PaRud TS::Ansh-A Thread holding them last part up PG11 [COMPLETED]

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

awesome update and fantastic end.

The scene when Parvati came back was beautifully written. Rudra's eternal love for her brought her back.

Ansh was so adorable and cute. He was so young but still he understood his father sorrow of losing his mother and cutely tried to fade it away by hugging him. He was truly a hope for Ruda's life and a part of parvati who took care of him as a dutiful son.

Love the reunion scene.

Love the ending.

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Finally a happy ending!

Aah I am so happy!

Thank you so much Sambhavi-Sa!

And yeah, the emotions were seeping throughout the whole chapter! Brilliantly written!

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Yeah happy ending! you did yourself proud - it was beautiful

perfect happy little family in their choti si duniya! I'm so glad you tied up the Maithali story too and she got to hug Ansh - so wonderful

fantastic 3 shot - waiting for you to finish your exams so we get more!🤗

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Omg this ending teared me up
beautifully written

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

I love happy endings and this one is really a beautiful ending...

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Yaay u updated! The last part was amazing! Loves the 3 shot OS! Simply brilliant!

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

This was the best part! Well done!

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Tannu

@Tannakstar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

This was phenomenol. I thought you paced the story very very well; for example, when comatose Paro was replaying all of Rudra's threats for her to wake up, you succeeded in building up enough tension for me to start cheering as soon as she called Rudra's name!

Love love love the description of Rudra's emotions, they're so heartbreaking.

Well done my dear, this was a fantastic three-shot :)

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

This was just so beautiful...
When she woke up I wanted to cry...
She fought and he fought to bring her back!!
You really did an amazing job with this.