SS: Unraveled. *COMPLETE* 22/4/14 - Page 10

Wow
AMAZING
However i really wish to part 3 aswell when he goes to bring Paro back
Please consider writing it...:):):)

Originally posted by: aruni50218

You turned sunhera! Congo baisa!

Loved the part 2. Rudra missing paro - there is nothing more i would like 😃

Niyoti🤗 You have a beautiful grasp of human emotions & make yr reader relate to your characters every thought and feeling.👏


Rudra's restlessness. the caged feeling of no knowing where she is, unable to ask nor share with anyone the tumult of emotions running within him & finally enlightenment. Loved it.

Absolutely beautiful Niyoti...👏.
you'll continue this, right?...I love where this is going...
Take care.🤗

p.s.don't you dare disappear on us again...

wow..so he has realised his love for Paro..and admitted his feelings..nyc update...👏

Wowowow.. i wish they can show this on tv

Niyo, I am sooo late on this thread 😭...but ayi tho sahi !😃 (thanks for the pm though i am angry with myself why i had to be pm ed to learn that u had updated...i shud hav checked the forum properly !)

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Niyo, I am sooo late on this thread 😭...but ayi tho sahi !😃 (thanks for the pm though i am angry with myself why i had to be pm ed to learn that u had updated...i shud hav checked the forum properly !)

this is fantastic...absolutely mesmerizing, downright heartwarming esp the epiphany moment...and so so convincingly rudra like ! i loved the way his thought spiraled around paro...how everything in their room reminded him her inseparable existence in his life...gradually it sprung to how he loved their clandestine physical proximity, the feel of her soft feathery body and how her body and soul aching from itz rude absence...and from there the at last he got the shock of his life, he was in love, all the time ..only never had the space to realize its worth !! darling ! I sighed in pleasure reading it...Twice in a first go,see i am feeling all mushy warm again, and butterfly kisses on my cheek ! i am sure many more rereading will follow and re interpretations will emergein my spare time.

but is this your own courteous way to say goodbye to us ?? a parting gift ?? oooh noo ! my brain knows u must do what is very important for ur future...itz just my heart that stomps its foot obstinately, refusing to let u go ! so plz listen adha adhi...both sides and visit us time to time when u r not so busy. ok ?

Originally posted by: niyoti

Shreya 🤗

So glad to see your feedback!

I think Paro and Rudra need space for him to realize the depth of his love for her. I was taking a break from studying and this was the result. I can't seem to stop writing though. You might see a part 3 up before the night is done.😳

Is this goodbye? Maybe a little bit. I won't be as active on the forum as before, but i will drop in occasionally and will keep an eye out for the pursuit threads.

Much love!

When ruda finally realused his love for Paro and began grinning, so did i :P. Beautiful - please continue