UPDATED TS: FOREBODING & PENANCE

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

" unknowing that she would leave him bereft of his heart, his soul and the very reason to breathe."it was most beautiful line for me.loved it

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Love the story so far.

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prabha

@prabha.abha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice dear thanx for the pm

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kirti98

@kirti98

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

This is so gut wrenching. 😭

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awesome update

The way you penned down Parvati POV and emotions, its fabulous.

waiting for the next part eagerly.

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Great update. Glad you are continuing. I hope this will work out for her in the end.

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

I have no words to say except this was very heartwrenching and beautifully written!

I hope TS is three shot??

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HARSHAVARDHINI

@hearty_harsha

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

both parts super...

U r a great writer.

Thanks For pm

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shirinfarhaad

@shirinfarhaad

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

I loved it!! It was awesome, I am so glad I am not the only one who is not comfortable with the vow she made to her bholenath. My only concern is, when she is gone from Rudra's life, his life will be worse than death itself. I am just waiting for the CVs to handle the track nicely, for that we have to wait and watch.