UPDATED TS: FOREBODING & PENANCE - Page 2

Originally posted by: napstermonster

okay. so damn good SO damn good my love, that I am begging you, right here, to not call it a drabble and do a followup from paro's perspective.

Originally posted by: What_the

You echo the feelings of his heart DDC1 baisa...

Perfect...

He doesnt believe in God, doesnt believe in emotions...yet cannot resist this pull that he feels for her...he notices the tiniest things, the changes in her demeanour, the little telltale gestures that give away her anxiety...

And not knwoing the reason behind it, is killing him...that is so Rudra...

Foreboding indeed...aptly titled!!

I could feel restlessness welling up within my own self on reading what Rudra is going through...

We are all so nervous about what is to happen next week...😳

Thank you for the PM..

Love

Maya

Originally posted by: piccola1

Love your OSs, Drabbles...They are so beautiful, I know they will touch me even before I start reading them. And that certainty makes me scan this forum, in the hope of seeing you write in, everyday !

Thank You, for yet another gem of a piece. Wish our Banna does anticipate her flight...and make her understand her worth in his eyes...😳

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

I beg you... I beg you with all that i have got that please continue this.

This was sooo... just so *I don't have words*...

The words you use are magical.. The uneasiness.. The feeling that was gnawing at his heart, could be felt by the reader too!

Would you please continue this?

And how I'd love if in the show too, he senses that something is wrong... That something is too good to be true again.

TQ all for your wonderful comments & asking me to write more of this. Though originally meant as a drabble to curb my tendency to be garrulous in my writing, I am converting it into a TS with Paro's perspective added(TQ Napster). Watch this space tomorrow night. I appreciate your thoughts on Part 2 as well.