Two Shot: PARUD's 'Sawan Aaya Hai' (Part2 in pg 7 updt)

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Parud7

@Parud7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hi Deepa di,
Awesum awesum di. You proved today my decision for choosing u is correct. You told me why u bt i knw u can make justice to it...i asked u for one os bt u made dis to TS love u di.
This is our Rangrasiya which we always missd in d show. I love d part where rudra think"meri zindagi me bhi sawan aya hai" how beautifuly u captured their feeling just mesmrised me...you perfectly use dis part for writing as it suits...i imagined how he wud give her mangalsutra bt u stop it please di update soon soon.
Thanks for pm me di. Waiting for next part.:-)

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firsttimehere

@firsttimehere

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hello Akka , Its a beautiful piece of writing .. I loved it 😊

I say you should actually pursue writing more .. even after you finish the TS😊 .. I love the way you pick up small gentle and tender scenes and write around those.I also loved your take on how RR ended with PaRud and their 2 children 😊

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1sarun

@1sarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Nice writing, loved reading it. I so wished to see such scenes for PaRud in Rr, thanks for this.

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-UnknownSoul-

@-UnknownSoul-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

This is just awesome Deeps dl.
Why do you think you can't write well?
This was freaking awesome! AMAZING ⭐️ 😳

thanks to Harry for asking you to write this 😳

Update sooon!!!
😳

Edited by Preggy - 10 years ago

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Lepzy

@Leprechaun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Nice one.

Thanks for the PM.

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Pramila

@blue_rose1605

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Deepa you should write more.
Wonderfully written 😊

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kulfi89

@kulfi89

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

dis s really awesome... luved d way dey both are gng lovey dovey on each other... u write really well...😊.. I was actually expecting sme moment lyk dis in d show after d railway track scene... but dey just started over wid the mala track really soon... Reading abu it now is quite satisfying... Waiting for the next shot

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Mano.M

@Mano.M

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

How dare u tease me like this😡.I was so involved in reading it.Then suddenly realized its finished with a precap😲😲 .How could u do this to me?😭😭

Write remaining and upload it soon.😛

Enna patha unngalaku pavama illiya?😭

Deeps I feel comfortable reading ur story.Simple but elegant.

And it was heart warming.😳

What nonsense was that mentioning this as ur last story in the PM😡😡.

I will send my Dadisa(offcourse Mukti😆😆)after u

and will ask Parms to fill ur post with scary pics.🤣