Two Shot: PARUD's 'Sawan Aaya Hai' (Part2 in pg 7 updt) - Page 3

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

hiii Depaaa...

You started writing tooo... kya kya kar dia hai RR ne sabko !

I am loving it though... it was a beautiful chapter...

write more...jaldii ...jaldiii...jaldiii!! 😆

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Deeps,

its beautiful, soothing to my heart. You nicely put how Rudra was so eager to talk with Paro alone. Paro's promise is so touching. Always love to read your post.

Precap is yummy, please do update fast.

🤗

Originally posted by: believe77

Was going to read tomorrow, I am glad I read it today. Wonderful scene dear, there were so many things we were deprived of, little small moments such as the one you just described. Good Job, hope you will update soon.👏

Originally posted by: prabha.abha

Nice. Miss them a lot

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Hey you should write more. Wonderfully written. I could almost see Paro standing there

Originally posted by: rithureuben

Loved the story and a little annoyed with you for stopping it so soon.
Seriously, as amazing as the Mangasutr track was, I wanted him to give it to her as soon as he bought it and not carry it around in his pocket. I'm assuming that's happening in the next part and thanking you in advance.
I wanted them to have some peaceful time after the railway station where they are both lost in thoughts of each other and then some lovey dovey moments before Mala returned. Thank you for writing a TS about it.
I like the fact that you are making use of the lovely terrace in the old Haveli. That was so beautiful and we got only one stairs scene there.
Thank you for including the swing too. I hated that we never got to see Rudra push Paro on the swing. During the Teej sequence Mala pushed her, Shantanu pushed her but Rudra didn't.
Waiting for the next part deeps. Update soon.

P.S. I love to read your witty writing. Please write whenever you are free.

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

hiii Depaaa...

You started writing tooo... kya kya kar dia hai RR ne sabko !

I am loving it though... it was a beautiful chapter...

write more...jaldii ...jaldiii...jaldiii!! 😆

Originally posted by: SanayaIsBest

Brought back memories of RR and PaRud...
Lovely writing Deepa...

Originally posted by: Fimiramak

Deepa,

This made my morning!

Good one, beautifully written. So much good memories

Loved the part when Paro was promising "Major Saab, I promise you I will give back that life..."

Precap; interesting, update soon. Already waiting for some romance..😳

Thanks for pm 🤗

Have a nice day, or is night? 😕

Originally posted by: Parud7

Hi Deepa di,
Awesum awesum di. You proved today my decision for choosing u is correct. You told me why u bt i knw u can make justice to it...i asked u for one os bt u made dis to TS love u di.
This is our Rangrasiya which we always missd in d show. I love d part where rudra think"meri zindagi me bhi sawan aya hai" how beautifuly u captured their feeling just mesmrised me...you perfectly use dis part for writing as it suits...i imagined how he wud give her mangalsutra bt u stop it please di update soon soon.
Thanks for pm me di. Waiting for next part.:-)