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This was so sad OS 😭

Originally posted by: shree10

I have no words to say except this was very heartwrenching and beautifully written!

I hope TS is three shot??

Shree,
Nahi yaar. This started as an OS & now its a TS. No More for now. TQ for the lovely compliment.

Originally posted by: IPK007

Even though I don't watch RR, I could all the emotions raging inside Paro's heart. That line about Paro wanting to hoard a piece of Rudra within her, before she left ,was very poignant :)

Jenny,
TQ much.
To others who might see this, if you don't already please read Jenny's Arshi FF- Saffron Fields. You will fall in love I promise.

Originally posted by: What_the

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Like raindrops that fell like Manna on her parched life, he was precious to her. If</font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Bholenath saw it fit to stream him away before she could absorb even bits of him, it was His will and her fate.</font>

<font size="2"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Such a beautiful thought!</font></font>

<font size="2"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I feel for Paro. She desires to keep a piece of him in the form of their child - yet can't bring herself to deprive the father and child of each other...</font></font>

<font size="2"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">But she is courageous, she refuses to end her life, to end the torment - she will face whatever fate decides to mete out to her...</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Very nicely written...especially liked "</font>unknowing that she would leave him bereft of his heart, his soul and the very reason to breathe."

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thank you for the PM!!</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Cheers</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Maya</font>

Maya
Thank you so much. Looking forward to your Navrasa

Such a beautiful story

The end lines r so touching.
Paro HAS becum rudras life and soul but neither seem to realise it

I cant believe iv missed this it till now

Pleeease can u add me to ur list of readers to pm wen u do next part etc?

Thank u

Samina

Originally posted by: LivesInHope

Such a beautiful story

The end lines r so touching.
Paro HAS becum rudras life and soul but neither seem to realise it

I cant believe iv missed this it till now

Pleeease can u add me to ur list of readers to pm wen u do next part etc?

Thank u

Samina

Originally posted by: shirinfarhaad

I loved it!! It was awesome, I am so glad I am not the only one who is not comfortable with the vow she made to her bholenath. My only concern is, when she is gone from Rudra's life, his life will be worse than death itself. I am just waiting for the CVs to handle the track nicely, for that we have to wait and watch.