense love for you Paro..immense) and came forward.

The heavy downpour reduced to mere drizzle now but Paro's eyes moistened beyond her control and her tears spoke million unspoken emotions when Rudra untied the Laal Dhaaga". With small lightening and distant thunder sounds and with blessing drizzles, Rudra placed the mangalsutra around her neck with such love and concern and said wiping her tears " Paro, I don't know about the rituals and I don't care about them too but I want to promise you one thing today ..you are the only precious thing that ever happened to me Paro ..and you will be breathing inside my soul even if I stop breathing... Tu...Main...Hamesha ..."

Paro touched her mangalsutra with tears now flowing freely looked into his eyes still dazed..He cupped her cheeks and asked " Will you forgive me for everything ?..I am sorry ". Paro couldn't control anymore and hugged him tight with all her strength and said in broken words " Major Saab ..U never did anything wrong to me ..and you could never keep your hate promises either...there is no need for any forgiveness when there is nothing to forgive..you have always been my Rakshak...always will be" and sobbed uncontrollably

Rudra completed the hug taking all his rights with his now respectable wife bundled within his hands consoling her..both stood like that for few minutes basking in Bholenath blessings in the form of the sweet drizzle which has almost stopped now..Paro realized that she is too close in an open terrace and tried to move away suddenly feeling shy...but Rudra held her tight by her waist with new confidence..He held her chin and made her look into his eyes which is intense now as before..He lowered and placed a soft kiss on her left cheek and when he was about to kiss her right cheek, she smacked his chest and tried to move away unaware about her dupatta's one end stuck to Rudra's Rudrashk.. Paro stopped near the swing unable to move further holding her other end trembling realizing the other end is with Rudra with her back fully exposed to him..Her heart pounded hard as she felt his steps nearing her from back and held on to the swing tightly for support blushing to every root of her cell..

Rudra slowly covered the shivering Paro from back draping like a blanket with her dupatta much to her relief and surprise. He held her shoulders and turned her " Paro ..I am not that Jallad anymore...don't you trust me? " ..Paro immediately touched his lips to stop him from saying any more words and cupped his cheeks saying.." I can never trust anyone in my life more than you Major Saab... and I can never love anyone in my life more than you"..Rudra felt overwhelmed as she tiptoed and gave a hard kiss on his forehead marking her words in bold..

The new wave of cold breeze flowed making the rose plants sizzle and Rudra swept Paro by her foot and carried her to once his bedroom...now their bedroom...Rudra placed Paro on the bed and looked deeply in her eyes.. Paro who was holding her dupatta tightly till now relaxed slowly turning her head sideways trying to avoid his gaze..Rudra realizing her gesture leaned closer enveloping her just like the clear skies enveloping the beautiful Haveli promising a beautiful dawn..

Well sweethearts..I am not comfortable in writing intimate sensuous scenes and kept them minimal for your own imagination..I am leaving the english translation and youtube link for that song..You can have a look if you are interested as the scenes were written around those lyrics..I didn't add the lyrics in between as i felt it might hinder the flow of reading...

HINDI - ENGLISH TRANSLATION

http://www.krazylyrics.in/2014/08/12/sawan-aaya-hai-translation-creature-3d/

YOUTUBE LINK

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9GyJVu_HpYI&spfreload=10

Please leave your thoughts ..positive..negative..anything..one more time in the comment section and once again thank you for all the encouraging words for the first part and reading the second part as well😉

Special thanks to Harry for persuading me non-stop to write this and hence all the positive credits goes to you darling..😳😳

Cheers 🤗

Originally posted by: sarita_barun

Really enjoyed it.
Its been a while since I've read or wrote on PaRud... because its just been too difficult.
But thanks to you I've read this today...😊