UPDATED TS: FOREBODING & PENANCE - Page 4

" unknowing that she would leave him bereft of his heart, his soul and the very reason to breathe."it was most beautiful line for me.loved it

Love the story so far.

Nice dear thanx for the pm

This is so gut wrenching. 😭

Awesome update

Great update. Glad you are continuing. I hope this will work out for her in the end.

I have no words to say except this was very heartwrenching and beautifully written!

I hope TS is three shot??

both parts super...

I loved it!! It was awesome, I am so glad I am not the only one who is not comfortable with the vow she made to her bholenath. My only concern is, when she is gone from Rudra's life, his life will be worse than death itself. I am just waiting for the CVs to handle the track nicely, for that we have to wait and watch.

It is such an emotional TS. Just when they could live peacefully and happily it had to come to an end.