FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed)

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cutiesmile

@cutiesmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#821

OMG what an update !! And its final chapter😭Iam going to miss ur FF..

But iam happy that u r going to start one more FF ..😊😳

Looking forward for epilogue of this FF and for new one 😊

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#822

Loved the update...happy to read that tejawat is dead...waiting for the epilouge...I will miss you and your ff...
It was a beautiful journey...eager to read your next ff...
Plz pm me that ff too...
Enjoyed alot..
Thanks for the pm 🥱

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#823

Tejawat finally got what he deserves glad Rudra finished him off properly! Can't believe the story is over though - it was brilliant how love changed the jallad

loved your pictorial update too - looking forward your next story and the epilogue !

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 10 years ago

#824

Well deserved fate for tejawat...
It was beautiful indeed...thnx for it
will b waiting for the epilogue.
Wish to see rudra as dad.

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Directional.

@Directional.

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#825

can't believe it ended! loved the intensity.. finally tejawat is dead! and parud r free! loved the return of jallad!! waiting for the epilogue..
p.s. plz keep writing on parud after this ff ends.. 😊

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KhushiParo

@KhushiParo

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#826

Wow! the justice is done at last.

Parud safe with their child. It is a beautiful story, sad it is ended but glad it happened with happy ending.

Thank you from bottom of my heart for writing and sharing this beautiful story.

Please do write more.

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thakurpreeti

@thakurpreeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#827

Hii DevdasiSingh, lovely update, thank u for giving us superb FF, will miss this lovely story n waiting for Ur new ff, hope u write new ff soon

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Tannu

@Tannakstar

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#828

This was fantastic! I mean whoa what a violent ending to Teju! That was like Al Capone and the baseball bat, it was fricking epic (gory, but epic)!

I also enjoyed the intense death scene being lightly sprinkled with humour. Like when Rudra mentions his incredulation at "self defence" bring synonymous with "bashing his brains in"!! And Aman using air quotes for "self defence" 🤣

Also loved the fact that one minute Teju was holding the gun, and the next Rudra's taken two steps and knocked him out AHAHAHA. RUDRA IS MY MAN.

This was a great ending to Teju and Rudra's inner Jallad. Now that he is truly free from his past, he can focus on being a family man. Speaking of which, I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS EPILOGUEEE

Love it ,

Tannu x

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anisa79

@anisa79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#829

Cant believe its over! Glad tejawat is dead!
So happy to hear youre going to another FF!! Cant wait!!

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Deepa

@deepsel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#830

Dear Alyssa...

First of all my heartfelt thanks for such a breathtaking beautiful FF👏👏..You have penned an absolute gem of a story with perfect beginning and even more perfect ending...It had all the flavors of love such as rawness, passion, strength, care, belief and ofcourse peace in the end...

This is exactly how a dark story should have been and should be in future too...perfect to their original characterization..absolutely phenomenal..

Sometimes a dark grin leave a deep impact in our hearts than a light smile and your story is one such grin...it will be in my heart as long as RR is with me..

For the first time I didn't feel remorse for killing a human being in such cruel manner...coz he deserved it..

Bless your writing skills and looking forward for your next FF too...🤗

Cheers

Deepa