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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: psagars

Just read the 4th chapter. Myrah's inner turmoil very well reflected. While the first three chapters were crisp and to the point. this one established your hidden creative and artistic writing talent. I loved it.

You should have written this earlier and sent to Mr. Hegde. They were in need of this.

I am happy with Myrah being Myrah as I treat it now as RR 2.0. It is not that the cvs were not creative enough, it is that they were not daring and honest enough to follow their original version. it is like just as the channel had given up they too had laid down their creative writing pens down. Not angry but pity them.
Well will be there till the last episode. Hopefully meet again in new forum. Me a diehard fan of Sanaya and will follow her to her next show. Not sure about Ashish. Real life allows me only one serial at a time. Are you a Sanaya fan?

Waiting for further updates.


Your observation skills are damn good. You know creativity and writing in detail does not come to me naturally. Had to really remind myself multiple times before writing Chapter 4. 😆

Yes I am a Sanaya fan. Also of Ashish. These two are the best ones I have ever watched in Desi TV. I hope some day we get to see a movie of theirs.

Edited by JJKKL - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: rithureuben

Just read Part 4. Its amazing how you have worked in Paro's last moments with her baby and kept the connection alive through her dreams. Looking forward to the next part.


Thank you. Pressure is building up for me to deliver Chapter 5 properly !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

The fourth chapter was very well done. Myrah's inner turmoil brought through well. I concede, you don't need an "acceptable" time frame to fall in love or grieve 😆 As Paro said, kaanto se pyaar ho gaya toh ho gaya, ab koyi kya kar sakta hai 😛

Thanks for writing this series.


Thank you. Next is from Namoona's POV. Hopefully will get sometime tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Updated on page 8. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Zeeliciousxo

Read all four chapters, it was tough because even though I don't watch the show I'm guessing these scenes between Rudra and Myrah actually happened? Where he tells her he doesn't want her to get married to Rohit? Did Myrah actually say she doesn't mind marrying Rudra? Did she actually say that she feels Dhruv is already hers? (NOOO Paro is Dhruv's mother, nobody can take her place😡)


I don't know, because Myrah is Myrah for the CVs these scenes were very painful to read about. But I like your own spin on the story, love that M = P and Rudra knows it, which is why he's so obsessed with her suddenly. Makes more sense than what the CVs have been showing us honestly. I so wish the CVs had showed us what you're writing about.

Looking forward to the continuation of this story.



Zee,

Rudra does not exactly tell her that in the serial. He did express his displeasure in her announcing the wedding in 10days. But do not remember the exact words. Myrah also did not get a chance to express her love or willingness to marry Rudra.
Some twists and turns are there to suit my version 😆

Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RR through my eyes (Chapter 5)

Rohit was not quite happy with the way things went in the drawing room of the haveli. After Rudra formed a human chain with Myrah and him he had expected Rudra to blurt out something. Anything to confirm Rohit's doubts. But no. Rohit had tried to push him further - goading Rudra to leave Myrah's hand. And then he could hardly see what followed as it happened in the flash of a second. Myrah was pulled behind Rudra and Rudra himself was standing in front of Rohit. Towering over him - glaring at Rohit. Daring Rohit as to what he will do if Rudra does not leave Myrah's hand. Rohit saw it then. The possessiveness. The ownership. The seal of belonging and protectiveness. But Rohit had wanted some verbal confirmation. Which did not happen. Myrah came in between and was visibly upset and shaken by the drama which immediately changed Rudra's stand. He let go. And asked her to take the decision. And when she made the decision to not go shopping and went back to her room (with Rohit) Rudra did what he could under the circumstances. Damage control. Got the sareewala home and apologised to Rohit. Well , sort of.

Rohit had known Myrah since their first day in the nursery. Had met her almost every week at least - even after they started going to different universities. Till her accident seven years back in India. Both the families and a few of their relatives including Myrah Uncle were on a Rajasthan trip. Myrah used to be a fab photographer. One of her passions had been to tour the world and to capture the moments where she felt connected. And she had been doing the same that fateful day as well. During these photo sessions nobody could reach her through phone. She was immersed in the beauty in front of her eyes, in the lights and shadows and angles and ranges that time stood still. And that day none of them could reach her for more than 24 hours. And nobody felt anything suspicious because Myrah was that kind of a person. After 56 hours they got a call from the hospital about her having met with an accident and that she was in the ICU. She was in a coma for days.

The accident changed her a lot. To start with she lost her speech. Fortunately it was only for a year. Once she was out of the coma she was flown to America and treated by the best doctors that money could buy. She could hear but not talk. Funnily enough she responded only to family. And not to the hospital staff or the doctors. He had attributed this to Myrah's defiance of authority. But something happened which made him wonder whether this was the reason.

After two months of being in the hospital, Myrah was assigned an Indian born nurse. Somehow Myrah connected with her. Started listening to her and slowly but steadily the family members and friends were relieved that they could leave Myrah with the nurse in case of emergency rather than taking turns to be with Myrah. Rohit realized from his discussions with the nurse that Myrah used to respond only to Hindi. He tested out this himself and found that the accident has somehow caused her to forget English altogether. He added that to the long list of other changes in Myrah which were not explained. Like her sudden aversion to milk. Her shyness in changing her dress in front of male doctors or even her own father. And her dislike of western clothes. Or rather preference of Indian dresses. The only thing which was Indian about Myrah before the accident was her long tresses. But it seems she has become more Indianized after the trauma.

After five months the doctors gave Myrah permission to shift to her home. And the family hired the same Indian nurse. And just like that - one day after almost a year from the day of accident - Myrah started talking. She had no memories of her life before. And her parents tried their best to recreate her memory through photos, videos, anecdotes about her life and through Myrah's own selfies and video messages. She had forgotten all about photography and one of the leading photographers offered to help out through training. But Myrah could never go back to the original creative style.

She had recurring nightmares. And recurring headaches. None of the doctors could find any physical problem with her. And thus began her counseling sessions. They helped quite a lot. Myrah who had become very quiet and reserved during that year slowly started being happy and cheerful. Maybe the counseling was too good as the arrogance and defiance which were hallmarks of Myrah 1.0 ( that is how Rohit used to refer to her in front of his parents not hers !!) were absent in the new Myrah. And just like a true friend he saw her through her troublesome time and also all the later years. Following the counselor's advice to the dot by never putting pressure on her to remember her past. Tried his best to keep her happy all the time. Be her pillar of support. Shielding her from all the unwanted prying eyes and questioning people.

(To be continued ...)


Chapter 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113060699



Edited by JJKKL - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, I'm first 😃
Okay, I am loving the way you're taking this ... I actually didn't mind Rohit in the confrontation with Rudra ... and the drinking scene yesterday could also be part of his testing Rudra's reactions ... and also clarifying that nothing has happened between him and Myrah.

It could be read also as his establishing his possessiveness over Myrah ... and that's probably the way they will take it in the show.

But I prefer your way ... making Rohit a decent guy. If Myrah has been best friends with him for so many years ... the real Myrah since childhood, and Paro, since seven years ... then he has to be a nice person. So he's testing his suspicions that Myrah is not Myrah, she is Paro ... I wonder if he has seen the picture of Paro in Rudra's room.

Also love the way you brought out the change in personality from Myrah to Paro ... see, Mr RS, that isn't so difficult at all, is it? 😕

Loved the update!!! Already waiting for the next! 😃
Edited by DiyaS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
JJ awesome update
And its so clearly explained...loved the way you have taken the Rohit-Myrah story forward...

Like Diya said, its not complicated, they could have easily shown this.

Loved it please continue...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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dear JJ,
What an awesome thought process? Like I had said on Diyu Sa's thread, it is actually possible to make anything happen.. this is fiction after all. You have begun to spun such an interesting and amazing trail I am completely hooked to it.
Cant wait for next take already... I liked how you have shown Myrah's flashbacks of the life she led as Paro earlier. Very well put and Rudra is so helpless... he wants to make her realize she is Paro but not able to do so... WOW !!!!
I wish any of this could have been shown in the show.. it would have worked as a balm on all us parched souls!!! I feel so bad thinking we got so less of Parud on screen.. they are the epitome of a perfect couple to me now!!
I love your take... may be I shall imagine this is how RR went in my heart and seek solace.
thank u dear ... thank u. 😊
Edited by aaliah3108 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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JJ thanks for the buddy request. I was not a very active IF member. But RR and the wonderful posts of some wonderful people coerced me into expressing my thoughts as well. With RR ending I have not only the wonderful memories of a magical love story of Rudra-Paro but also the joy of knowing and meeting people like you.

Read the fifth chapter. Loved it.
Good to read Rohit' point of view. He is an intelligent, good hearted person and a good friend too. I am sure in your story, he is definitely not the villain but will be the one who will help Rudra. Rudra may at present hate him but if wants his Paro back, he will have to take Rohit into confidence. Rohit is the key to Myrah's past.


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