OS: tip tip barsa pani - Page 4

Originally posted by: reeha...k

Oh I'm so sorry Zee *Hugs* I know it's hard...but I just can't seem to get over them (as depressing as it sounds) I promise I'll make it up to you and write something that's them together not just together in thought. Hope you'll enjoy that better doll! 🤗

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2

Hey Reeha,

That was really lovely and heart-felt. You could feel what Rudra's thoughts were towards the end, such is the impact while you beautifully depict a scene!

A wonderful read, and wish you write more!

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..

Beautiful os..

Originally posted by: Rudradewaani

sad OS, brilliant job.

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

beautiful but very sad.

miss them together*sigh*

Originally posted by: bebo2050

That was really nice

...but the ending 💔.

Originally posted by: rupao21

I'm in awe, moved, teary eyed, inspired.. what else can I say. I don't think I can ever use the right words to emphasize how mind blown I am. And you shouldn't be surprised. Gurl, whenever you write on Parud.. I'm begging you (LOL) PM ME! xD

On a serious note though, I loved this, whole heartedly. Rudra's pain is very real, it's relatable because I feel like I've lost Paro as well, somehow. Odd as it is, those characters are very dear to me. And the fact that your words were able to move me.. wah. I mean, your writing skills are evident. The scene was playing before my eyes. The longing, the joy and playfulness. All was real.

Well done!!!

Seriously though, I very much admire your writing, there are very few writers like you here on this forum so please, keep it up. Thank you for posting and sharing.