PaRud TS::Ansh-A Thread holding them last part up PG11 [COMPLETED]

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Khuarv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

I loved reading the three shot. The writing was awesome. The angst of Rudra was described very realistically that as a reader could connect with Rudra's pain. The relief on rudra's face on seeing her again full of life. It is a must read three shot.Hope to see more of your writing in the future.

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

loved it. 👏 👏 👏 I looking further for more writing of urs.

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

finally she is awake

Rudra has gotten his life back

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Very nicely done!!

Your idea of a comatose Paro, of a tormented Rudra, struggling to be a single parent...very interesting!!

And you wrote this story extremely well..especially when Paro regains consciousness...i loved how Rudra senses it at the exact same moment..

I see your name on the navarasas writers list...so looking forward to your OS there...

Cheers

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

beautiful OS. Poignant and heart warming

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sugarbird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

awesome update. was eagerly waiting for the update. lovely story. well written.

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nee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

wow wonderful work...full of emotions

u should try writting more,you have a talent

happy all aer together

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custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Very nice. A different side if Rudr. But when your loved one is going away you will do anything to get them back. Very emotional.

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rangprab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Awesome work... pAro and Rudra are adorable and Ansh is even more...

Brillaint, splendid 3 shot...

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Lavender mist

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

It was really heart wrenching to read the first two parts. Rudra's pain was so beautifully captured by you. loved the ending. lovely TS baisa. hope to see more from you.

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