FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed)

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#841

wow..wonderful ending to a really great story..enjoyed reading it.😊.rusra's transformation form a hitman to a tender lover to a husband and then a dad was captured beautifully...lovely story...👏

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#842

That was such a beautiful ending. You made me cry.
Rudra and his cute little family. Its so nice to see him fuss over his wife and his anxiety whether he will be a good father. And she got the two sons she always wanted.
Thanks for the PM. Do remember me when you write more on Parud.

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#843

Fantastic epilogue.
Such a nice ending.
Rudra, paro and two sons.
Beautiful.
As for the other stories.
Can't wait to read all of them as they all sound interesting.
P.S Loved yeh jawani hai deewani.

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#844

it was a befitting beautiful ending to a lovely tale of transformation from a jalad to a human. overflowing love and yes paro and rudra needs her all the way

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 10 years ago

#845

I am feeling so emotional right now alyssa.
Will miss this story so so much dear.
just can't express in words.
Thanks a lot for this wonderful story .
will eagerly wait for ur future parud works.
tfd pm.
t.c.

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Cutemithra

@Cutemithra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#846

Nice epilogue.. Thank you so much for this amazing FF... Parud with their two sons just like Paro wished, happily ever after...
Waiting for your future works after your break...

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Directional.

@Directional.

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

unres
perfect ending.. loved it dear.. 👏 feeling emotional..
will look forward to the os's on parud and arshi story.. can u plz pm me?? 😊

Edited by Directional. - 10 years ago

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harryh474

@harryh474

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#848

Dear Devdasi,
nice epilogue...paro always wanted two sons nd u actualy made it...love ur way of writing...i knew i found less time for commenting bt i read always.,u never imagine how much i cried as dis is ur last chapter..i wish it cudn't be ended...bt someone say"end of one thing is begning of smthng new". So i will wait ur next parud os or ff which u think rudra style lv. Till than take rest..god bless u.