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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

👏 I only now have discovered these pieces. Masterpieces. You should be proud. You are very talented to convey such emotion in such few words.

I was enthralled by Fancies, in particular. It was masterful. Rudra at his most vulnerable. I have commented on other threads that I find Rudra's POV to be my weakness. The toughest characters are always the most interesting. You wrote that piece so well and it said everything it needed to. I was lost in it. Thank you! ⭐️

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

This is too good; both of them suffering same pain - dealing it with differently.

-Sona

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Great Drabble, ubahve managed to capture the emotions in so little words

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Omg u seriously are on a roll. Fantastic! :)

Thank You! :)

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Anjali Verma

@adi09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Loving it, keep it coming . You've got a good style which should be developed and expanded more.👍🏼

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: neet2407
Wow they are both so heartbroken and both of them hate the sound of the rattly bus - it connects them in their heartbreak - so beautifully put and you even put across that Paro is filled with some kind of bittersweet happiness that at least Rudra is alive and she did it for him , whilst Rudra is wallowing in loss and betrayal - perfectly showing their differences in character - that too in only 350 words!

Thank You so much! Glad that the emotions and the intricacies came across to you! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: LadyR
A few words can covey so many emotions. You capture the readers attention to experience her joy watching him sleep, his despair as he feels she has abandoned him...and yet not once have you mentioned them by their names!!

Ah...finally someone noticed that the two havent been mentioned by names til now! Lol! :D

Thank You so much! :)

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

I must say you redefine the term "A man of few words", you are the perfect version of "A woman of few words", your ability to leave us pondering about your work which we read in less than a minute pretty much shows what a wonderful impact you have through your piece of art!!

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago