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ICanDoThis

@ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

A really interesting storyline!
And so well written!!

Awww a cute babyyy

Im hooked!
I off to pg 7 for part 2 right now!

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ICanDoThis

@ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Brought tears to my eyes.
How old is baby?

Fantastic work

Looking forward to reading next!!!!

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deep0909

@deep0909

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

very nice. touching! from a story perspective, perhaps the monologue of Rudra could have been kept fewer. Your writing is powerful enough that we got the gist in the first 2 monologues. The rest were not needed in my opinion...

loved it and cant wait for the next part

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

superb.I totally liked the monologues of rudra.His restlessness,miserable condition was so touching.I really like such kind of scenes n u did it very well.

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jisa

@jisa

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

this was too good..
i was thinking on the same line..
this matched with my thought to the point...
but the way u showed rudra...hats off..!!

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

I just died twice of sadness, then cuteness 😆 The extent Rudra went to beg, i wanted to scream "WAKE UP DAMMIT!"

Ansh, i see has his mothers traits 😛

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gowri_19

@gowri_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

emotional one but loved it.. rudra pleading paro to open her eyes👏

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

lovely update. father son convo was awesome. that was a mind blowing emotional update.

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nee

@march2011

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

beautiful one,reading it as quickly as i can in office but couldn't stop the tears frm my eyes...its really an emotional one...hope mother doesn't leave