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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: OriginalBarbie
Beautiful work👏
Like you I also hope it does not turn out like this in the show, i like how rudra knows paro is hurting, breaking from inside, shes at cross roads and does not know which way to turn..
One thing that has always struck me is that whatever issues paro and rudra had, it was always between them 2 only, no one else was allowed to interfer.
Again I would like this issue remain between them, let them find their way back to each other, lailais screen time needs to be reduced, shes done her job.

Thank you Sal!!

I am glad after Monday.. That the issue is actually between them.. And not the third person. The third person isn't even that important to either of them!

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Monday played out beautifully, didn't it?

Now that you pointed out, his vow hurt him in this piece! I hope that doesn't happen in the real show though.

And thank you for the comment!

Ohh yes!!!!! Monday was good... Paro asked all the right questions, put Laila in her place and even gave the reins of their relationship to the Major!!!!! Time to see what Major does to wriggle himself out of this tight spot Paro has put him in...

I hope so too that his hurtful vows don't come true!!!!! But, his worst fears might just come true if Paro's gonna leave him and go...!!!!!

By the way, how about a sequel to this one???? Something on the lines of "Main maati ka putla hoon, tune phoonki jaan"... Cause this one's titled lifeless, hence...😉

Edited by shutter - 11 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shutter

Ohh yes!!!!! Monday was good... Paro asked all the right questions, put Laila in her place and even gave the reins of their relationship to the Major!!!!! Time to see what Major does to wriggle himself out of this tight spot Paro has put him in...

I hope so too that his hurtful vows don't come true!!!!! But, his worst fears might just come true if Paro's gonna leave him and go...!!!!!

By the way, how about a sequel to this one???? Something on the lines of "Main maati ka putla hoon, tune phoonki jaan"... Cause this one's titled lifeless, hence...😉

I so don't want her to leave. Not now that she is asking him whether he can love her ever. What if he does start loving her, and then she leaves? What then!

And I actually participated in the Navarasas series on this forum, and I am up this week.. So I don't think I can do a sequel to this.

But maybe someday I will for sure write how she is the one who brought him to life.

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Pagal!

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

I so don't want her to leave. Not now that she is asking him whether he can love her ever. What if he does start loving her, and then she leaves? What then!

And I actually participated in the Navarasas series on this forum, and I am up this week.. So I don't think I can do a sequel to this.

:)

But maybe someday I will for sure write how she is the one who brought him to life.

I don't think anybody would want her to leave, maybe except Laila!!!!! 😛

Yeah, the same thing has me worried!!!! What if he is able to come to terms with his feelings and lets Paro know about the same, and then Paro decides to leave?????? Maybe Rudra gets to know the deal Paro had with her Bholenath, and he goes all ballistic to get her back!!!

Ohh wow... Next up in the Navarasa series is you!!!! And the sequel can come at anytime, you feel like writing... No hurries...

Will wait for weekend to come and your story in the Navarasas...👏

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Sonata24

@Sonata24

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Anky-chan!! You are a witch with words I tell you!! 👏

I'm BEWITCHED!!!

Oh my poor heart, how it ACHES for Rudra... How it hurts for our sweet Paro!!

Ugh! Reserved. Lemme go read it again.

Just want to say I love this one, and I love you too, but philhaal lemme go read this new baby one more time and let my heart bloody bleed. 😆

BRB. 😛

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Oh my dear lord I read and re-read the entire thing 3 times. This kind of writing, with its raw power... I'm in AWE.

Rudra's fear of losing this woman is so strong, he'd rather let her see the truth he hides from himself. He'd rather let her see his love for her, because Laila is an insignificant sliver of a long forgotten past. A past he is not proud of, a past he wishes never to relive.

And will there ever be place in his eyes for that little piece of an un-cared past when his love for Paro dominates and consumes his entire being?

I just can't seem to stop yapping about this one. Imma come back to this and keep re-editing the post every time I want to add something.

Just... Thank you for this piece of brilliance. My heart has been through knives while reading this-every single time, with every single sentence. Not many can evoke such strong emotions, Anky-chan. Fantastic, fantastic job. 👏 ❤️

Loads and loads of Love & Respect,

Sonata24

Edited by Sonata24 - 11 years ago