| Mirror Images | Drabble Series ~ Last Drabble + Note - Pg56 (24/05) - Page 30

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Rae your subtlety in this Drabble is beautiful.

Her Bholenath was forced to give his blessings.

Writing from neither of their perspective, allows the reader to appreciate the overall mood of the moment better.

Originally posted by: mistyrains

This piece was outright simple, yet it conveyed everything it had set out to. The apprehension in Paro's eyes, and the anger in his eyes, his form , I could visualize all that. And the rain - the sign from the Gods , that struck to me as the most beautiful part ever. Most people might not have had faith in something like that, but Paro's character is intrinsic to believe in it.

Wonderful job, as always! :D

Originally posted by: neet2407

yeah - another beautifully written drabble! and yeah she will come back with him !

I'm glad Bholenath gave a sign and that Rudra refused to give her up and glkad she realised she has to fulfill her promises to Rudra too!

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2

Maybe, just maybe, she hadn't.

Kya, what she hadn't, what , what did she miss? This is the reaction I had while reading your drabble Maybe. "That's it, ab when is the next one? phew!!", I could not withhold the excitement, and thank god I have the opportunity to read the next drabble immdiately and I am not at all sorry for not reading it earlier, as the suspense was just too much too handle!!

125 words or so and my god, what impact!! Itni bechani your create for the readers even while moving theirs eyes from one word to another with visuals right in our minds, making us hungry for more. Really addictive and nail-biting not to forget, perfectly rhyming !!

The lesser the number of words, greater is the intensity? With each new drabble, you seem to only raise your own standards of writing, (it's tough to compare, aap ke jaisa unique koi nahi likhta) and leave us readers, sit back and enjoy, soak all of it while just taking a sip of chai!!

Cheers, aapki chai ki pyaali se meri takrati hui,

Sumneet

Originally posted by: aruni50218

Simple as that - couldn't they have this conversation BEFORE she left?? Could have avoided a LOT of heartbreak. 😡

Anyways, what about the last part? Please post the next part soon! Wanna know what happens

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Wow very beautiful update

The end was lovely, I love this line "He reminded her of her promises to him - silent and otherwise."

This is the most beautiful scene in the whole shot "And as the first drop of rain dampened her cheek, a smile graced her lips.

Bholenath had granted her wish."

👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: What_the

Res

Unres...

Such a beautiful confession..

No words needed...

The universe not only conspires for them to be together, the elements of nature are attuned to their love... the wind carries their silent confession to each other...

They are just meant to be, no matter how hard they try, they cannot restrain their emotions and their need to be with each other..

I esp loved this sentence:

he moment he had wiped her tears, and the moment she had allowed him to see them.

Yes, when we trust someone enough to share our sorrow and seek comfort from them, it is the best form of confession, isn't it?

The past, the future, nothing matters - when they have each other... perfect!

This series is just beautiful Angel!

Love

Maya

Originally posted by: peppygeek

Everything and more.