FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#851

fantaatic story.

it was so interesting to read, filled with twist and turns. Rudra, no matter he acted inhuman, when love crossed his path he had to bow down and accept that he is weak wound man who need help. Parvati was an angel in disguise send in his life to give him joy of completeness and he did what he could best to offer in return, he loved her unconditionally even more than his life. I love the ending, aww twin sons, that great.

Waiting to read your next story eagerly.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Fantastic, simply love reading it.

Will be waiting for your next ff 😊

Viji

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@rupao21

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#853

This FF came alive and attributed smiles to me as a reader. There are not enough words to justify my feelings towards this. It's like it was only yesterday we were seeing the two love birds as Parvati the prisoner and Rudra the handsome killer.

Beautiful ending to what was a thrilling FF. An ff I always looked forward to. The cravings and mood swings were very sweet and endearing. You promised me babies and we got TWINS IN ONE GO! too sweeett dhruv and karthik.

You were clever with the last chapter, descriptive with logic and reasoning with the way you handled Rudra killing T. Glad that our supporting characters Aman & Pia stuck around, so lovely.

Thank you for sticking around and hopefully continuing to do so. As always, I look forward to your writing. Believe me, you are one of the writers on this forum who truly inspire me and expand my imagination.

Going to miss your PM's and your lovely writing, till your SS I guess.

Lots of love and appreciation.. RU.

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#854

Loved the story 👏

Will read what ever you write 😃

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thakurpreeti

@thakurpreeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#855

Thank u devdasi for giving us a wonderful story, love it soo much. Perfect ending but sad abt thinking that lovely story end

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#856

That was an amazing epilogue

They finally are safe and have the two sons that Paro always wanted

Dhruv and Karthik

This was such an amazing story, so different yet so strong

Can't wait for your new PaRud and new ArShi

These are the only stories that I read

Enjoy your break until December

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anisa79

@anisa79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#857

Perfect ending! Loved this whole FF, it's so sad it's ended but really happy to hear you're going to be coming back to write more! Can't wait

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Deepa

@deepsel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#858

This is such beautiful end Alyssa...Hats off you darling👏👏👏..My eyes almost teared up..What more can I say..I just wish that the original RR would have ended on a high note like this even if it is for 8 months..Now my heart is heavy thinking the way it was butchered..

This FF will always be close to my heart dear as I lived through every chapter of yours..I can proudly say I got an acquaintance of a great writer like you..Bless u dear..and thank you whole heartedly for this wonderful piece of work

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#859

Asusuall it's awsume..I will wait for your next parud ss and arshi's ff...plz give me pm for all new update..love u..thnx for the pm..

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#860

Loved the epilouge. Rudra's doubts about his being a good father is natural enough. Paro's talk to him put back the confidence in him. Loved the picture the family made in the end. Lovely ending.

Will wait for ur next ff.

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