OS: The Shadow Lines - Page 3

Aweosme, was Myrah paro's ghost?

Loved it! You are a fantastic writer. This the ending I would be happy with.

Wow, this was interesting read.

I guess Myrah was Paro's ghost?

such a beautiful OS!!

Woah! Such a beautifully written story. You kept Rudra's character intact. You gave Myrah the gravitas and the spirit of Paro shone through the whole story. Lovely! 😊

Beautifully written! What a lovely story - just wanted to say - adore you VMs and blog posts too!

beautiful seemless writing... great work...

Lovely story...way better than what they are showing in the show...

This is sooo awesome... I mean first time I'm reading something so realistic but impactful! You have so subtly pointed out the things which are common between Paro and Myra that the reader wonders if they are really the same person, afterall?? Yet Myra doesn't get struck by an avalanche of memories on seeing Paro, like the average typical Hindi movie drama. And that, I really liked! Do consider continuing...