NAVARASA:The Series-- # 2 UP on Pg 13! Vibhatsa (Disgust)

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Navin- sa what's this? you can do so much better?!

That was a very bad joke - this can't be bettered - this is heart-rippingly beautiful, this is gut-wrenchingly poetic, this is stunning!

No words are not enough - the only way someone stops fighting for themselves is if they have lost all hope and you brought out the severity of her crushed hopes so well as she didn't want to escape her hell and not just that -you have turned it into the emotion of disgust -the underlying rage and frustration she feels has turned inwards and comes out as disgust towards herself - the scrubbing of her skin till its red is such a poignant image

Wow what a start to what I'm sure will be an amazing series - I feel privileged to be able to read stories from such talented writers for free!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

That was so heart-wrenching - Nandini - getting into life that is unimaginable & making yourself living it to survive...Vibhatsya, she is not!

-Sona

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

WOW THAT WAS HEART BREAKING SO MANY TIME SHE SCREAM FOR HELP AND SO MANY TIME SHE TRIED TO GET OUT BUT THE TIME RUDRA FINALLY REACH SHE HAD ACCEPTED THE FATE SHE WAS FORCED TO LIVE AND DID NOT KNOW HOW TO SAVE HER SELF AMAZING START CONGRATS ON THE NEW SERIES .

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Navin it's very good ... I want to feel like this if I see nandini but I know I won't..

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@...pinky...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

This was...words cannot describe what I felt when I was reading this. To touch upon Paro's sister, Nandhini, brilliant for "Disgust"...utterly brilliant. It took me a second or two to remember who Nandhini was, because she was mentioned just briefly on the show. But, once I figured it out, my eyes wouldn't leave the screen.

Thank you for creating this masterpiece, to touch upon a topic that is so relevant even in this day and age. Sex trafficking still exists, not just in India/Pakistan but in developed countries as well. This is an utterly disgusting practice and to think that women to do this to other women, it just blows my mind. Thank you for giving Nandhini a second chance at life, a rebirth. My only hope is that women trapped in this life is given one as well.

Bravo, napermonster. Bravo. 👏

Edited by khushiarnav88 - 11 years ago

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MadhuO

@MadhuO

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

WOW...what a story. Brilliant writing. Looking forward to more of your stories.

Would love to see this as Nandini's story in RR.

Again, great work.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

This is awesome ... great writing ...

Thank you so much for making our weekends so interesting ...

Looking forward to more fabulous writing from our great writers ...

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Woah...SO SO heartbreaking and raw.

Such a thing rebirth...how fortunate few are when they are given that chance, and yet here Nandini embraced it, realizing just how lucky she was. Rukshar...such strength she showed when everyone was silent...if you think about who she COULD have been had this not been forced on her.

Like your other readers, I couldn't help but cry...

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piccola1

@piccola1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

What a tremendously brilliant piece of work NM ! You have given a mere name from the serial, a character, a history, an entire life story ! The narration is raw and in your face, more so as it describes the horrors of an innocent girl's transformation into a pathetic, spirit less, broken creature.

Apart from the deep sadness you've evoked as I identify with her state, you've also triggered in me a gnawing feeling of inadequacy..For sitting here, responding to a story, completely uncaring, while thousands of Nandinis, live thru this hell every day. I will - most certainly - now try and figure out how I can do something, anything worthwhile, in making this hell-world easier for them.

Thank you.

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Dear Napsterji,

Well you make disgust even seem beautiful, such is the impact of your writing leaving us all spell-bound.

You clearly do your research when it comes to the description of minute details, the atomosphere/environment, the character's feelings, to be honest, the whole thing.

Keeping it fast-paced is, jam-packed with emotions, taking us, all the readers, including even the silent ones, on a roller coaster ride, repeatedly, is the mark of a true legend.

You are the like the showman of your narration, you are the lights, the camera, the cinmetographer, the writer, the make-up artist, the technician and every single person involved in the making of a blockbuster. You combine all of those efforts to come forward with a flawless piece, writing wise.

You have described a fictional character with such conviction that it is hard now,NOT to imagine her entry as such in the actual show.

You have given an opportunity to all readers to improve their vocabulary and clearly encourage the ones that are writing to top up their game, an inspiration and less of an intimidator is what they truly deserve.

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