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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I love that so many of my fav writers from ipk forum are here. Will comment after reading

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I loved this update. The sincerity of the emotions, his confusion about these new feelings. Just the way you have described him watching her sleep. We all know thd depth of Paro's love and her near-worship of Rudra. But his feelings are concealed beneath this gruff exterior. And unless you were an observer of their daily lives, as Maithli is, one could easily dismiss Rudra as an unloving husband.

I hope you continue to write more on RR.

Edited by SS88 - 11 years ago

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Like dark turning into day
Somehow we'll come through
Now that I've found you

Love will find a way

I was so afraid
Now I realize
Love is never wrong
And so it never dies

There's a perfect world
Shining in your eyes
And if only they could feel it too
The happiness I feel with you

They'd know

Love will find a way

~From The Lion King~

Welcome!
It was treat after a very long time..:)

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Beautiful! Hope you keep writing on Rudra and Paro!

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

You continue to weave magic with your words Misty ...

loved this one ...

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

It is beautiful. will u plz make the font a bit bigger. I want to reread the os once more, and this tiny font really hurts my eyes

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

You Are here!!! Welcome!
And thank you for this beautiful painting. Because that is what this is. Gorgeous shades blended so well in prose. 👏

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@guggu

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

There's no doubt about the fact that you are the most exquisite writer on this forum and your stories are a dazzling reflection of that. As always, this OS left me spellbound, and as I had reached the end, it left me wanting for more. You touch all the right chords, Sona! Simply beautiful!

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ReeDa14

@ReeDa14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Too Good! Wonderful..👍🏼

"...He could after all, just tell her she took hold of his, sometime during the night, he thought with a small smile playing on his lips." aww that was too adorable!!