Two Shot: PARUD's 'Sawan Aaya Hai' (Part2 in pg 7 updt) - Page 8

Originally posted by: multimediaa

Deeps that was awesome🤗.

So sweet😃.

Can Rudra get anymore sweeter😃.

And u gave a proper closure too😉.

Some portion of ur narration remained me of Ramanichandran😃

I am a big RC crazy almost read all her stories😳.

U have given words to Rudra's and Paro's love😳.

Chanse illa poonga👏👏.

Do write more in the future😛.

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Deepa Akka , beautiful again 😊 very nice .. i loved it 😊

Originally posted by: JJKKL

So you stuck to the original plan and decided not to torment us. Made Rudra put the mangalsutra around her neck.

Now tell me something why was she relieved that he covered her back with the duppatta ? Deepa, you should have prolonged that scene more. Like desisoapie 😉

This just activates our gutter minds. Please write the third shot and give us peace of mind 😆

Written very well Deepa. Enjoyed reading it.

Originally posted by: Parud7

Hi deepa di,
wonderful di. Today u provd it i m right in my selection. Your presentation in pink color nd title beautifuly writen so sweet. You hv unique writing skills which purely show emotions heartly. Love u di u mention me always bt i didn't do anything its ur imagination ur hard work. You are amazing nd di if u can than plz continue this TS nd plz write more on parud. Thanks for pm me. God bless u always.

Originally posted by: nik1310

Thoroughly enjoyable SS... jus hope it was longer...as the show was going on i often felt the terrace was not used for any PARUD rendezvous...so romantic, the swing, the breeze and u threw in some rain too...to borrow from other members here...i confess to have a "gutter brain" would have liked some steamier scenes, hope you will write a Part 3...with some hot scenes😉

Originally posted by: rithureuben

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">😆😆😆...Rithu I have updated and stuck to original Two Shot concept..need more time for long stories which I don't have time for now..Just like you , me too very uncomfortable in writing romantic intimate scenes..Lets leave that job to Sonia😉..we will stick to reading and drooling them😆😆
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Thanks Rithu for your never ending encouragement and sweet words🤗</font>

Deeps loved it. Thank you so much for making Rudra give the mangalsutr. Write OS or TS for now, I understand that you are busy. You're right about the intimate scenes, we can write sweet moments but it takes writers like Sonia to create sensuous moments between Parud. Let's stick to reading and drooling.
Coming to the update, I can't believe you created chilli powder romance. That's why I say you are an amazing writer. I never saw that coming. It was so sweet the way he cleansed her eyes with rain water and then kissed her eyelids. Well done deeps 👏
And the confession, it was exactly how Rudra would go about slightly awkward but still trying to be clear about his feelings. Loved it. 😊
Can't wait for more. .

Originally posted by: Edna_Philip

Awesome one.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Aruna.negi

Awesome one.

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

Deepa dear ...

It was an awesome part. You have made me remember Parud so much. There was so much to do in RR and Sanish as Parud were a goldmine capable of delivering any emotion perfectly. Plus the ensemble cast was great too.

I wish RR could have been luckier in not landing with COLORS who brutally screwed it up !

This is a beautiful piece of work

and don't bother much about not being able to write intimate scenes because sensuality in itself is very alluring and beautiful and that is what emnates here!

Lot sof love.. tc dear! 🤗

Originally posted by: SanayaIsBest

Thanks for PM Deepa!
Lovely reading!
Missing PARud now after reading this