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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

That was magnificent Anki! I loved the glass house reference. It was perfectly in sync with Paro's emotions. And Rudra's guilt and pain was visible in each and every single word.

Beautifully done Anks! I loved it! <3

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Awesome piece though v sad..

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

My heart feels heavy with anguish for the two of them..

This is such a difficult situation... She is right in her way...and he cannot do more that admit that he was wrong and beg for forgiveness..

Beautifully expressed emotions Anky...great job!

Love

maya

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Fantastic writeup dii 👏
D emotions wer described beautifully 👏
Jus loveedd itt 😳

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Simply awesome loved it.
Tfd pm.

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shruathi

@shruathi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

awesome:)

i so want paro in the show to ask rudra the same q's??it would be interesting...

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iansomer

@iansomer

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

omg.it was amazing.would love if it happened in the show.pleassee write a sequel and pm me if u do. loved the punishment by paro.nothng could be more painful for him to watch the one he loves cry coz of him.thakyou 4 a wonderful piece of writing.

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

A heart breaking piece!!!!!! And the metaphor of glass houses was so well described!!!!!

Paro's last lines to Rudra... To look at her and see her break... From a pain that he had given her, fulfilling one of the vows he took during his marriage...

Lets see how Monday plays out...

This one needs to have a sequel for sure!!!!

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ThithliDhost

@ThithliDhost

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

How did I miss reading this one?

Beautiful Ankoo... Soo touching.. Very emotional.. And most of what u wrote played out 👏

Write more Ankoo.. It is always a pleasure reading your work.. 😳

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HappilyLost

@HappilyLost

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

This was amazing!

The dialogues were mesmerizing and the pain , the torment of both Rudra and Paro was palpable.

And the ending, the over powering guilt was something so thought provoking that I sat there, staring at my screen , speechless!

Ankita Baisa your writing style is damn beautiful. Everything from the start to the end was completely Rangrasiya style.

You have an amazing talent of involving the readers in your piece of work and I assure you, you had my undivided attention !!

I loved your title. Fits perfectly to Paro's current state of mind. And Rudra's desperation to make her realise that she is the one for him, not laila was brought out effectively.

I loved loved loved this OS as well!

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