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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You so so much for such an insightful and reflective comment! I love comments which show that the reader did not hold themselves back while giving feedback and that is always a great feeling for any writer!

You have very eloquently talked about the one touch between Rudra and Paro and analyzed the entire drabble around it, all of Rudra's changing emotions have this little moment with Paro at its center and I am stunned with not only your observational skills but also your will to look beyond what is written plainly and its beautiful to read! Thank You so much! :)

PS - I am so sorry for such short replies...as you know I have exams going on and I am supposed to be studying right now but taking a break, hence replying to comments! Please dont be disheartened and think I am being mean cos I really am not! I love your long, analyizing comments! :)


Guess agar ek hi ho jo aapke sabhi drabbles ke word count ko milakar respond kare toh it's hard to give it a miss!! Making me 😳😳 and ☺️☺️ at the same time is truly possible by your sweet, choti si replies, just like your drabbles.

A reader and writer have a bond which is hard to describe, with me pretty much in the fan-zone, I believe. Reader voh hata hai, jo ek hi nazar mein is able to analyze and quickly respond. Aapke chand shabd hi make me read each and every line multiple times, its the maagic, the hidden meanings that appeal to me, as a slow-reader, I must say !!

Appki writing skills is just not enough to impress, your prompt responses, your willingness to actually take them into account and respond to a response, shows the level of intimacy you can share with your readers/fan, you trust their views and their constructive critisism to utilize it in a manner suitable to only improve, your already exisiting, excellent writing skills. Respect is what is felt towards you, looking at the time you invest into taking back postive feedback from your readers, or so-called fans and then, you very sweetly apologize for your day or two late replies. This just takes our level admiration to a whole new level!!

P.S Now we know that you are addicted to IF like all other members, exams mein bhi nahi rok paa rahe ho aapki tez dhadkane ko, jo exam hall mein actually dhadakani chaiyae!!

So fans/readers ki taraf se All the best!!!! for your forthcoming exams, and results.




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2


Guess agar ek hi ho jo aapke sabhi drabbles ke word count ko milakar respond kare toh it's hard to give it a miss!! Making me 😳😳 and ☺️☺️ at the same time is truly possible by your sweet, choti si replies, just like your drabbles.

A reader and writer have a bond which is hard to describe, with me pretty much in the fan-zone, I believe. Reader voh hata hai, jo ek hi nazar mein is able to analyze and quickly respond. Aapke chand shabd hi make me read each and every line multiple times, its the maagic, the hidden meanings that appeal to me, as a slow-reader, I must say !!

Appki writing skills is just not enough to impress, your prompt responses, your willingness to actually take them into account and respond to a response, shows the level of intimacy you can share with your readers/fan, you trust their views and their constructive critisism to utilize it in a manner suitable to only improve, your already exisiting, excellent writing skills. Respect is what is felt towards you, looking at the time you invest into taking back postive feedback from your readers, or so-called fans and then, you very sweetly apologize for your day or two late replies. This just takes our level admiration to a whole new level!!

P.S Now we know that you are addicted to IF like all other members, exams mein bhi nahi rok paa rahe ho aapki tez dhadkane ko, jo exam hall mein actually dhadakani chaiyae!!

So fans/readers ki taraf se All the best!!!! for your forthcoming exams, and results.





Oh man! Ab iska kaise jawab de?!

I am feeling so overwhelmed and blushing so damn much right now! Aap ne na humein shabd mughd kar diya hai - I am stunned for words.

Thank You so so much! <3

And Thank You for the wishes! You are right, I am addicted! And I must do something about that! But for now - enjoy the next drabble in the series! ;) :D
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Comminucation of hearts via actions not words
As usual Paro hesitating and Rudra taking command !
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
I like to read the piece along with the companion..sorry, I am obnoxious like that..😃
So res-ing till the next part is up...

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Ok...to be honest, at first i was wondering how these two pieces are linked...and then my irritatingly slow mind realised...the reassurance...that they wordlessly give each other...
I am here for you, I belong to you and I will never leave you..

Contemplation was just lovely AT...
Her longing subdued by her hesitation to be openly affectionate...
And his silent message, which she can hear loud and clear
Sometimes gestures do convey so much more than words ever could...

I esp loved when you said "disgruntled" hand...what an apt word to describe her emotions..

Haaye...the bike ride...It had me going back to fond memories of curving roads, rushing wind, setting sun...
But ummm...personal musings aside..☺️

I loved all the little references - his and now theirs, helmet that he had fastened...
All of it clearly showing how the equation has changed between them..

I have loved all your drabbles in this series so much, I never imagined I would be able to choose a favorite...

But I think, gun to head, Contemplation would come to mind...
for the sheer feel-good factor..

I loved the anaphoric technique you employed so well...it just enhanced the overall reading experience!!!

Thank you for brightening up my weekend with this lovely drabble...

Love
Maya
Edited by What_the - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
She is going back to her real home.
Waiting for the next Drabble early.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Motorcycle rides - what better romance aid can their be? I assure you, none!

Nicely done - with one swift tug, all contemplation was put to rest, reassurance at its very best! (The rhyming was not intentional ;))


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Posted: 11 years ago
Did i say one of the previous drabbles was the best? It probably was, but this one deserves the same spot then. So many things expressed in a single line! We got a hot bike ride, handing-over of rights in the best way possible. I dont want your work to be plagiarized, but i seriously wish CVs pick up hints from your drabbles. The show will make much more sense then.
Edited by aruni50218 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana73

Comminucation of hearts via actions not words

As usual Paro hesitating and Rudra taking command !
Loved it


Thank You! :)

Love the first line! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
After reading the only thing came to my mind was the saying" actions speak louder than words".

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